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Review: Maximum Ride by James Patterson

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I was drawn in by the blurbs on the jacket of Maximum Ride, and ended up really enjoying this mutant-teen-adventure on steroids.  James Patterson's book is well-written, well-crafted, and downright fun – especially when waiting endless hours in an airport for whenever your next flight might be.

Flight plays a big part in the unfurling of this story. The title character, Maximum Ride, is a 14-year-old girl leading a flock of others who all have been DNA-enhanced with avian abilities and features. They have wings, and they can fly – things that come in handy when being chased by wolf-like creatures called Erasers, also DNA-mutated into something superhuman, and when trying to find your identity after spending so much time being poked and prodded by the White Coats in the disinfected labs of The School. Max and her friends have escaped the confines of scientific research and really just want to find their place in this world. Don't we all?

There's adventure as Max and the others fight the Erasers, break into several lab facilities, and blow things up. Some find new abilities as they take flight, and others discover things about themselves in the midst of the stress and trauma of fighting for one's life. Like most good mutant/superhero stories, the reader is invited to break with logic and dive headfirst into the unknown while empathizing deeply with people who have amazingly heroic and noble powers.

I found that two other Patterson books start the story of Max and her friends — When the Wind Blows and The Lake House — and the second in this particular series is already out, School's Out Forever. I look forward to reading the backstory and then the next novel as well. 

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  • chrismon

    I found the fist book being drawn in by the author, that is I read others of his books. I did not realise it was a juivinile (as referred to in the publishing world.

    I will redthe next one (or rather listen to it as I do them all as audio/ books on tape/cd.

    If they don’t do the ending in 2 more books I will dump the series though.

    The problem with books likee this is they either take it too far, that is they stretcyh the story line out like a soap opera, or they end it too quick, and the ends does not justify the lenght twe go through to get the prise.

    Mr Patterson’s other books are great, so I feel this could be a keeper,(AS A SERIES).

    If they turn it into a Box Car Books series , or Animorphs, it is toast.

    The “save the world” concept has to ring out very loud in 1 or 2 more books, to be worth the effort one expends to consume it.

    If not it will turn into a waterdown sci fi of no consequence that parent will ignore and tell their kids to read something else.

    If the “Save the World/mankind” concept works and Mr Patterson is a great writer/conceptionalist, then he can end the book, maybe renew the characters and write a second group of books with a long plot.

    The problem is it becomes like “Dune” if you write sequal it may smell to much like the other, and then be a flop. I know very few people who have read them all, for a good reason, they peter out badly.

    Adults of a certain age and time(myself), remember watching Billy Mummy in “Lost in Space” we laugh at it. It is comical to look back on but here is the rub, it was not sopposed to be that way.

    When they did the pilot they needed a bad guy or it would become a “monster of the week” show. Friends and I discussed it for years and I made that observation, a friend then pointed out that, I was right, Smith was added for just that reason.

    The mistake was making Dr Smith too much (to use his term), of a NINNY!

    that show ran, but could have gone more, it didn’t because it had no bite by the end, and was pure farce, cheesie special effects not withstanding.

    Anyway I hope Mr Patterson, finishes up in 1 or most two books.

    Then he can put them in to hypersleep, or shoot them into the next reality. As far as I know this is his only Sci Fi, so if he does that I hope he brings along another SCI FI writter to carry some of the load.

    Harry potter is well written, but above all there are to be a finite number. You could pick up anyone and th etales are indidual, but linear. But they will end with the next book.

    After that Ms Rhowling can opt to start a new series, or, Put Harry in much more adult situations. That is my hope at this point.

    lastly I hope everyone gets a chance to listen to them all as Books on Tape. They are perfect for the medium, as the writing is rich and understandable. The use of Various readers to highlight various persons thoughts is nice, although for some that may not be so. I am also glad for the lack of musical backround as is done by some production companies. If it needs music to heighten the read, then it is not worththe time it takes to listen to it. The possible exception is at the begining and the end where it takes the place of swirly marbelised papers , or a single illustration in a hardcover book.

    I enjoyed the others I await in eager anticipation for the next one as spoken word.

    chris

  • Fly_Fan

    I really enjoyed reading this book and I think that it would make a great motion picture. I can just imagine the special affects having the “bird kids” flying around, just like the book. I really hope to see this in the theaters some day!

    I think that this movie would attract many young adults. I know that many of my friends would watch it because the feelings and emotions are so easy to relate to. Fang, Iggy and Max are all around my age and I totally understood every thought they had when something bid came up! I think that a movie from this book would be very successful!

  • Wow

    My friend recommended this book to me because she said the author was great. Once I started I became addicted and now have read all of them before her!

  • erin

    i love this book and i think it would make a great movie

  • Reyna

    I love this book series it is awesome and i love the writer james patterson my birthday was coming up and i love to read so my mom bought me this book it is amazing and i think that it would be a very good movie i like how james patterson would add a relatonshis in the book because a real fourteen would be going through the same thing you rock james patterson cant wait to read more of your books xD

  • Bobby

    I love all the books I hope it becomes a movie

  • Ali

    I love these books!!! I hope The Final Warning(fourth book) is not the final book in this series! These book made me fall in love with reading all over again. I can’t wait for the movie too!

  • christian

    OMG!!!This series of Maximum Ride is THE BEST SERIES OF BOOKS I HAVE EVERRR READ!!!I loved it so much,my dad bought me the first 1 and i am soon getting the others!!!!!!!!!MAXIMUM RIDE ROXXX!!!!!!I HOPE THEY MAKE A FRIGGIN MOVIE!!!LOL ~LUV YAZ~

  • srm

    IF THIS BOOK DOES NOT BECOME A OVIE I WILL SCREAM!!!!!!!I HAVE LOVED ALL THE MAXIMUM RIDE BOOKS AND ALL MY FRIENDS SAY I AM SO LIKE MAX!!! LOL.SO DOES MY CRUSH!!!i LOOK LIKE HER TWIN!!!IM SERIOUS!!!!

  • Fangfan

    I read each book twice now and Im lovin’ it I really hope that they make it into a movie somday it would be very exiting.

  • Fangfan

    Who here has read MR3?

  • Fangfan

    I have started reading these books ever since they came out. I will just flip out if they dont make it into a movie

  • Fangfan

    You know what…Im just going to have to tell you people this………….THEY’RE MAKING A MOVIE OM MR…..ISN’T THAT AWSOME?

  • Fangfan

    I just looked it up

  • Slash

    I REALLY hope they do not mess up this one. A lot of books that get turned into movies get messed up, badly. I can’t wait though. On another note, I’m an Iggy fan!

  • Fangfan

    I looked it up online and they said they are going to bring it out in theaters in about a year or so because they have to set up all the different scenes.And I also hope that they dont mess this one up like other movies.

  • BOB

    OMG! WE LOVE THESE BOOKS AND THEY HAVE TO MAKE A MOVIE ON THEM OR WE WILL BE SO MADD! I JSUT HOPE THEY DONT WRECK THE MOVIE! WE TOTALLY THINK MAX AND FANG SHOULD HOOK UP IN THE FOURTH AND (HOPEFULLY NOT FINAL) BOOK!

  • vick

    I can’t wait for the fourth book to come out on march the 17th. I am so excited, I also heard they are making a movie. The movie is going to be about all three books. BTW…I hope in the fourth book something more exciting happens between Max and Fang, not saying that their relationship is not exciting already though.

  • Fangfan

    They are making a 4th book!?I had no idea I really think that Max and Fang should REEEEEEEAAAAALLLLLLYYYYY hook up seriously.

  • http://NudgeGrrl Tammy

    I LOVE THIS BOOK! CAN’T WAIT FOR THE FORTH.IT WOULD BE AWSOME FOR MR.PATTERSON TO WRITE MORE BOOKS LIKE THIS! (HINT, WINK,NUDGE,NUDGE)

  • jessica

    the books surely are #1 they are for both teens and adults. they will diffenitly make good movies. and even better live action.

  • MRFan

    Hey! Oh my goodness are they seriously making a movie? When is it coming out? Can somebody let me know! And something more has to happen between Max and Fang…I hope the movie doesn’t get wrecked..because that would just ruin everything!

  • Fangfan

    Its coming out in about a year or so.

  • vick

    I heard that the movie is coming out in may 2008.

  • MRFAN

    AHH I LOVE THE MAXIMUM RIDE BOOKS. DOES ANYONE KNOW WHO IS BEING CAST AS MAX (IN THE MOVIE) OR ANY OF THE OTHER FLOCK MEMBERS!?

  • Fangfan

    I looked it up and it said that it was coming out in about a year.

  • quiltingcarrol

    I got hooked on these books thanks to my 16 yr. old daughter. Way to go James!! It is hard to find clean, fun, imagineable books out there. The teen series is much better than the adult version.
    We have bought the full hard bound set and I want a second set for myself when my daughter leaves next year. Max and Fang are quite the pair. They are fun to read about and the best part is that they have SOUL!! I give this a 10+ and will and have recommended them to all sorts of people all ages. Thanks again for a fun, clean read.
    47 yr old mom who loves to quilt,read and shares the same last name!!!

  • Slash

    Max and Fang are already heading that way. If one of you are surprised, reread book 3. I hope they dont slaughter this one like they did with the Eragon movie. I hope I dont need to go into detail with that one. Anyways, my best wishes to the making of the movie. And James Patterson, stay on top of those script writters so they dont mess it up.

  • Slash

    Also, Mr.Fan, it say who they cast as Max on their web site. maximumride.com

  • http://book tina

    i think its to good of a book to be made into a movie because the movie would ruin the book

  • syd

    I just got done reading the third book. Personally it ws the same exact thing as the second one. But omg i am so glad that Fang and Max are back together

  • MRFAN

    The best part in the third book is when max and Fang kiss…AHH! THEY TOTALLY NEED TO GET TOGETHER! But it is so sad when they seperate…that was the worst part of the third book.

  • amber

    I can’t wait until the movie, but all i know is they better make it good. I am also glad that max and fang get back together in the third book, it would of been so sad without them together again.

  • Max Wanna Be

    Ahhh!!! I can’t believe that they are making a movie but seriously i heard it was coming out next year? I can’t wait that long. I love the books so much and next year! AHHH all over again. I already pre ordered the 4th and hopfully not last book. I don’t know what I would do wihout them. and that’s coming from me who honestly hates to read besides this book series. I think this is the first book I read on my own since like last year!!! The movie could eaither be bad or if they put a lot of time and effort into it could be awesome with the wings, erasers and such. So COME ON JP KEEP AN EYE ON THESE PEOPLE!!!

  • tammy

    I don’t usually read many books because I don’t like to read, but when I read maximumride I loved it and couldn’t put it down. I have so far read all three books, and can’t wait for the fourth book to come out!! I heard there is also a movie coming out soon as I heard. I can’t wait for it to come out.

  • Reyna

    Man i luv dis book its awesome it was my birthday and my mom got me a book cuz i luv to read. I couldnt stop reading it i got dun with all three books in like two days and a half. Then i ran out of books and read the ones that inspired him to rite Maximum ride and there good to cant wait for the next book to come out.

    LETS FLY…….

  • MRFAN

    I agree, James patterson needs to make sure everything goes smoothly in the movie! If they cut out the kissing scenes between Max and Fang I will be VERY disapointed.

  • fangfan

    I really think that there should be some more private moments between Max and Fang

  • Fang’sgirl

    dudes I’ve read the books like three times b4 my mom like MADE me put them down. And I can’t wait 4 MR4 2 come out. mr3 like totally ending suddenly where they were lk leaving max’s house. dudes I really think that he should like not kill fang or max or any of the flock like (this is an idea mayb he shouldn’t do it) but make Jeb like get killed idk it would b like heartwreching and evrything but that would b so WEIRD nevrmind I even thought about it. I just hope he doesn’t like kill Fang Or Max.

  • Chantelle

    My dad was the one who really got me into these books starting with the Womens Muder Club, and I absolutly fell in love with the first book, the first chapter! Thank you Mr. Patterson, for having such an incredible writing imagination. I can’t wait for many, many more books!

  • PEACEKEEPPER

    I can’t recall how it came to here about James P. But I must say his writing keep me reading as often as possible. You see I worked two jobs and yet even though this was written for young adults, I found my self engulf in his world. It may have something to do with the fact that I like a TV show called DARK ANGEL, now noting that these are two different Maxs I still loved the layout. I hoping he gets the movie squared away so that we will have something more to look for & at to our collection of books.

    KEEP FLYING HIGH
    Maximum

    Peacekeepper
    ps. I wish he did podcasting

  • Slash

    I looked at the person playing Max in the movie and that is pretty darn close to what I pictured her. Though, on the cover of the third book, that is not what I pictured Fang to look like. But, what can I say, it is how JP pictures them and I respect that.

  • Slash

    More on such, did anybody see the Erasers? They went by too fast in the commercial for me to get a good look.

    May you fly free. (And your swords sharp).

    P.S.
    My two favorite books.

  • morgan

    I love these books.I got the first book at Christmass I wasn’t sure if to read it because of the cover. But I read it anyway it was the best book I ever read. Please don’t stop writing these books.
    Morgan

  • Slash

    Ok, Im definately going to be on this forum a lot, so if any of you have questions about MR, just ask! =) Besides, I dont anything else to do at school. 😉

    May you fly free. And your swords sharp!

  • Fangrulzz

    i hope the final warning is not the last book and i hope they make a movie because this is the best thing that has ever happened to this world!!!

  • http://www.myspace.com/plobuety4eva Aiya

    OMG I LOVE THE BOOKS , THE SERIES, THE ALL!!!!!!! I GET IT ONE DAY AND IM DONE IN A FEW HOURS. IM ADDICTED. JAMES YOU MIGHT JUT HAVE TO START A REHAB CENTER BECAUES DAY BY DAY SOOOO MANY MORE ARE BECOMING FEINS AND CANNOT STAND NOT KNOWING WHAT MIGHT HAPPEN TO THE FLOCK NEXT. YOU AUGHT TO COINSIDER STRETCHING THE TRILOGY SO ITS A SERIES AND AS THE FLOCK GROWS WE GROW WITH THEM AND KEEP THEIR EXPERIENCES IN OUR BACK POCKETS. I CAN HONESTLY SAY THAT I LOVE THE BOOKS AND I FEEL LIKE I JOIN THE FLOCK ON THEIR WONDERFUL (if u can call them wonderful ?) ADVENTURES. I FLY WHEN THEY FLY AND CRY WHEN THEY CRY. WHEN THEY HURT , I HURT AND SOOO ID LIKE TO END BY SAYING CONTINUE THE SERIES PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Slash

    <.< Chill with the caps. But yeah, he is a great writter.

  • Bananas & Cream

    I just finished mr3 and I just came onto this, didnt want to come and give away anything that might happen in mr3, I cant wait for mr4, and if you read the Eragon book, then saw the Eragon move, it sucked like majorly, I mean the Harry Potter movies were ok, not great but ok, Eragon SUCKED.. >.<#

  • Bananas & Cream

    <(‘.’<) Kirby can dance :P

  • Slash

    -_- This is for comments about MR. Mr. Banana. But what am I to say? c(‘.’c)

  • Bananas & Cream

    < ('.'<) <('.')> (>’.’)> Kirby

  • Bananas & Cream

    UGLY KIRBY!!! >.<* YOU DISGRACE HIM!! IT LOOKS LIKE A FISH!

  • Slash

    >=( I really hope you get gone for this. We are to talk about MR, not kirby, go to a kirby site or something.

  • Bananas & Cream

    But yes while Slash post “fish” isnt this blog type thing supposed to be about mr? well yes… mister fang is posting fish… how rude.

  • Slash

    -rolls eyes-

  • Bananas & Cream

    *giggles unappropitely*

  • Slash

    Whatev’ Like I said before, if any of you have questions about MR, I’ll be happy to answer them.

    May you fly free, (and your swords sharp!)

  • Bananas & Cream

    The whole Eragon quote thing at the end is totally not related to MR, so why do you even put it?? please tell me that…
    I like Tacos…Tyler Racey

  • Bananas & Cream

    My friend wanted to post something.. 😛

  • Bananas & Cream

    Whose a fan of who in this whole related story thing? i figured out that Slash happens to be an Iggy fan, i am a big Iggy fan too, who do you guys like the most??

  • Slash

    (sigh) Ive already told why I put that and it’s in (). Ive always put that in my post and I will not cease to do so. Ok, Im am not going to post anything to your nonsense and only answer questions and post updates on anything about MR. Good day to you sir!

  • Bananas & Cream

    Well why didnt you put it in that post??? huh.. hehe, well whenever i come up with a question i want to know about MR ill ask you Slash *voice dripping with sarcasam* hehe thats quoted in MR. 😛

  • Maxfan1

    I love the Maximum Ride Series!!!!! They are sooo interesting!!! Max is awesome!! They all are awesome!!! James Patterson needs to keep writing Maximum Ride books!! If he doesn’t… IDK wat i will do!!!!! I hav been waiting all year for this book to come out!!!!!

  • Maximumrideluver34

    The fisrt book is my fav! The second and third books are really good to! The fourth book is not good at all. i LOVE THOSE SEries and am sorry to say that the fourth book basically just says what James Patterson thinks about Global Warming and what we can do to help. This better not be the last book because i will be so SO ANGRY!!!!!! This book was way to short and had very little action! I say that James Patterson has totally failed and that all you people out there should rebell against the book. I think the book was not creative and just made so people could see what James Patterson says we should do about all this crap. (So called global warming…) I think Patterson better make another book soon or he will be thrown out of town! (lol… for once) The new book he should make should be that Max’s experation date has shown up, because nothing bad ever happens to just Max and i LOVE alot of capture of the main character. Even though i love the othe maximum ride books, this one shoulld of been redone or never published. Those who are maximum ride fans and want to get the fourth book, don’t waste your money. I know i have said this once , twice, and more but this book was not good and i think that the title: THE FINAL WARNING, had nothing to do with a final warning. Those who read this either disagree or agree with this fact: this book shouln’t even be compared with the others. Its is very not maximum ride-ish and Patterson, you have not did this for the readers to enjoy this book or to finish the series, you have simply wrote this book so you can get your view of Global Warming accross the Usa. I do not think this was a maximum ride kind of book.

  • Maximumrideluver34

    to bannanas and cream: my fav character is prob Fang and Max.

  • deborah

    I love Fnag just by his descrption.
    I also think Max is a strong 14 year old girl.
    P.s Patterson rules.

  • MRFan

    Just finished reading MR4. It was excactly like his others: suspensful, exciting, hilarious, action-packed and romantic Max and Fang!) WAY TO GO JP! and OMG…on his online interview he states that he is going to write a fifth book! YEAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • tammy

    omg!! JP is going to be writing a fifth Maximum Ride book I am like sooo excited!!!!!! He said in his interview that in this up coming book that Fang and Max’s romance keeps increasing right into book five. I can’t wait until it comes out!!! I love Max and Fang’s relationship and I think they need more alone time in the books.

  • tammy

    If anyone does know when the fifth MR book will be coming out????? please let me know.

  • MRFan

    Don’t know when the fifth MR book is coming out.
    And Maximumrideluver34…i totally agree with you…it was not like any of the other MAximum Ride books. I don’t want Max’s expiration date to appear in the fifth book though! It would be nice to see her get captured and then Fang can save her! :) There should be more private moments with Max and Fang.

  • tammy

    ya I totally agree there should be more private moments between max and fang

  • joseph

    big fan of MR these books are addictive cannot put them down

    p.s.when is the movie coming out

  • joseph

    yeah i also agree they should make fang be alone with max more often

  • joseph

    hey does anyone know when the mr5 comes out?

    p.s. james patterson also said that he might make a video game

  • MRFan

    A video game would be sooo cool! I would so buy it! I did not really like MR 4. It just wasn’t the same as the others. IT was like he decided to start a whole different series. It wasn’t Max and the FLock trying to find out about their pasts or destroying Itex. IT was about GLOBAL WARMING! If I wanted to read about Global Warming I woud read a Science Educational book. I understand he wanted to get the message across, but don’t do that in one of your book series! That just ruined it for me. I hope the fifth book is better. And if anyone is reading this right now and knows when the fifth MR book is coming out, PLEASE LET ME KNOW!
    Thanks,
    MRFAN.

  • joseph

    yeah i also agree with MR FAN that the 4th book just stunk i would give it about 6.5 stars out of ten not to mention it was too short

    p.s. the fifth maximum ride book will come out in 1 or 2 years it had better not be as bad as the 4th one

    fly on to excelsior!(excelsior means to go on to greater glory p.s.thats stan lee’s motto creator of fantastic 4 and the spiderman series so it pretty much means to fly to greater glory

  • joseph

    i am going to try and figure out were jp lives so i can send him a letter and ask him some questions about the movie, the book and the video game

    fly on to excelsior!

  • joseph

    for all you people out there ive found out that jp lives in palm beach florida home of the rich peoples (if anyone figures out his adress let me know) plus about the movie he isnt going to make it! no im just kidding in fact he has made a huge deal with the warner bros (if you dont know they are the top producing move company out there still hed better keep an eagle eye on them so they dont mess it up
    fly on to excelsior!

  • MRFan

    yeah. I know he lives in Florida…now only to find the address!
    And…1-2 years until the book comes out! ahh! I can’t wait two years…maybe 1 year, but definetely not two years!

  • joseph

    I found jp’s adress or actually his mail reader dude his adress is

    c/o author mail
    hachette book group USA
    237 park aveue
    new york NY 10017

    fly on to excelsior!

  • MRFan

    This is his mailing address? Really? Cuz i really wanna right to him!

  • joseph

    no MRFAN i said I would write to him and then ill copy his answers on this site

    fly on to exclsior!

  • tammy

    I LOVE MAXIMUM RIDE!!!!! It is like the best book ever. OMG!! Is that really james patterson’s address?? Anyway I can’t wait for the fifth MR book to come out, does anyone know the actual date of when the 5th book comes out???? Hope it is not actually in a year or two…I can’t wait that long to find out what will happen to the Flock next. I also hope that the fifth book is better than the fourth book, because the fourth book was really disappointing. The fourth book was nothing compaired to the first three MR books. All I know is that if it is going to take a year of two to write the fifth book it better be as good as the first three.

  • joseph

    actually tammy thats the adress of a person who reads jp’s fan mail because he’s too busy to read it himself

    fly on to excelsior!

  • MRFan

    Thanks Joseph. I’ll be waiting to hear what JP has to say!

  • joseph

    does anyone know when the video game comes out and on what system?

    p.s.i would think it would be easier to email him if you need different ways to contact him go to JP’s homepage go to books click on MR then click on contact

    fly on to excelsior!

  • joseph

    if the 5th mr book is as bad as the 4th mr book then there will be only 2 things that i want to know

    does total get wings big enough to fly with?

    does iggy get his full eyesight back?

    fly on to excelsior!

  • James

    I have read a lot of books and this had to be one of the worst.

  • gilli1455

    the 4th book was not very good. It only expressed his concerns on Global Warming. Grrrr… and it had no action, and really had nothing to do with the other 3. I swear, if the 5th is taking 1 to 2 years to write, and it isnt good, well…I’ll-well I’ll be really mad. But still, these books are very good. I dont think I can wait that long for the 5th one though. Hey, and for whoever found out the 5th book will be out in one to two years, will you tell me where you found that.

    Gilli Girl

    P.S. Who agrees that JP should stop making maax run away from Fang when he tries to kiss her? It’s getting really agrivating. She knows she likes him. Hmph. Well yea XP

  • Kiara

    The movie is coming out in 2010 it will feature the first three books. The fourth one might be in it but the producers are not certain as of yet.

  • joseph

    are you sure it comes out in 2010 i thought it would come out next year i cant wait that long and i have to agree with gilli1455 these are my ratings for all the mr books(1*=bad10*=perfect

    mr1 *********
    mr2 ********
    mr3 *********
    mr4 *****
    fly on to excelsior!

  • max’slover

    I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!!!!!!!I hope he makes a MR5.
    MAX IS SO HOT!!!!!!!peace out.

    p.s.
    here are my ratings
    MR1 10
    MR2 10
    MR3 10
    MR4 8 not enough action/romance

  • joseph

    you didnt hear they are going to make a mr5 a video game and a movie the book comes out in 1 or 2 years the movie either comes out in 2009 or 2010 and i dont know when the video game comes out

    fly on to excelsior!

  • Kiara

    I check a website that had information on JP and it had the movie releasing in 2010. I am disappointed to because I at first heard it was going to be released early but right now it is set for 2010

  • gilli1455

    2010????? Geez, I can’t wait that long. Has anybody ever gone to jamespatterson.com and sent him an email? If you did, did you get a response? I tried, asking some questions about the next book, but haven’t gotten a response yet. This was a couple of days ago. If you did, can you leave a note telling me about how long it took for the reader-person to respond? Thnx.

    Gilli Girl <3

  • max’slover

    neither can i.if i could have 3 wishes i would wish for the flock to be real, to be fang, and for mor abilities. if i wer fang i wouldve chased after max i mean who wouldnt.

    fly on

    p.s. i sent him an email and never got a response.
    p.s.s. nobody can wait for the movie to come out in 2010

  • max’slover

    srry my computer wsnt wrking.

    fly on

    p.s. hey gilli1455 tke a MR personality quiz if u
    hvnt im mst like fang 100%

  • max’slove

    is anybdy here 12-14?thats maxs age right i never could find it on the net or in the books.

  • max’slover

    i am but im not a grl.

  • joseph

    it says right on his sight that you could email him this is what it says ok it dont say much but it clearly states you can email him and besides with all the fan mail maybe he has not seen it yet but who knows

    p.s. thats crap i mean 2010 i cant wait that long

    fly on to excelsior!

  • 3/4

    I have read all of the Maximum Ride series, and after reading the fourth book, I was thoroughly disappointed. I believe if someone is an author, especially of a series that teens read,they should be an entertainer and appeal to their audience. I was automatically turned off by the whole global warming plot. As a teen it (global warming) should be something I care about but not something I want to read about in something I usually find entertaining. I also noticed there was not as much action as there was in the first three books. Reguardless of how I personally felt about the fourth book, I am looking forward to the fifth book with anticiaption.

  • joseph

    yes i agree with you 3/4 the fourth book was not entertaining only 6 pages of action (lepoard seal and hurricane scene) if they put book 4 in the movie with books 1,2 and 3 i will be very dissapointed it will ruin the movie

    fly on to excelsior!

  • MRFan

    Gilligirl…I totally agree that JP should stop makiing Max run away from Fang! they totally should get together!

  • Iceshadow

    there’s going to be a video game?!!?!?!?! THAT IS AWESOME!!!!!
    **there is going to be a movie on each of the books, they are not combining them into one whole movie.**

    Fly High and Fly Free
    -Iceshadow
    p.s. I agree with MRFan, fang and max should be together

  • gilli1455

    Ha ha Max’slover. I took a quiz that had five questions and apparently I’m most like Angel… I wish I was more like Max in some ways,but in sme I’m PERFECTLY happy being like Angel.

    Gilli Girl <3

    P.S. Still no response from JP’s fan mail reader person…

  • max’slover

    good for you.and yes the fourth movie will ruin the series.

    p.s.i sent that email 1 year ago!

  • MRFan

    IceShadow,

    How did you find out that there is going to be a movie on each of the books, not one on all of the books?

  • Green Zipper

    I read the first book by mistake. Picked it at a used book sale. Turned out to be the “Large Print” version, which was a little difficult to read. Once read I had to get the rest of the series and purchased the latest.
    I like all his series buy this one is the most fun.

  • max’slover

    I wish oz hadnt died in “the lake house”.he was my fav caracter.

    p.s. that is an adult book.trust me 3 parts are nasty but i liked em any way.(no im not a pervert)

  • joseph

    1 ive never heard of large print version 2 wheres that quiz thing 3 how did you find out that there will be a movie for each book 4 yes i agree they should stop making max run away from fang 5is the lake house a good book 6 oh i could go on forever with questions but ill give you pitty

    fly on to excelsior!

  • joseph

    i found that personality quiz and mine was weird it says i was 50% like fang 20% like max 10% like angel 10% like iggy and 10% like nudge thats like all of them together and only 36% of all people who do it get that response

  • http://www.myspace.com/yourdreamgurl4eva Alexis Herchen

    I’m almost done with the first book of Maximum Ride and i can’t stop reading it i think he is the best author and im going to read all his books. (hopefully)I hope he makes Maximum Ride into a tv show because i love that book!!!! he inspered me to read and now im going to read alot!!!!! I LOVE YOU JAMES PATTERSON!!!

  • max’slover

    1small print2 internet3internet4-5DAH!!!!!6just keep comin i got all the time in the world.

    :)

  • joseph

    trust me you wouldnt want to know how many questions i have but ill tell you anyway 1 ive never heard of large print version 2 wheres that quiz thing 3 how did you figure out there would be a movie for each book 4 yes i agree they should stop making max run from fang 5 is the lake house a good book 6 if each book is made into a seperate movie will it change the realease time 7 how many books will there be 8 ive heard rumors there will be twelve 9 about how long is the movie 10 will there actually be a video game 11 when will it come out 12 what systems will it be on 13 are you sure the movie comes out in 2010 14 if not when 15 when will the 5th mr book come out 16 in 1 or 2 years 17 will it be about global warming 18 will it be as bad as the 4th one 19 about how long will it be 20 will it be long like the first 3 or will it be short like the 4th 21 why do you like max so much 22 why are you obsesed with fang 23 who plays max in the movie 24 who plays fang 25 who plays gazzy 26 will they use special effects to make the farting noises 27 will they give him a gas pills to really make him fart 28 how do the erasers look 29 how will they make the erasers look real 30 who plays nudge 31 who plays angel 32 who plays iggy 33 who plays jeb 34 will they leave the kissing scenes out 35 will tey do it in animation ive heard rumors that it might. right back at you

    fly on to excelsior!

  • max’slover

    answers
    1its small print 2 on the net 3on the net 4- 5OF COURSE ITS BY JP!!!!! 6yes 7 i don no 8?! 9 around 2 hrs 10I hope 11i don no 12? 13yes 142010 15? 16probably 1 17no 18hopefully not 19? 20? 21I HAVE NO FREKIN IDEA!!!!i just do 22im not 23? 24?25? 26? 27? 28like were wolves 29? 30? 31? 32? 33? 34 hopefully not i love the romance 35?
    there ya go i answered all of em in les than 5 mins ask more if possible im bored

    :)

  • MRFan

    AHHH I LOVR MR!
    If you are reading this JP please make the fifth book like the 1st 2nd and 3rd. Those were more action packed and had a better story line than the fourth I thought. I want it to go back to being the FLock on the run, getting chased by Flyboys and Erasers…trying to find out their parents …etc…

  • joseph

    you didnt answer them you put ? for most of them and yes mrfan we agree it should be like the 1st 2nd and 3rd

    fly on to excelsior!

  • James

    you people have no lives

    It is just a book.

    get a life really

  • http://canadiancinephile.com/ Jordan Richardson

    Who has less of “a life,” James? Somebody that needs to post online to diss others or somebody discussing something they enjoy?

  • tammy

    Hey James, if you think people that enjoy this book don’t have a life then your wrong, don’t forget this is a blog to discuss about the book not to diss it. Why are you even writing comments if you don’t like the book?

  • James

    you have your opinions i have mine

  • joseph

    its a good book you just have to read it and i agree with jr and tammy

  • MRFan

    I agree with Joseph, tammy and JR. Nice comments.

  • joseph

    is that sarcastic i mean mines only 17 words and yes i agree with everyone you shouldnt diss a book before you readit

    fly on to excelsior!

  • http://canadiancinephile.com/ Jordan Richardson

    James, the problem is that you didn’t say anything about the actual book and just decided to stop by and diss people who happened to be discussing it. That just seems really stupid and unnecessary.

  • joseph

    i agree with jr

    p.s. you know how to get straight to te point

    fly on to excelsior!

  • James

    LOL look how mad people get when you mess with them.

    I really did read the book and it wasn’t that bad,
    I just wanted to see peoples reactions if I wrote a bad comment about it.

    p.s. you people are so defensive…

  • joseph

    you have your opinions and i have mine

    hehehehe

    fly on to excelsior

  • http://canadiancinephile.com/ Jordan Richardson

    James, I don’t remember you mentioning anything about the book. Could you point me in the right direction?

  • joseph

    hey i just figured out the director of the movie but first im gonna let you get all mad and then ill tell you

    mwa ha ha ha mwa ha

    p.s. hehehehehehe

    fly on to excelsior

  • joseph

    this is to max’slover dude i saw what max will probably look like in the movie and i have to agree she is SO hot

    fly on to excelsior

  • James

    to show you proof, in book 3 max battles omega, and finds out Dr.Martinez is her mom nad Jeb is her dad.

  • tammy

    Does anyone know who will play Fang in the movie yet?? If anyone knows please notify me.

    thx in advance

  • super apple pie

    idk who will play fang, but i hope the actor is good

  • joseph

    i dont know who plays any of the actors but i know who the director is

    fly on to excelsior

  • joseph

    you know what would make the 5th book REALLY good is if max figures out theres a traitor in her flock and she realizes its fang and he was only kissing her to get her mind off of how the erasers were tracking them so easily (plus all the flyboys tracked fang’s group when they split up but not max’s) so she has to fight fang to the death but this time she has to kill she cant leave fang alive

    fly on to excelsior

  • tammy

    no affence but I don’t think that making Fang the traitor of the Flock will make the 5th book interesting. I don’t want that to happen, and have Max get her heart broken.

  • fdhsaj f

    So not cool!

  • MRFan

    I already know who the director for the movie is anyway.

  • joseph

    okay now that you explain it in some ways i actually have to agree with you it would make the 5th book way too emotional but i am saying that if there were a traitor it would most likely be fang

    p.s. mrfan if you know who the director is tell me ( i know who it is but im not sure you know)

    fly on to excelsior

  • lee

    how can i get all of the books except the one about Global Warming.
    I have looked in WalMart and a few other places and don’t find them anywhere.
    Please let me know as soon as you can.
    This series will make a great movie!!!!!!Way to Go Mr. James Patterson.
    I have been reading your adult books but I believe you have stumbled onto a great idea here!!!!Sorry no url if the email address don’t work
    Lee

  • max’slover

    I told you she was hot and you idnt believe me:(
    by the way who is the director???plez tell me…
    by the way what guy shouldnt love max…hehehehehe
    and i dont think fang should be the trator i think it should be iggy or gazzy.

    fly on

    p.s. anybody got any Q’s i love to post so ask away

  • gilli1455

    I think that making Fang a traitor is a TERIBLE IDEA!!!!(no offense, i know its ur oppinion). but still, fan and max need eachother, and that would just screw everything up and would turn the series into crap. first the global warming book the Fang The Betrayer book, well that would stink. i agree with max’slover that if there was gonna b a traitor it should be Iggy or Gazzy

    Gilli Girl <333

  • max’slover

    thanks gilligirl anybody else agree wiyh me:)

  • max’slover

    by the way lee the first series wuz better cuz of max n oz

  • MRFan

    Joseph: The director is Avi Arad. He did the Spiderman movies, X-men and Fantastic Four.

    For everyone else out there: I TOTALLY AGREE THAT FANG SHOULD NOT BE THE TRAITOR. I don’t want anyone to be a traitor in the Flock. But if there HAD to be one…hmmm I don’t know who I would like it to be.

  • max’slover

    thx MRFan

  • tammy

    I agree with MRFan I wouldn’t want there to be a traitor in the Flock.

  • max’slover

    but he said there wuz tammy

  • Atlas

    if fang were the traitor then the series would pretty much be over because that would stop alot of stuff like max and fang’s romance.

  • joseph

    mrfan i thought he would be sam rami he was also the director of the spiderman series who knows maybe they might work together and ive changed my mind about wanting fang a traitor but here are some reasons why he could possibly be a traitor

    1 when they split up all the fly boys went after fangs group not maxs

    2 he never has the urge to actuall y kill an eraser everbody else does proof max kills ari the gasman and iggy kill tons aka bombs angel makes erasers fall right out of the sky and nudge pushes an eraser onto the third rail in the back of book one

  • tammy

    Did JR actually say there was going to be a traitor in the Flock? I still Haven’t changed my mind of having Fang be the traitor. I don’t agree with that.

  • joseph

    well tammy it does say in mr 3 exact quotes again fang looked down at the screen, at the message just like the one he’d recieved yesterday. one of you is a traitor, it read. one of the flock has gone bad.

    p.s. and if you still dont believe me get mr3 pg18 ch4 at the second to last paragraph

  • Atlas

    it is true that the erasers followed fang’s group but max and her group were already caught so why would they follow them?

  • joseph

    no i meant before they were caught read chpts 62 -87 and you see max’s group never saw one flyboy while fangs group got at least 500

  • Atlas

    oh and it also says that Max was wondering that too

  • max’slover

    but still iggy and gazzy were with him too and their good at actin

  • joseph

    if youve read fangs blog it says he gos to virginia to look for his possible parents and they got no erasers when that happened until he came back

  • max’slover

    true.

  • joseph

    see

  • tammy

    I just hope if there is a traitor it’s not Fang. That would really suck.

  • Jordan

    OMG! I absolutely LOVE the MR series. Surprisingly, I just started reading it this saturday and finished every book! Dang, I cant wait 2 years for the movie AND next book! I am going to go insane! By the way, if they’re was a traitor, I could understand if it was Total, but it would suck if it was! But they didnt even find Total in The School, so it struck me as weird. Voicing my opinion, also I agree that Max should so stop running from Fang! And a question: what is the girls name who plays Max? I know she is the voice of Amy Rose in Sonic, and she is in the commercials…hmm…

  • MRFan

    Joseph, when you say that Fang never had the urge to kill an Eraser…I think you’re wrong. He HATES Ari. I thought he always wanted to kill him. What about that?

  • joseph

    sure he hated ari but did he actually kill him he could have in the second book aka rip the wings make him fall

  • tammy

    I don’t think Fang is going to be the traitor in the Flock as most ppl say, because first of all he wanted to kill Ari because he hated him so much just as MRFan said. Second of all Fang does have real feelings for Max and is not just pretending to like her. In the third book he was really upset when Max ran away from him just as he was about to kiss her again. Anyway thats my opinion on this whole traitor thing.

  • max’slover

    YEAH TAMMY FIGHT FOR FANG JUST LIKE EVERYONE ELSE(except joseph)

  • joseph

    first of all good point and i dont think your getting my wrong idea i dont want fang to be a traitor but if there was it would sort of add up to fang or the second most lik4ely to be a traitor is i dont have a clue

  • max’slover

    uhhhhhhhhh……….Ok

  • Atlas

    Why would anyone think there was a traitor in the first place??

  • whoami?

    All the characters from the MR series are based on characters from Patterson’s other books (When the Wind Blows and The Lake House)

    Icarus=Iggy (both are blind)
    Ozymandias=Fang (In love with Max)
    Max…=Max (in love with Oz/Fang
    Peter=Gasman (without the gas issue)
    Wendy=Angel

    Although the first books that MR is based one are a LOT more adultish, i did like them better.

  • joseph

    cause certain events add up to detail that there might be a traitor thats your answer atlas

  • whoami?

    IF there was a traitor it would be fang

    but when fang got that message that said someone would traitor you… i think it meant the max clone

  • MRFan

    Joseph: I don’t think it was that easy to rip his wings.
    I agree with Whoami? When Fang got the message it probably meant Max II.
    I agree with Tammy and MAx’slover…I don’t think Fang will be the traitor. I think he actually likes Max, not using her.

  • joseph

    think about it the max clone came before they got the computer the max clone came near the end before they broke into itex and the computer came from itex so unless someone gave it to them which no one did they didnt even use the computer until the third book proof the max clone came in the second book chapter 123 and the message came in the third book chapter 4 the very last sentence check it see there in 2 different books so it couldnt mean the max clone

  • tammy

    Ya I don’t think that Fang is using Max either

  • Atlas

    the message could be talking about angel when she spied on jeb and everyone one because they thought she was a traitor until max told them what she was doing.

  • joseph

    well that does have a good point atlas so she could be a traitor heres a list

    max no way there wouldnt be a book series
    fang possibly a suspect
    iggy no way he loves killing erasers
    nudge actually she could be a suspect
    gasman same as iggys
    angel possibly a suspect
    total possibly a suspect

    so that actually leaves 4 possible traitors out of 7

  • whoami?

    total?

    no way

  • whoami?

    what i want to know is who had the idea that someone would traitor?

    I doubt anyone would traitor, even if suspicious events lead up to it, unless you heard it from Patterson.

  • joseph

    good point

  • whoami?

    does anyone know who started this traitor crap?

  • max’slover

    well now that i think about it total could be the traitor.

    p.s.I am writing a book like maximum ride and the only character i use is max.uhh…dont ask why i just am OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh and corey(from menlo) this is me dont ask at school monday alrigt.

  • whoami?

    if total was a traitor i would just stop reading the book.

    I would also think when Max saved total she should’ve let him die then… you know when he was falling? (2nd or 3rd book)

  • whoami?

    what i wanna know is who is playing max and the others in the movie?

    the casting isnt on the website anymore and if you put it in the earlier comments… not gonna read it all just so i can figure this out.

  • whoami?

    wow i just heard the most disturbing news…

    they might make this movie an animation… saw it on wikipedia so i might be wrong. (hope i am)

  • whoami?

    just noticed when i compared characters from Patterson’s other books to MR left out Nudge.

    Guess he is kinda the only one he made up whem making the MR series.

  • whoami?

    Guess SHE

  • whoami?

    PAY ATTENTION TO THE FOLLOWING IF YOU HAVE EVER READ When the Wind Blows OR The Lake House:

    anyone know if they gonna make a sequel?

  • MR ROX!!

    i love this series. its hard for me to actually find a book i like. i havent been able to put the books down once i get started. but i agree. jp really should stop making max run away from fang. i want to see wat happens. they would b awesome together. but fang needs to stop tryin to make max jelous. its gonna make her hate him.

  • tammy

    I agree with you MR ROX Fang should just stop making Max jealous.

  • joseph

    i also agree

  • MRFan

    Yeah.

  • Atlas

    i’m not sure if he is trying to make max jeleous because he was just talking to the other girls but max took it a different way and also the reason people are talking about traitors is because in book three fang gets a message that one of them is a traitor.

  • whoami?

    im with atlas, he isn’t trying to make her jealous he is simply getting picked up by other woman since max keeps running.

    and its kinda getting annoying that she always runs away ><

  • iluvfang

    I didn’t really like the fourth book, and I CANNOT wait until the fifth one, I looked up the movie, and found nothing sadly, other than the fact that they are making one… no cast or anything. Hopefully they will make it GREAT! newho. Who else here seriously loves… TOTAL!?!? jk jk… but i just wanted to bring up the issue of… the fifth book! Who is going to die? because that would totally make for a GREAT page turner. or not completely die, just come very very close to death…

    like others i also found the Max and Fang relationship the most exhilarating part of the whole book. I was not very happy with the ‘Global Warming’ part of it, because Frankly I am SICK of Global Warming, because I just got done writing a five paragraph essay about it… and when I read a book I would like to go to read something that ISN’T global warming. But I REALLY REALLY love this series and I cannot wait until the 5th and the movie

    Adios Amigos

  • joseph

    i think i figured out the cast but who knows

    angel-conchita campbell
    the gasman/gazzy-dylan sprouse
    max-kristen stewart, (did dye her hair blond once i think for this movie)
    nudge-parker mckenna posey
    iggy-michael welch (i know hes old but still)
    fang-tyler posey
    ari-jon foster
    ter borcht-vin diesel
    jeb-john schneider
    director-terry gilliam
    dr martinez-lauren graham
    ella- morgan york

  • joseph

    whoa i loked up on the actors and there like very serious i mean the person who plays angel has been in over 5 movies and shes like 7 years old the person who plays fang has been in comercials since he was 5 the person who plays gazzy is one of the stars in the suite life of zack and cody and the person who plays iggy has been in several tv shows examples csi,csi miami,cold case,ect

  • whoami?

    do you have the website where you found these? I would like to know… thanks

  • whoami?

    I’m kinda with iluvfang… becuase sorry to break your heart but for i have a good idea that in one of the upcoming books fang might die (not the next one)… but i might be wrong… dont have any source where i got it from.

  • joseph

    type in maximum ride movie cast and click on the one at the bottom or the one that says best mr cast

  • whoami?

    in google?

  • whoami?

    yeah kinda looked it up but got lost… could you just make a url?

  • whoami?

    just found it.
    thanks

  • whoami?

    you know that could be the wrong casting that is just what someone said would be the BEST casting, but its there opinion.

  • joseph

    but still you got anything better

  • whoami?

    nope :(

  • whoami?

    heard though that the movie might be an animation like beowulf… and we all know how much that movie sucked.

    you talk, you die.

  • MRFan

    Joseph: How did you find these cast members?

  • tammy

    I disagree with you whoami?, Fang shouldn’t die in one of the next books to come or the book wouldn’t be as interesting anymore. Besides many people like to read the maximum ride books because of Fang and Max’s romance and it wouldn’t be the same MR serious without him, that would suck if it ended with fang dieing. I also hope that the MR movie is not animated that would be really stupid. By the way has anyone found out when MR 5 is coming out yet?? If anyone knows please notify me, thanks.

  • whoami?

    1-2 years tammy

  • whoami?

    Oh and MrFan he didnt really find them it was someones opinion on who should play the parts… it is most likely incorrect.

    you talk, you die

  • tammy

    I can’t wait that long for the 5th MR book to come out. I want to know what will happen next.

  • joseph

    like i said before you got anything better and still i have a movie that has kristen stewart in it and she does look like max with different hair color

  • joseph

    ive learned that actually nobodys been casted yet and that the movie might come out in 2009 but that is a big maybe

  • whoami?

    no they have a max becuase in that little movie thing for the book, that is the actor that plays max, and Kristin Stewart is not her.

    you talk, you die

  • joseph

    how do you know

  • joseph

    ive created a quiz to see which of the flock you are most like anybody can take this trivia

    1.one of the flock is kidnapped what do you do?
    a follow them
    b silently follow them plotting revenge
    c talk about how to get them back
    d blow them up
    e read there minds…oh thats where there going
    f there related to you so cry

    2.jeb is following you what do you do?
    a get away you have to take care of the flock
    b kill him traitor
    c follow orders but ask lots of questions
    d blow them up
    e read his mind but keep the answers to yourself
    f just do what youre told

    3.max is hearing voices what do you do?
    a you are max
    b keep quiet but think things are wierd
    c gab about what it is
    d try and blow it up
    e talk to her about it
    f do what youre told but think its wierd

    4.whats youre motto?
    a keep the flock safe while saving the world
    b no motto just go with the flow
    c blah blah blah blah
    d blow things up
    e read there minds know what they think
    f follow iggy

    5.erasers attack what next?
    a check the flock for safety then attack
    b fight
    c calmly talk them out of fighting
    d blow them up
    e control there minds and make them run away
    f either follow iggy or fight

    6.you are lost in ny how do you get out?
    a walk until you get out
    b just sit back and follow orders
    c calmly rationize with a voice or else SHOPPING SPREE
    d bomb youre way out
    e read someones mind for a way out
    f follow orders

    7. fang has a relationship with max how do you handle it?
    a youre max fang loves you ick
    b youre fang youre dna enhancd heart goes . . ……………….
    c gab about it
    d try and blow it up
    e you know about cause you read there mind
    f you think max has lost all connection to the world

    8.ari is dead how do you feel?
    a guilty you didnt mean to kill him
    b ha ha he tried to kill you
    c just talk about it
    d mad you didnt get to blow him up
    e somewhat sad
    f happy he kidnapped youre sister

    9.ter borct is interrogating you what do you do?
    a be a smart aleck
    b dont talk at all
    c gab about youre name
    d try and blow him up
    e make him see red ants on his face
    f tell him to kiss youre butt

    10 youre in antartica how do you feel?
    a mad its sso ccccollld
    b strong and silent
    c gab about how white it is
    d happy you can see whiteness
    e EXTREMELY HAPPY those fluffy penguins
    f sort of in the middle

  • tammy

    That is aatually a really good quiz Joseph.

  • joseph

    you do know that youre supposed to put youre answers down

  • whoami?

    joseph i know kristin stewart isn’t her becuase the person in that movie thing doesn’t look anything like her.

  • whoami?

    and nice quiz

    you talk, you die

  • joseph

    whatever

  • joseph

    whoa we said the last comment at the same time

  • joseph

    and you are supposed to put youre answers down on this site so i can give the answer

  • MRFan

    Okay Joseph how do I check my score on the quiz? I got mostly A’s.

  • joseph

    this is how you check it a=max b=fang c=nudge
    d=iggy e=angel f= gazzy since you got mostly a’s that means youre most like max

  • MRFan

    Thanks

  • joseph

    heres a different quiz this tests how much you know about mr

    1. which of the flock was kidnapped?
    a angel
    b max
    c fang
    d nudge

    2.what does max do when shes mad
    a be a smart aleck
    b punch inanimate objects
    c swear
    d all of the above

    3. what do they call half wolf half human mutants
    a wolves
    b erasers
    c freaks
    d hairy people

    4. how old is nudge
    a 15
    b 14
    c 6
    d 11

    5. what is the name of the prison where they grew up
    a the institute
    b the school
    c itex
    d food lion

    6. who is maxs half brother
    a ari
    b jeb
    c fang
    d uber director

    7. whats the name of the huge giant creature in mr4
    a uber director
    b jeb
    c gozen
    d flyboy

    8.what was the name of the restraunt in ny
    a garden tavern
    b garden wonders
    c garden lantern
    d garden deli

    9.what are the flying robots called
    a flymen
    b flyboy
    c erasers
    d gozen

    10. who has a RELATIONSHIP
    a max and fang
    b max and iggy
    c angel and gazzy
    d none of the above

    11.which of the flock is blind
    a iggy
    b fang
    c nudge
    d angel

    12.which of the flock reads minds
    a nudge
    b fang
    c angel
    d max
    these next three are hard
    13. whats the name of the hacker kid
    a bob
    b mike
    c chad
    d charlie

    14 whats the name of the director
    a marian janssen
    b ter borct
    c marian jasy
    d jeb

    15 what recombiant is the director
    a hawk
    b turtle
    c fish
    d none of the above

  • max’slover

    hehehehehehehe joseph that was way to easy try one way harder one and ill still do great perfect score

  • max’slover

    good job but i just checked and i got a perfect score try again

  • tammy

    though’s quiz’s are totally to easy.

  • whoami?

    you know the nexy book is about the flock finding other kids that can fly i think.

    you talk, you die.

  • whoami?

    by the way in the movie erasers arent played by actors they are animated.

    you talk, you die.

  • joseph

    ive got something to say well people who liked the mr series i suggest you read among the hidden it is a great book ive almost read the whole series its more futuristic and suspensful than actiony its about a time when earth does not have very much food so the population has to be decreased there is a special police called the population police a general law is that people can only have 2 children and the main charachter is a third child it actually relates to the mr series erasers=population police flock=third child

  • whoami?

    my cousin in 5th grade read that book and said it was reaaaaaaally gay.

    by the way joseph i got B,B,B,A,D,F,F,E,A,A on your first quiz and scored a 100 on the other. That makes me Fang/Max… O.o interesting…

    you talk, you die.

  • whoami?

    oh yeah the population police kill them all in the end i think.

    you talk, you die.

  • joseph

    well thats your cousins oppoinon and no thats not the ending but i want tell you

  • whoami?

    joseph the closest thing you can get to MR is When the Wind Blows since it has everything

    school
    max
    flying kids
    etc

    though you shouldn’t read this book unless your 17 or older since it contains mature content.

  • IN LOVE with the flock!!!!

    i was so excited when i found out that they are making movies for MR! Hopefully the MR series will open peoples eyes about our dear mother earth dying because of all the governmental “higher ups”. Our world was meant to be beautiful, plentiful, and shared by all…..money shouldn’t be such a barbaric achievement! Peace, love, helping one another. If only we lived like the native Americans had before they were slottered by selfish, lying, immagrents. Natives lived along side mother earth! Respect was a major asset, now a days if you raise a brat respect is nowhere in their vocabulary. its truly a sad fact that so many people today only think about themselves other than the greater good for all. Please tell me I’m not the only one who wants to take back the old ways of our ancestors and restore this world to its natural state.

  • whoami?

    James Patterson on his own blog O.o

  • whoami?

    nice disguise

    you talk, you die.

  • whoami?

    well i would like to do something but im kinda 14 and when it costs money to be get one of those recycle things… if the city wanted to recycle so bad it should just be free.

    you talk, you die.

  • whoami?

    The actor that was suppose to play Max in the movie was Amy Rose but she only played the part in the commercial which means that she is not gonna play the part in the movie… so, so far no one knows who is playing Max in the movie. So Joseph Kristen Stewart might have a chance.

    you talk, you die.

  • whoami?

    Yes, the movie is an animation and it is most likely to come out in 2010-2012.

    you talk, you die.

  • joseph

    animation oh man that stinks just trying to save money and idont care if when the wind blows is for 17 and up ill read it anyway and i told you so and i figured out how to contact jp

  • whoami?

    im not stopping you from reading it but you’ve been warned O.o

    It really was a great book and he kinda cooled it down (its not that bad as in inappropiate terms) in the sequel The Lake House.

    you talk, you die.

  • night rider

    so what like i said erlier i dont care if its for 17 and up and who got this motto thing started anyway

  • max’slover

    whoami? im 12 and i read that book cause it looked good.I recommend it to peolple even though all the cussin and the #@^$ing that goes on.it is really good thogh.so be at least 13 or up to read when the wind blows and 15 to read the lake house unless youre perverted (which im not).

  • whoami?

    the Lake House wasn’t that bad it was less descriptive… like i didn’t even know they were doing it until she put her cloths back on.

  • whoami?

    I’ve read alot of Patterson’s books:

    mr1

    mr2

    mr3

    mr4

    When the Wind Blows

    The Lake House

    And im almost done with Along CAme a Spider

  • tammy

    I have only read the MR series and I would like to read the other ones too. BTW are they really making the MR movie animated?? If they are it is really going to suck.

  • tammy

    I have only read the MR series and I would like to read the other ones too. BTW are they really making the MR movie animated?? If they are it is really going to suck.

  • whoami?

    yeah its gonna be like beowulf and that movie sucked so much. Waste of my dam money.

    you talk, you die.

  • whoami?

    Max’s lover your not perverted if you read a novel and your under age limit, unless you read a novel about people @#$%ing. I thought When the Wind Blows was a lot worse than The Lake House, and i gotta say The Lake House is my favorite book.

    you talk, you die.

    p.s. Your perverted if you only read the book becuase of the $%^&ing in it.

  • Steven

    I also heard that they were going to animate this movie and that sucks because animated movies are never as good.

  • none of your business

    If they make a movie i hope they don’t destroy it like they did the eragon movie, because the book was nothing like the movie.

  • max’slover

    true but one of my friends read it for that and man is he the most perverted guy youll ever meet i swear if he talks about it again youll see me in YDC.and yes the lake house is my fav book.and i didnt either until it said they wer sweatin.

  • tammy

    Is the Lake house and As the wind Blows really that good of books to read??

  • Maddy

    Are the lake house and when the wind blows really that perverted because i haven’t read them yet and im 14

  • whoami?

    There not that perverted and yes tammy they are really good books to read, i liked them better than MR.

    you talk, you die

  • Maddy

    thanks

  • whoami?

    Another great book to read my Mr. Patt is Along Came a Spider

    Its about a guy named Alex Cross that gets assigned to a case where a killer named Gary Sonjei kindaps to famous peoples children, Mary Rose Dunne and Michael Goldberg. Alex Cross falls in love with someone from the Secret Service named Jezzie Flanagan. She retires from the secret service for reasons she tells Alex which are lies. In the beginning Gary Sonjei accidently kills Michael Goldberg. In the middle of the book he is thrown in jail but Mary Rose Dunne is still missing which means that someone got the ransom money that he was suppose to get and the people that took her are cops.

    to find out the rest read the book O.o

  • fernanda

    I LUV THE THE MAXIMUM RIDE BOOKS I READ ALL OF THEM AND I CAN NEVER PUT THEM DOWN THERE SO ASWOME!!!!!!! I LUV IT MORE THAN ANY OTHER BOOK.
    XOXOXOXO!!!!!!!

  • whoami?

    i’ve started reading Kiss the Girls(sequel) which is a lot worse than Along Came a Spider since its about a rapist but its not that bad of a book so far… as in like storyline.

    p.s. i wouldn’t ENCOURAGE people to read this book if there not at least 16 or older.

  • none of your business

    hey you all seem like nerds, just wondering do any of you play dungeons and dragons…lol

    or runescape…

    or barny and friends…

    “death is only an experiance after life”

  • Steven

    max sounds sexy to me!!

  • night rider

    none of your business i would like to call you things but if i did first they would be deleted and second i would be banned from this sight forever so im just not going to say anything at all

  • whoami?

    yeah i play runescape… WHATS IT TOO YEAH!?!?!?

    im joking…

  • whoami?

    well none of your business… if that is your real name. I may be a nerd cept… i have a lot friends who are “popular” (so to speak) and maybe i just like to read about weird things O.o

  • Maddy

    none of your business at least we aren’t afraid to say who we are and we read books which are much better than sitting around doing nothing but talking about people.

    p.s. i probably might get banned for this comment since it’s sort of a personal attack so if you don’t se me anymore i say bye to everyone and keep reading!

  • whoami?

    well Maddy he attacked first so it should be all right, and if you do get band just make a new name.

  • max’slover

    none of your buisness i too read wierd things and would get banned.by the way all my friends are coll(and perverted)

  • whoami?

    well then max’slover your “friends” would love Kiss the Girls which i finished last night.

  • Steven

    lol

  • night rider

    ive heard that the book the dangerous days of daniel x might be good its about a boy whos parents were killed by aliens and after that he discovers strange abilities as for example being able to morph his shape and anything elses and he wants revenge and in the story he discovers he is an alien himself

  • whoami?

    ……ok……

  • whoami?

    started reading Jack and Jill

  • night rider

    its been conformed the mr movie WILL come out in 2010 and it IS being directed by avi arad if you need conformation check fangs blog that news came out today

    p.s. no ones sure whether its cgi or real people

  • MRFan

    Yeah…movie is coming out in 2010. Still have no idea who the cast is. I want to find out really badly! And I am going to read the lake house and where the wind blows…Which is the first and which is the second?

  • whoami?

    when the wind blows first and the lake house or you could look at the lake house book and see it says “sequel to when the wind blows”…

    and yes night rider it is going to be a cgi

  • night rider

    dangit for 2 reasons 1 the movie is going to be cgi and 2 someone stole the lake house when i was in the middle of it abot how good is the ending

  • kcuF

    the Lake House is a pretty good book and the ending is really good though. is there a sequel to it?

  • MRFan

    Just heard on deviantart.com that there is a going to be a movie for each of the books.

  • MRFan

    Okay.
    Movie: Coming out in 2010-ish. Could be animated or real. MOst likely animated.
    Book 5: Coming out in probably a year or so. All of the maximum ride books have come out a year after eachother.

  • night rider

    thanks

  • night rider

    i just finished the lake house great book too bad oz died

  • whoami?

    yeah oz gets sniped :(

  • night rider

    yeah that sucked he and max would have had a promising future

  • whoami?

    they didn’t find oz’s body thought O.o something is screaming sequel.

  • whoami?

    you know since max in When the Wind Blows is oviparous she had eggs that later hatched into babies, and on friday’s fang blog max said she doesn’t know, if max and fang ever… you know… she might have babie eggs.

  • night rider

    well yeah i guess but it also said in when the wind blows that they used tons of dna not just 2%

  • whoami?

    well yeah but you never know.

  • whoami?

    something interesting is that in Patterson’s book Kiss the Girls there is a character named Kate Mc
    Tiernan and the guy who directed Die Hard’s name is John McTiernan… coincidence O.o

  • whoami?

    if he made a sequel to the lake house it would come out this year. When the Wind blows came out in 1998 and the Lake House came out in 2003. 5 years apart… 2008 :)

  • night rider

    maybe

  • whoami?

    just finished Jack and Jill starting Cat and Mouse :)

  • TotalAngel

    I’m a big fan of Angel & Total. I hope they make a movie because I’ve got to put a picture with Total and Angel. She seems so sweet and yet so powerful. I hope a book comes out with a lot more detail on what the kids can do and also hooking Total up with his new love!

  • whoami?

    you know they have a maximum ride manga comic book… didnt know this thing was that big.

    next thing you know Maximum Ride is gonna be a word in the dictionary.

  • night rider

    yesh i knew it would have a manga edition book not a comic book it will just have 30 extra pages with pics

  • tamwyn

    is the movie animation or real

  • night rider

    who knows

  • whoami?

    manga… comic… same thing

  • tamwyn

    no it’s not

  • tamwyn

    No it is not.

  • Clara

    This book rocks!!!!!!!!!!!! I got about 50 million people started on it!!! And no it will not be a cartoon.

  • tamwyn

    Awesome!

  • MRFan

    Clara: How do you know it won’t be animation/cartoon?

  • Brenden

    I’m still on the first book of maximum ride and two of my friends are on the 2nd and 3rd book. They got me addicted to this series!!!!

  • nightrider

    i know because i was flippin through sites and i found one that said yen press aka a manga company said they were going to add 30 or more pages to the original book with manga picture

  • night rider

    there might be a seqel to the lake house because ozs body dissapeared and there was still one more clone of dr whoever he is and it says that he could bring people back to life but they are running out of names first the school then the hospital what next the institute the university uh the labratory

  • Slash

    Is he gone? Yes. Ok, back to business. Going back to an older topic here, I agree JP should just stop making Max run away from Fang! I mean, I know that stuff is akward, I should know, but still…come on. MR4 was not what I thought it would be…

  • night rider

    who do you mean

  • whoami?

    night rider that wasn’t that guys clone at the end of The Lake House… that was him, when she was at the Hospital and killed that one guy on the roof, that was the clone. and yes he should make a sequel or i while be pisssed 😛

  • slugger

    dude the 4th book was the worst one in the seris it was short and not very good it had a villian that was so high and mighty and he just fall like that the big monster they came across was easliy defeated after snaping a little girl arm i dont recall any fighting going on ethier also the whole globe warming was so over stressed the bad guys got them and frist words they say were were against globel warming ang they have a chapter discussing it if you haven’t read the 4th one yet don’t let the seris end on the 3rd book cause let me tell you reading the 4th one was like shooting myself in the foot plus fang was all emtional and it ticked me off cause he wasn’t in the others but really let the 3rd book be the end for you save your self the disappointment

  • whoami?

    NO! THE FOURTH WAS THE BEST!! just kidding yeah it sucked… BIG TIME!!!

  • night rider

    oh i thought there were three

  • whoami?

    too bad you still have to read the fourth to probaly sorta understand the next one.

  • ~Peter~JK~

    I still don’t know if there is going to be book 5……if so…..I totally want it!!!

  • ~Peter~JK~

    It would be so cool if the books introduced a new flying character. :)

    Fang is cool! :)

  • whoami?

    i think if a new character joined and it was a guy they would hit on max.

  • whoami?

    or vice versa with fang O.o

  • night rider

    yeah most likely

  • night rider

    or if fang did die i bet iggy might try and get a hook up

  • whoami?

    with max? probaly not becuase none of them even know that max and fang are/not together.

  • whoami?

    or a blind chick…. or he will be lonely for the rest of his god damn sad life.

  • night rider

    good point

  • whoami?

    found these on youtube, funny as hell… and if there not funny to you, you have no sense of humor 😛

    episode 1 part 1

    episode 1 part 2

    episode 2

  • whoami?

    (cont)

    episode 3

    WARNING: All of these videos contain strong language and some conservational sexuality.

  • whoami?

    HAPPY MOTHERS DAY EVERYONE!!!! (especially if your a mom) *wink!!!*…. im not a mom ima guy

  • pielvr

    these books r so frickin addicting, i can’t wait till the 5th book. I really hope itll be better than the 4th. the 4th book was horrid. It had zill action and the uber director( watever kinda name that is) was a terrible villain. He just kinda went splat on the ground and evryone was happy and then max gave her speach on Global Warming. There is a possibility of a new flying character because of the little girl w/ wings from book 1 who was at the Institute. I hope the movie doesn’t completely suck and not follow the book like the Eragon movie. I hav to say my fav charater is Iggy, and Angel just frightens me. my fav book was the 2. Oh and i totally agree w/ slugger. back on the topic of the 4 book, it kinda seemed random, it was way to short, and really, it had no pizzaz. i really wanna know wat JP was on when he wrote it. This series is insanely addicting, it made me wish i could fly. I’ve had fricken dreams i could fly. I deffinately think something insanely tragic should happen. Anyway, that just about summarizes all my thoughts cuz i know i’ll probably never visit this blog again.

  • pielvr

    my computer is very screwed up

  • night rider

    MR P responded to my questions there will not be a fifth book and the movie wont come out till 2011 plus there wont be a sequel to the lake house this sucks it majorley sucks big time

  • pielvr

    WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    GAAAAA THAT SUCKS

  • night rider

    yeah i frickin know

  • pielvr

    man, those were the best books Ive ever read. by the way where can I find the trailor to the MR movie

  • whoami?

    i sorta doubt that in a way

  • pielvr

    what, that there won’t be a fifth book or that those were the best books i ever read?

  • whoami?

    if he doesnt make a fifth book he will be letting down all of his fans. and everyone in this blog can aggree the ending sucked in the fourth. but m aybe she was just supposed to save the world from global warning Or: NOONE LIKE IT HOT!!!

    im pist if there isnt a fifth. lost all respect for Mr.P

  • Trent

    I luvd the series hope he makes a fifth

  • Trent

    i think he should bring back in the people from the institute in th first book. the fourth book SUCKED!!!>(

  • TRENTYPOO

    this book sux hairy monkey nuts

  • TRENTYPOO

    if your actually doing this you have no life

    hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahah

    seriously dis BOOK SUX

  • Trent546

    TRENTYPOO you are the one that needs to get a life. you cant judge the book unless youve read it. this siries rocked.you would have tobe an idiot not to agree

  • MRFan

    There is going to be a fifth book. Jp sys so in his online interview. Click on the question Is their any romance for Max or Fang in book 4? and you’ll see what I mean.
    and yeah, the fourth book really sucked. I hope the fifth one is more like the 1st 2nd and third.

  • night rider

    i was joking about comment # 333 i was seeing how you would react pielvr freaked hehehehehe i am evil

  • pielvr

    u freakin suck u nearly gave me a fricken heart attack, on another note, who thinks Mr. P shouldn’t have gotten rid of the erasers and then the flyboys after

  • pielvr

    c(‘.’c)

  • whoami?

    wow f$#@ you man.

  • Sarah

    I am going to start a campaign on how we need to stop Global Warming. It has become a very serious issue in the world. I am a huge animal lover and it makes me really upset to see animals like Polar Bears dying, because their is no ice in the Arctic. This is a very serious topic for me and I would really appreciate it if you would all DO SOMETHING that can possibly save our world.

  • Sarah

    Global Warming is true. It is happening. And if we don’t do something about it now then we are ALL going to pay for it in the end. No joke.

  • Sarah

    Please Please Please Help!
    Here are some ways to help stop Global Warming:
    1. Turn off lights when you leave a room. IT ISN’T THAT HARD!
    2. Recycle! Every bit of recycling helps.
    3. Plants trees. Lots of trees. Or plant a garden.
    4. If you can walk or ride a bike somewhere, do so instead of driving.
    5. Conserve Water! Get a Low-flow showerhead! And take showers instead of baths, they use up less water.
    6. Use cold water when doing laundry.
    7. Take shorter showers.
    8. Replace your lightbublbs with compact flourescant ones.
    If everyone does these things (and more!) all the time we can help stop Global Warming. Please, tell your friends and others. Our earth needs our help. It is time to act.
    For more information please check out Dosomething.org

  • MRFan

    I agree with you Sarah. We need to do something.

  • pielvr

    Depends on who you r, if you’re my friend then im not that f$#@, if you’re my enemy i’ll let you call me f$#@… to a point

  • pielvr

    and to reask my previous question after being so rudely interrupted by whoami, who thinks Mr.P shouldn’t have gotten rid of the flyboys or erasers in the series

  • Iggycansee

    I have enjoyed all the books so far, i hope Patterson doesnt continue the whole “save the world through stopping global warming” thing cos i really dont like that idea. If i wanted to read about that i would just read my geography textbook. Keep it exciting with lots of badguys, there was not ONE fight in The Final Warning anywhere near as good as those seen against Ari, the Erasers and the Flyboys. Final WArning was disapointing and if that is going to be the theme from now on then count me out.

  • Iggycansee

    Yes sarah, “there is no ice in the Arctic” nice one. Please global warming is ridiculous, it’s 100% natural. If you look at the earth’s history the climate has always been changing, cooling to ice ages then reheating afterwards, causing the extinction of millions of species of biomass. We are simply experiencing the thawing stage from the previous ice age. If you look at the other major problem that has been ignored because of global warming then you might just change your mind. Over-population is what is causing the over-consumption of non-renewable energy sources and so the over-emitting of greenhouse gases. So calm down and continue life as normal, by the time anything awful happens, we will all have snuffed it.

  • Trent

    That doesnt mean we shouldnt help. After all cutting down the rainforests ,the pouring of toxins and trash into the ocean, and the emitting of poisoinous gases and tons more carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide into the atmosphere than the world is used to isnt”100% natural”.And while its true that there is a cycle of the climate it hasn’t increased this much EVER!!!!And while its true there is ice at the artic there is millions of gallons less ,and if we keep melting the poles like we are soon a fifth of the world will be under water.

  • Trent

    oh by the way pielvr i dont think he should have gotten rid of the flyboys or the erasers

  • pielvr

    thank you for paying attention Trent, and Iggycansee, that’s exactly what my older brother’s policy is

  • night rider

    yeah global warming is a problem i read in ss that chiles pollution is so bad that on bad days people wear gas masks and anybody who doesnt usually passes out of the smog plus this is not normal (im going to be a geek here) during the last ice age 28% of earth was covered by ice when tempatures heated up it went down to 10% but in the last fifty years its gone down almost 5% i mean it took 18000 years for 18 % to melt but only 50 for 5% to melt almost 1/3of 18000 years worth

  • night rider

    have you checked out fangs blog they have manga pictures of themselves didnt know fang had long hair iggy looks 20 years old and angels just ugly

    p.s. i dont think max is ovaparious because on the 4th book i noticed she had never mind

    p.s.s jeez now i feel like a perv

  • whoami?

    ummm yeah i believe in global warming but algore and his bull is just a huge pile of stinky S%$#

  • MRFan

    IF you’re not convinced just watch an Inconvenient Truth. It convinced me.

  • MRFan

    Even if you are not convinced that Global Warming isn’t happening, it wouldn’t hurt to do a little less pollution and pick up more trash. Just help out the enviornment.

  • tenhut11

    i hope the movie comes out soon the books are so good who could write better than this. though some more action and somethin between fang and max would be better

  • Hello People

    yeah i am all for stopping global warming, but one reason many people dont care about global warming is because they dont believe it is happening. like we had snow in april and that has never happend before.

    P.S. if we are tying to stop car polution why are all of the cars that dont run on gas really expensive?

  • night rider

    because goverment wants more money and you know why the goverment dont lower gas prices because there the ones who get the money

  • Bubbles

    I agree with Hello Peolpe, but think that Night Rider is a little harsh. The rest of the world is in as much of a pinch as us nobodies.

  • Bubbles

    Also, MAximum Ride is my favorite book series so I feel stung by those of you who have been attacking it. I do think that the fourth was too short though. My favorites were the 2nd and 3rd.
    I myself am a writer(currently a science-adventure-fiction novelist) and I admire mr. Patterson’s writing style. It has inspired me to try and add more humor into my own writing. I’m young,comparatively, as a teen, so my writing style hasn’t been set in stone yet.
    I also agree with everything that was said above about Eragon. Good book, bad movie.
    sorry I get carried away when I write.

  • night rider

    not really bubbles (more info for you ) venezuela uses 74% hydro electricity we use 10% the rest is gasoline some countries in europe use bicycles or walk and did you know in africa there is 1/8 less cars and yet it is almost 3 times bigger

  • whoami?

    DONT YOU ALL SEE THIS IS WHAT MR. P PLANNED!!!!

    HE WANTED US TO ALL TALK ABOUT GLOBAL WARMING and please i came here to talk and about mr and other crap… not argue about global warming

    if you want to argue about global warming go to a global warming blog please ><.

  • night rider

    good point

  • judson

    hey i just read the 4th book it is really good and again if they make a movie i hope they dont bucher it lol. he is such a good author o and if u havent read when the wind blows or the lake house they are about the same thing just w/ dif characters. btw it is by jp also.they were his inspiration 4 mr
    -Judson-

  • night rider

    the 4th book was nowhere near good

  • judson

    o well i just like his books but if there isnt another 1 im goin to b mad cuz that was a crappy ending. but i liked the 2nd one the best

  • judson

    well i dont read allot and this is rly the first good book series iv read so if all ur guna do is diss it then leave night rider lol wat does that even mean

  • judson

    o just hey to any1 out there what did u think about total’s small wings i think that would look rly funny on a dog. o and i wonder if max will ever find out what that weird voice in her head comes from.

  • mr4htr

    hey i thought the 4th book sucked but i thought it was cool how total grew wings. o and he has to make a 5th book there was too much not answered.like will total ever FLY!!!!! or something like that

  • Bubbles

    I can so imagine how bizzarre wings would look on a dog. Oh, and JUdson, My personal theory is that there is some sort of satelite that the white coats could use to contact Max’s brain. She never has the voice inside the school or, if I’m correct, Itex and the institute.

  • pielvr

    OK Judson, im not saying i did not like the 4th book, im just saying it was not mr P’s best and he could have done better, and as far as nightrider is conserned this iss blogCRITICS.com

  • Bubbles

    HAs anyone confirmed if there will be a fifth book?

  • Bubbles

    Helllllllooooooooooo???????

  • MRFan

    YES
    there will be a fifth book.

  • Bubbles

    THANK YOU!!!!

  • Bubbles

    I think Fang Rocks
    i think Angel is creepy
    You can’t get much better than blowing stuff up, so Iggy is cool
    Gazzy has a fart to challenge the best 100% human fart, so I must honor that
    Nudge truelly has the gift of gab in the fullest sense
    And Max, Well MAx has a sharpwit and an even sharper tongue

  • night rider

    woah why all of a sudden is everyone attacking me jeez im not dissing the book series im just saying the fourth one stunk big time all the rest were really good great actually i mean ive read the first one 9 times the second one 7 times and the third one 9 times oh yes and total will fly it says in the fourth one that he actually got his front paws off the ground

  • mr4htr

    hey yea ur actully right about the paw thing i remember that o but do u think they arnt making another book cuz im guna b mad if he doesnt

  • mr4htr

    o hey also im guna trust u now w/ everything cuz uv read all of the books like a bajillion times ive only read each on once lol :)

  • Hello people

    I think that all of the books were pretty good but the 4th book could have done with a better ending.

    Also it will be a couple of years before another Maximum Ride book will comes out.

  • night rider

    he will make another book (i hope )

  • mr4htr

    i hope the movie isnt like 4 little kids all animated and stuff. that would ruin it ya know. ive told a bunch of ppl abt it and if the movie is gay then that makes me look bad

  • Hello people

    i have heard both that it will and will not be animated so i dont know what it is going to be…

  • pielvr

    wut the heck.

    [Indeed. Hit the Publish button once and once only, and your comment should take, even if nothing seems to be happening or you get an error message. BTW, while trying to get rid of the dupes I accidentally deleted ALL the copies of your last comment and alas, once deleted they can’t be retrieved. Sorry about that.

    Assistant Comments Editor]

    By the way THERE WILL BE A 5th BOOK, PEOPLE HAVE ASKED THAT A MILLION TIMES AND HAVE BEEN ANSWERED YES A MILLION TIMES SO STOP ASKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • mr4htr

    wait who told u there was goin 2 b a 5th book

  • mr4htr

    if there is a 5th book i want to know from jp himself or night rider cuz thats the only person i actually trust here he/she read the books like 9 times

  • Trent

    I have read the first book 16 times i really hope they dont make the movie an anime that would suck does anyone know when the fifth book and the movie will come out

  • pielvr

    has anyone seen the manga pictures of the flock and agrees that Fang looks Creeeeeepy

  • night rider

    i agree fang looks weird really weird and i dont beleive you trent

  • night rider

    yeah 400th comment

  • snoopy

    wow im new to this and the series etc but i really love the books and theyre so well written and ur right about the manga pictures. i really dont like the way fang and the flock look in the manga pictures because:
    1 if theyre wings r that BIG how can they hide them under a WINDBREAKER
    2 fangs hair was cut short xcept for one lock in front of his face in NY so its really not that long and thats just gross
    3 angels wings are to small to fly with in the pictures and i thought she had a bear not a rabbit and cargo pants and a t-shirt not a dress (all in ny so maybe this is in the E shaped house but its kind of awkward to get abducted by evil scientists like that)
    4 11 yr olds dont look like nudge in those pictures and thats all ill say on her
    5 i thought max was to practical to wear her hair like that i mean it would get in her face flying and all
    6 i didnt think wings COULD bend like that
    7 iggy looks, ummm…. ill just say sort of stupid with that smile and all….

    no offense to those of you who like those pictures but i think theyre just creepy and go see them if u havnt 2 c what im talking about

    wow i feel like nudge talking 2 much didnt mean 2 do that

  • MRFan

    Yeah I agree the Manga pictures look bad. Fang’s hair is to long, angels wings are too small.
    the fifth book is most likely coming out in a year…all of JP’s maximum ride books have come out one year apart.

  • whoami?

    yeah the manga’s pictures were really weird…

    OH YEAH

    posted a comment (number 328) about these movies on youtube. SEQUEL!!!

    episode 4

  • http://www.youtube.com/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    contains some language

    for hilarious videos check out my youtube page….

  • http://www.youtube.com/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    the first 3 contain strong language though so watch out O.o

  • snoopy

    does anybody know the plot of mr5 i mean jp got rid of most of the bad guys so how will mr save the world? from who?

  • snoopy

    an idea: maybe the director and ter borcht will escape jail and make even more powerful robot things in secret to get revenge on the flock… at this point (without including global warming etc…) what can jp do? who else would have it in for max and co? who else would want to destroy the world? any ideas?

  • pielvr

    I most definately know JP’s writing a 5th book because I know someone who knows JP personally. David Baldacci

  • pielvr

    If u wish you could be any member of the flock, who would u be.

    I’d be Iggy, I don’t care if he’s blind

  • mr4htr

    id b fang cuz i wud get all da ladies

  • snoopy

    probably max shes so cool leader of the flock etc maybe nudge but she does talk too much hmmmm… (yes i am a girl) u want 2 be iggy for the bombs and fire stuff right?

  • night rider

    id definetely be fang but iggy would be my second choice

    p.s. if i wre fang id cut my hair short

  • night rider

    you know what they should do is find a deserted island make max and fang have babies and start a whole race of bird children and then form a protest against child abuse

    oh yeah by then max and fang wouldbe dead

  • mr4htr

    yea then the new books could b about their children and that would make allot of new books

  • mr4htr

    o i just rememberd this what did yal think about the way the uber proff. had his body in a bunch of box things that grossed me out a little lol

  • night rider

    sounds a little bit weird

  • MRFan

    Nightrider I really like your idea! There should be more romance between Max and Fang in book 5. they should finally say their feelings for eachother! and max should stop running away from fang! Gosh!

  • aimee

    I LOVE THE MAXIMUM RIDE BOOKS! I’M ONLY ELEVEN BUT THEY ARE SO FANTASTIC AND IT’S SO REALISTIC AND I JUST HOPE IF THEY DO MAKE A FILM THAT IT’S PERFECT! BECAUSE IT WOULD BE SOO SAD IF THEY TOTALLY GOT THE WRONG CHARECTERS FOR THE JOB!

  • aimee

    Max always makes me laugh she cracks me up!

  • night rider

    chill with the caps

  • whoami?

    book five is about finding new members to the flock like those ones from the Institute…REMEMBER@?@?@?@

  • night rider

    that would be really cool but there is only 2 what if they found a whole other flock of bird kids and what if max fell in love with one of them and not fang scary thought

  • http://www.youtube.com/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    …………………………………………………………..or the other way around.

  • http://www.youtube.com/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    by the way anyone go to Indy 500 😀 nice an loud.

    was voting for Tony Kanan but he wiiiiiped

  • http://www.youtube.com/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    Danica was really pissed too when she got hit O.o

  • pielvr

    i hav to say, my favorite part in all the books has to be in the 3rd book when all the flock is being questioned by the Asian scientists and Max kicks butt in the conversation. if conversation was a contest her points would have been off the board

  • night rider

    yeah

  • MaxRules!

    I LOVEE THE MAXIMUM RIDE SERIES!! i’ve read all the books like 7 times each but i was dissapointed with the 4th book because i learn about global warming at school and who wants a school lesson outside of school? but anyways i believe in global warming and i think we should lead buy the example fang set.
    just try to make opur planet better for those who come after us.
    anyways i think max should stop running from fang and if they make the movie animated i might have to kill someone

    i feel like nudge going on and on so ill stop now

    p.s i hope the fifth book id better than the fourth!!!

    – live.laugh.learn.love.life

  • pielvr

    wait is that like the slogan for Safeway or something?

  • MRFan

    In The Lake House and When the WInd Blows, how old is MAx? Becauase I read the back of when the wind blows and it said she was eleven.
    And which one is first and which one is second…the Lakehouse or When the Wind blows?

  • night rider

    max is eleven in the first on but second one takes place months later when shes twelve and when the wind blows is first

  • MRFan

    Whate are the characters in When the wind blows and the Lake House? Is it really similar to maximum ride?

  • whoami?

    It is really similiar with a few changes here and there. Such as MR isin Max`s perspective and When The Wind Blows and The Lake House are in a woman named Frannie`s perspective who finds Max. (WROTE THIS MESSAGE ON MY WII!!)

  • whoami?

    oooooops (not on wii :( )

  • snoopy

    i heard the lake house and when the wind blows r good… r they? i mean its jp so of course but what do yall think? its not like mr4 right? (i just read mr4- so boring-yall r right about that)

  • night rider

    great books 9.5 out of 10 maybe even a ten

  • night rider

    oh yeah talking about the lake house this got me excited for no reason on the movie i was watchin there was a preview for a movie called the lake house plus it started off with a girl sayin ive never felt safe in my life except for when i was at the lake house until i learned its about a girl who lives in 2004 and a guy who lives in 2006 and somehow they can send letters through eachothers mail box and they fall in love without ever meeteing

  • Alexa

    Didn’t you say though that MAx did it with someone in When the WInd Blows or in the Lake House? I thought she was just eleven/twelve!

  • me

    Geez people, it’s just a book.
    A good book, but still, just a book

  • night rider

    i wont spoil it for you ok i will she has S-E-X with oz and you get the picture

  • whoami?

    she`s as old as Frannie in bird years

  • whoami?

    yeah btw there is fifth pregame lobby. Got no link cause i’m on my wii 😀

    WARNING: Once again this video contains strong language AND I MEAN STRONG!! and sexual references.

    If you havent seen the first 4 u Can always scroll up and watch em!

  • night rider

    for some reason my pc cant load them

  • hannah

    I love the maximum ride books i hope that the movie is just as good. Also max should stop running away from fang she should just let it happen!!!!

  • night rider

    in what sort of way kissing or f$**ing

  • MR-ROX

    i have heard rumours that the next book will be out at the beginning next year and that Angel is the most likely to be a traitor

    P.S. i dont think it is just rumours

  • mr4htr

    hey angel was a fake traitor in one of JPs other books and i think and that would be dumb if he repeated something that sort of already happend

  • mr4htr

    hey just 2 add something do yal like tell all ur friends about this blog thing cuz i do it in secret cuz i think it would be kind of nerdy if my friends knew i did this lol

  • MR-ROX

    yeh i no i think it would be wierd as well i just heard it on the internet i dont if its true or not

  • MR-ROX

    no i havent told them i dont think i woyuld either cause they reckon it sounds horrible and i get made fun of but hey i stand by the book it is really good

  • nightrider

    i dont think i would besides i have enough problems

  • whoami?

    first off Nightrider im sorry you cant load the movies but you can just go to youtube and search pregame lobby.

    second: yes Max and Fang have sex twice in the Lake House but its not very descriptive anyway and people have sex so stop freakin out!!!

    third: yeah my friends dont know that i use this blog and im pretty sure they dotn know i read MR but my friends ask me all the time why i have Patterson books all over my room 😀

  • whoami?

    oh also just found this one:

    go to youtube and look for “what is Machinima?”
    dont watch all of them, most are gay, just watch the one by Harabek-guy who does pregame lobby.

  • whoami?

    also another funny series is Matchmaking:

    Matchmaking episode 13: No Scope was Involved
    Matchmaking episode 9: Travis
    Matchmaking episode 10: Set the Gun Down

    The following go in order:

    Matchmaking episode 12:Sniper Has a Sniper Rifle
    Matchmaking episode 14:Farewell Travis
    Matchmaking episode 15:Blue Skinned Fiend

  • http://www.maximumride.co.uk/game.php MR-ROX

    there is a new maximum ride game out on the computer. here is the link.

  • nightrider

    cool website but what the……… that was my real first and last name plus i dont have a email adress i was going to get one months ago but my mom saw a thing for high speed internet and im just going to wait

    p.s. we have crappy aol

  • nightrider

    hey i just hooked up a gallery just type in all maximum ride sites and click on the one that says scratch project

  • snoopy

    whoa cool game but i dont see what it has to do with mr besides the title ?

  • nightrider

    holy crap theres rumors going around that mr will be a series of TWELVE books

  • nightrider

    somethin i saw on tv gave me a thought maybe the doctors didnt give her bird dna

    maybe they gave her red bull

  • http://www.maximumride.co.uk/game.php MR-ROX

    I hope that there is twelve books and that they are as good as the first three not the 4th one

  • nightrider

    found this on fanfiction this will be one long comment rated m for mild to extreme sexuality and some mild language

    THE BEST PART ABOUT FIGHTING IS MAKING UP

    He pushed me up against the wall as his tounge glided over my bottom lip,asking- no begging- for an entrance. of course i granted it. wait backup. how exactly did this happen? me, maximum ride, was up in my bedroom having an intense, and hot, make-out session with my best friend. when did this happen?

    (ten minutes previous)

    YOU DONT HAVE TO DO ANYTHING! fang bellowed throwing his arms up in frustration.

    WELL I CANT JUST SAY SCREW IT AND WALK AWAY,THIS IS THE WORLD WERE TALKIN ABOUT i yelled back. yes we were fighting.again.

    YOURE GOING TO BE THE DEATH OF THE FLOCK! YOU WANT US TO GO OFF AND PLAY SUPERHERO?! FUCK THE WORLD! LET IT GO SAVE ITS OWN GODDAMNSELF! fang and i had been at this for 20 minutes. the flock was downstairs watching tv. no doubt hearing every word of this

    HOW DARE YOU! I DO EVERYTHING I CAN TO KEEP US ALIVE! AND OBVIOUSLY THE WORLD CANT FIGURE OUT HOW TO SAVE ITSELF IF IT NEEDS US i screeeched

    YOURE NOT EVEN SANE! HOW ARE YOU SUPPOSED TO SAVE THE FUCKING WORLD IF YOU BELONG ON A FUNNY FARM?! YOU HAVE A DAMN VOICE IN YOURE HEAD! FOR CHRISTS SAKE! IT DOESNT GET MUCH CRAZIER THAN THAT! as the last words escaped his mouth silence fell over the house. he was right i wasnt sane. i was a 16 year old mutant freak with a voice in her head. how was i supposed to save the world.

    i swallowed and looked straight into his eyes then said in a calm voice youre right. i do belong in a funny farm. and i propably havent been sane since i was six.

    fang looked at me with guilt in his eyes, he hadnt meant to say it, but it was true. and now i knew what fang really thought, people were always more truthful when they were angry.

    max, im sorry i didnt mean that. i really didnt. he sighedand walked closer to me.

    i looked at the ground fighting back tears. fang stood in front of me and pulled me closer to him, laying my head down on his chest.

    youre a bastard.

    i know.

    it was silent for a few seconds before we silently began to laugh. then without warning, fang lightly kissed me on the lips. we stared at eachother for a moment before he kissed me again and again and again. each kiss was a little more urgentthan the last. until finally, we crashed into the wall in a full blown make-out session. fangs hands roamed my body. i wrapped my arms around his neck and leaned back as he began trailing kisses down my neck. i let out a little moan and hooked my leg around his when he began to lightly suck on the sensitive part of my neck. i felt him smirk, but i didnt really care. i barely even noticed when i felt his hands grabbed my thighsand picked me up, forcing me to wrap my legs around his waist. i hadnt even noticed we were moving untilfang fell onto the bed, me landing on top of him. he pulled off his shirt, his lips only leaving mine for a fraction of a second. i set my hands on his chest, loving the way he flexed his muscles at my touch. fang continued to trail kisses up and down my neck. my skin tingled wherever he touched me and i couldnt help but to grind him when he trailed kisses down my shoulder and across my collar bone

    IGYYS POINT OF VIEW (DOWNSTAIRS)

    the yelling stopped and my eyes went wide with shock when i heard the little thud of them crashing into the wall. of corse me having super hearing was the only way i could hear it. the kids, couldnt, they just seemed glad that the yelling had stopped. i heard a moan and my eyes widened more- even thoufgh i couldnt see anything. oh god, they werent… were they?! i practically gagged when i heard the bed squeak. oh god! another moan more squeaks a gasp more moans whimpering. OMG! they are actually doing it! and with the kids in the house! then i heard the bed bouncing faster and knew exactly what it was. OMG! hes actually inside of her. OMG! this is so wrong after about 20 minutes it slowed 5 minutes later it stopped. thank god, but now im permanetly scarred for life their only 16 for gods sake

    FANGS POV

    we lay in bed sweaty and smiling. our legs were intertwined and maxs head lay on my chest. wow…

    i love you fang max said breathlessly beside me

    i love you too i kissed her hair and she sighed. i really hope iggy didnt hear this. max kissed my chest lightly and within moments we were bothh asleep. again wow..

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    see im not sure if they would do that becuaes what happens is Patterson hasnt said one explicit word in all of the novels and all of a sudden in one book he goes to fucking?

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    anyway you know that website is just people that make shit up about things they like.

  • http://www.maximumride.co.uk/game.php MR-ROX

    has anyone noticed that patterson scewed up in the second book. Read the end of page 325 and the end of page 341 and you will no what im talking about

  • nightrider

    whoami do ya think i dont know that that but there is a good one even though it does have fucking in it it says what might have happened if theyd been on the beach alone when max kissed him i will copy it in a minute

    and mr rox i do get what you mean

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    lol is that all you care about? fucking? you said its a good one even though it doesnt have fucking in it.

  • nightrider

    NO THATS NOT ALL I CARE ABOUT YOU B**** AND NO THATS NOT WHAT I SAID DUH CANT YOU READ IF YOU COULDNT STAND IT YOU SHOULDNT OF READ IT I GAVE THE F***ING RATING AT THE TOP

  • whoami?

    pffft you reads ratings

  • whoami?

    hmmmm more i look at the recent blogs the more i see its not family-friendly. maybe a change of subjects is the mattter? so lets change the subject : )

  • nightrider

    hey man not to be emotional or anything but im sorry i was just stressed about a gay ceremony i had to today

    and i know this has nothing to do with mr but…..
    SCHOOL IS FREAKIN OUT!!!!!!! THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • ilovefangandmax

    I don’t think max and fang would do it! The most i think they would lead to is hot kissing and that’s all!

  • nightrider

    yeah but if it was one of jps adult books they might

  • ilovefangandmax

    MR is not fully an adult book.

  • nightrider

    yeah i know that

  • nightrider

    oh yeah has anyone seen the bourne identity great movie and if the flock could fight like that theyd kick eraser/flying/eraser/robot eraser/robot ass any day

  • ilovefangandmax

    the wat?

  • nightrider

    the bourne identity

  • snoopy

    dang ur right if the flock could fight like that it would make a great book and a really cool movie… i wish jp described them fighting better cause u really cant tell WHAT they r doing when they fight… maybe they should learn karate or something though they seem to get along just fine without… (unless u count those little short undefeatable robot things in the 4th book they [the flock] pretty much kick butt 24/7)

  • ilovefangandmax

    lol! But i hope the 5th book won’t be as bad as the 4th. I hope the 5th book rocks. Do u think it’ll come out this year or next year? Wat’s ur prediction?

  • nightrider

    i KNOW it will come out next year or later oh yeah if the bourne identitiy was good imagine the matrix….

  • MRFan

    Where did you hear that there is going to be 12 books in the MR series? do u really think that ids true! that would be so awsome if it was true!

  • ilovefangandmax

    How many books will be in the series do u think?

  • ilovefangandmax

    Wow 12! That would be mega awsome! Though i hope for the movie for MR, Total,the fighting, and the wings won’t look cheesy.

  • nightrider

    i agree with ilovefangandmax and no offense cant you think of something shorter cause i mean every time i say it it fills the comment box

  • nightrider

    found this on fanfic now i know what whoami is thinking but i found this in the horror section im just going to give a summary see itex was just a cover up for a company called venix kinda like the tip of the iceberg theyve been captured and are going to be killed this is a list

    jeb- beaten to death
    dr martinez- poisoned
    ella-unknown
    angel- had her brain ripped out
    gazzy-unknown
    fang puart 1- beaten had his wings ripped off
    nudge-beaten and then shot
    iggy- died of sadness because of nudge
    max and fang part 2- forced to swallow drain cleaner( slowly disolves their insides)

    if that was how mr5 ended id protest

  • MRFan

    Same! I would protest too!

  • ilovefangandmax

    I also protest three!!!

  • ilovefangandmax

    nightrider, wat do u mean by writing shorter comments?!

  • nightrider

    no i meant having a shorter name youres is 500 miles long

  • ilovefangandmax

    oh lol! But my name dosn’t fill the name box. i still have a while to go!!! (sigh) so wat else to talk about maximum ride???

  • ilovefangandmax

    oh Wat do u think will happen in the 5th book?

  • MRFan

    HOw old is Oz in When the Wind Blows and Lake House series?

  • Voltair

    Dear Mr. Patterson,
    First I would like to say that I am an avid reader of the Maximum Ride series, and up to this most recent book, The Final Warning, have been quite satisfied by the adventures of Max and the Flock. But after reading this last addition to the series, I’ve been left with a bad taste in my mouth and feeling disappointed. The first inkling of this disappointment was when I discovered that Max’s mission to save the world wasn’t going to be in some Armageddon like battle to save the human race from white-coats who had come to believe them to be inadequate. Oh contraire, it was to be to fight against global warming. Were I realize that is a current subject, as a YOUNG ADULT I don’t really give a crap. And in the end, that’s your audience, children from the ages of 12-17 give or take who are so self absorbed that they don’t give a rat’s hind quarters about the world around them. We crave violent action, not a story about captain planet and the wonderteers. What’s the next one going to be James, Maximum Ride and the quest for a fuel efficient SUV. I mean come on. If I was in need of a good lecture on the effects of global warming, I would turn to Al Gore or Leonardo Decaprio. I read fiction in order to bask in its inconsistencies with reality, not to get a gilt trip from some author who feels it is his duty to educate the next generation on current affairs. And I realize that was all you were trying to do, its just not your place. Now I realize that I’m coming off a bit rude, I apologize and I want you to know that I respect you a great deal as a writer. I’m going to end this email by both apologizing and begging for another book. I respect you and like you far too much for me to let you to end the series that way. Just get off the soap box and give us as an immature, desensitized youth what we want. Maximum Ride and the Final Hour (or something along those lines).
    Sincerely, Respectfully, and Hopeful
    Nick(15 years old)

  • ilovefangandmax

    wow, very nice letter. will u acually give him a letter like that? please do.

  • nightrider

    da** good letter its like the first three are sweet gumdrops and the last one is horse sh** or its like celeberties are walking down a line cinderella,hansel and gretel, sleeping bueaty and then you get the wicked which and everyones cheering and then goes oh

    p.s. ozs age is weird in the first it says hes 8 but in the second hes 12

  • nightrider

    i dont know why im doing this but im going to do a joke a week why i like jokes

    god made rivers
    god made lakes
    god made the yankees
    but we all make mistakes

    and sense ill be away from a computer until monday
    next weeks joke

    warning kind of racist

    there was a russian a mexican and an american standing in times sqare the russian pops the cork off of a russian beer and says we have so much of this we can waste it. the mexican pops the cork off of a bottle of mojitos and says we have so much of this we can waste it. then the american turns around and pops a bullet into the mexican and says we have so much of this we can waste it.

    no offence to any mexicans reading this its just a joke

  • MRFan

    I don’t know what will happen in the fifth MR book, but it better be better than the fourth! (more like the first, second and third!)

  • voltaire

    it well better be. And if there’s someone hired by James Patterson to read these blogs, then tell him i’d like a response to my letter four posts above.

  • voltaire

    it well better be. And if there’s someone hired by James Patterson to read these blogs, then tell him i’d like a response to my letter four posts above.

  • nightrider

    well i came back 2 days before i shoulda so i shouldnta put next weeks joke up there oh yeah whoami is kiss the girls a good book not that ill b4e reading it but my mom has the movie so im going to watch it and people i think everyones heard the post above a trillion times so people change the fu**en topic

  • Tiff

    Ok i love Maximum Ride i hope there is going to be a 6th

  • ilovefangandmax

    i know! i agree with Tiff. I hope there will be a MR 6. I dont know about u nightrider ,but i want to continue on the subject of MR 5. Please people who love the MR 5th book already continue on the subject.
    P.s:Way,Way before here. I agree with nightrider there should be another flock that they find and there should be a guy who hits on max. That would be awsome!

  • voltaire

    hey nightrider, who the hell do you think you are, the curator of this blog of something. No one gives a crap if you came back from werever the hell you were early. no one missed you. And I’m going to keep the subject on my letter till I get a response from james patterson or someone affiliated with him. So shut up and go get a girl, because you obviously have far too much time on your hands.
    Voltaire

  • ilovefangandmax

    U know u put that message too many times. I think we all know wat it says u don’t have to put it a 1,000 times! Back to max. So….. Do u think max and fang will be together in the 5th book. I hope so. Though also it would be cool if another guy was crushing on max.

  • ilovefangandmax

    OMG!!! I fond out when the 5th maximum ride book is coming out and wat it is about! OMG!

  • MRFan

    DID U REALLY!? TELL US!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHEN IT COMES OUT!

  • ilovefangandmax

    It comes out March 16th,2009! I also know wat it is about!

  • MRFan

    the book comes out then? what is it about?!

  • MRFan

    HOW DID U FIND THIS OUT!?

  • ilovefangandmax

    I fond this out on google!

  • ilovefangandmax

    OKAY THIS IS WAT IT SAYS EXCACTLY ON THERE!

    Little known about this book,but it was confirmed that 5th MR book will be released on March 16th,2009. A synopsis was recently released on http://www.chapters.indigo.ca! MR and the other members of the flock have barely recovered from their last Artic adventure, when they are confronted by the most frightening catastrophe yet. Millions of fish are dying off the coast of Hawaii and somone-or “somthing”-is destroying hundreds of ships. Unable to discover the cause, the goverment enlists the flock to help them get to the bottom of the disaster before it’s too late. While max and her team are exploring the depths of the ocean, their every move is carefully tracked by Mr.Chu-a criminal mastermind with his own plans for the flock. Can they protect themselves from Mr.Chu’s army of mercenaries and save the ocean from utter destruction? This summary may not be accurate.

    That’s wat i read.OMG!Hawaii!

  • voltaire

    not more hippy crap. saving fish, common!!! and how do they swim, they have wings, not fins.

  • ilovefangandmax

    well angel can breath under water.

  • nightrider

    f*** you voltaire

  • nightrider

    and come on saving fish thats even more lame than global warming

  • nightrider

    i was trying to find more about the book and i found a scholastic book site that said 1 mrfans date has a very small chance of being correct the date isomewhere between january 20 2009 and september 20 2009 but there is no actual date 2 theres this contest to where if you win your name will be somewhere in the story your school name will be somewhere in the story mr p will come to your school for a day and you get 50 autographed copies of mr 5 great huh

  • nightrider

    oh yeah voltaire to get a faster response just email him

  • MRFan

    Ok. The storyline doesn’t sound that good. But i am excited that i know when it is coming out!

  • MRFan

    How can u enter this contest nightrider?

  • ilovefangandmax

    yeah i would like to know that too. Also I think the fish thing is stupid, but the setting will be in hawaii! I bet that’s when fang and max will hook up! Sooooooooooooo excited!

  • whoami?

    OK!! FIRST: i was gone for 8 days and im pretty sure you guys blogged more than you have in a month!!!

    SECOND: that fish idea was a friggin dumdass thing to post b/c SAD DESSPERATE PEOPLE BELIEVE OTHER SAD DESSPERATE PEOPLE… its life :(

    THIRD: I KNOW FOR A FACT what the 5th book is about.
    tomorow morning i will tell you and have a source (also remind me)

    FOURTH: Honestly i did not read that HUGE message to MR P (too much try trimming it >< )

    LAST BUT NOT LEAST: that would pretty kickass 4 MR. P to come to ur home, cept I wouldnt want 50 copies of MR 5 even if they were autographed!

    P.S. i apologize for any errors i did ALL OF IT on my wii >:D

    ….P.S…..P.S.?
    I am blogging around 3:30 in the morning b/c i am still on California time (yes those 8 days i was in California) got home 3 hrs ago and couldnt go to sleep.

  • whoami?

    also!!!!!

    I am on the last book of the alex cross series.

    8/13 contain STRONG MATURE SEX

    ALL CONTAIN GRUESOME MURDERS!l

    but for the most part i like it

  • ilovefangandmax

    ok…………. whoami where did u get the real summary for the 5th maximum ride book?

  • ilovefangandmax

    also i did post it, but it was wat i read wat do u got?

  • ilovefangandmax

    hello?

  • MRFan

    Whaomi u said u knew the plot for mr 5. can u tell us? and how do u know for sure this is the real plot?!

  • voltaire

    ok, night rider, i call truce, lets not waste any more space of this blog on single line insults. the scroller thing on the side in small enough as it is already. thanks for agreeing with the fish comment, and ilovefangandmax, ya i guess its true, angel can breath underwater but i hope the book doesnt turn into angel the bird/human’s adventures under the sea. =)

    p.s.
    U guys really want max and fang to hook up dont u, iv been reading the past posts and a good chunk are talking about that crap. I think im fine with only the occasional awckward kiss.

  • voltaire

    p.s.s
    woami(nice to meet u im new). But im not sure id categorize myself as sad and desperate. I do have the patience to wait for the books to hit soft cover. =p

  • whoami?

    busy today ill do it when i can tomorow… ill tell you in other words

  • ilovefangandmax

    voltaire lets just say ur awsome!NICE! whoami u better post it soon! I still think mine is the correct one.

  • nightrider

    to enter the contest just type in maximum ride scholastic contest and one should say welcome to scholastic something
    p.s. you could give the extra copies to libraries
    p.s.s. jp doesnt come to your house he comes to your school
    p.s.s.s. kiss the girls was a good movie
    p.s.s.s.s. im really getting tired of writing p.s.
    p.s.s.s.s.s. nightrider to voltaire nightrider raises the white flag

  • nightrider

    and whoami damn california man would i love to go there ahh the beach

  • nightrider

    oh yeah if i was making the mr movie my soundtrack would be the sickness by disturbed

  • voltaire

    that was an awesome album, i secound that

  • ilovefangandmax

    never heard of it.

  • MRFan

    ok…is someoene going to tell us the plot of MR 5!? (sorry little hyper!)

  • ilovefangandmax

    yeah i know im waiting. By the way i got my plot from maximum ride 5 from wikipedia.

  • whoami?

    yes Kiss The Girls was great movie but it wasnt much like the book same w/ Along Came A Spider

    P.s. i will post plot ASap

  • whoami?

    ok IS EVERYONE READY?

    When i finished the MR 4 ( 4 months ago ) there was a video on MR official website with a video which was subose to be Max and Iggy holding the camera. They dont have it anymore but she said somethign about there being other people that can fly and that there out there somewhere. So pretty much what we can guess is that they find more members of the flock.

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    and i would not keep reading this book if he kept doing this bullshit.

    p.s. this doesnt have to do anything with MR but..

    YES FINALLY DIABLO 3!!

  • ilovefangandmax

    ok………….? Did it say somthing like this is the 5th book? Do u think they might have it somwhere else?

  • whoami?

    honestly lovefangandmax i have no idea

  • ilovefangandmax

    oh.(sigh)! Who do u think would play a good fang and max in the movie?

  • ilovefangandmax

    hello?

  • MRFan

    whaomi, that video was there before the MR 4 was released. I dont think that is the plot.
    ilovefangandmax: I really think Tyler Posey should play Fang and Amy Rose should play MAx. Amy Rose is the one who was in the commerical advertising the book and Tyler Posey is like as good as you can get for Fang, I think. Don’t try to image google him though…his pictures aren’t good on google. You have to see him in this Fake Maximum Ride Trailer.

  • ilovefangandmax

    wat fake maximum ride trailer? Iv’e seen some, but tell me wat happenes on the one hes on so i can c him.

  • MRFan

    I can try to send you the link. He doesn’t do anything, he is just how I pictured Fang. I haven’t liked alot of the people others have wanted to play Fang. on youtube type in…MAximum Ride trailer last 2 of 2.
    That should work.
    In Fact, i think all of the people they show in the trailer would be ideal actors for the movie.

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    yeah amy rose should play max.

    i dun kno if u care….

    Diablo 3 Trailer Teaser

    Diablo 3 Barbarian Gameplay ( 1 of 2 )

    Diablo 3 Barbarian Gameplay ( 2 of 2 )

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    (continued)

    Diablo 3 Witch Doctor Gameplay ( 1 of 2 )


    Diablo 3 Witch Doctor Gameplay
    ( 2 of 2 )

    ESRB RATING: M for Mature

  • ilovefangandmax

    oh ok found it thx! yeah i think he should play fang. ok now is amy rose in the video also with him?

  • nightrider

    come on my little cousin has a sonic game ( hes 4) and she sounds like… like a s1x year old aka kinda squealy

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    wow i gave up on sonic games after Shadow The Hedgehog ><

  • MRFan

    No Amy rose is not in the video. And how did you find it? I was looking for it and I couldn’t find it!

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    pretty sure its gone now… no way you can ever find it again O.o

    P.S. Ther hasn’t been any pregame lobby’s lately but they have made some lol’s of the day!

    Pregame Lobby: Lol of the day~~1

    Pregame Lobby: Lol of the day~~2

    Pregame Lobby: Lol of the day~~3

    Contain some strong language

    whoami?:- It’s time you learned how to format links properly…

    Thanks

    Blogcritics Comments Editor

  • nightrider

    what the hell

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 whoami?

    they edited my message :O

    thanks…. blogcritics…

  • http://youtube.com/user/beefybabbon164 Beefy

    changing my name

  • voltaire

    wait if they edit things, that meens that there are monitors for this site. HEY I STILL HAVNT GOTTEN A RESPONCE TO MY EMAIL TO JAMES PATTERSON. IF ONE OF YOU MONITORS CAN HOOK THAT UP ID GREATLY APPRECIATE IT =)

  • ilovefangandmax

    lol. do u ever think James patterson is gonna send a letter back? If he does send a letter to u tell me. I sooooooooooooo want to send a letter to him!

  • Jamieee

    The point of a series is for it to keep going.
    Not to just stop.
    I completly fell in love with these books.
    As long as the kids love it why would you want it to stop?
    It will keep them reading.
    :]

  • ilovefangandmax

    i know i loooooooooooove this book. My two most favorite books i love that i can’t stop thinking about would be maximum ride and twilight!!!

  • voltaire

    does any one else think that jamieee is a mr rep for the blog. no kid thinks in such a corporate way, and cares about the buisness side of their favorite novel. and jamieee, i disagree, the point of a good novel is to entertain and tap into the imagination of the reader, not just to continue. the writen language was first devized not as a source of income, but a a way to share thoughts, feelings and oppinions with others. and since im pretty sure u are an adult rep, here’s a hint.- just because u end a entry with a smiley doesnt make it believe able.

    p.s no kid referes to their piers as “the kids”
    :p(yes i ended it with a smiley, but only for the comedic value and irony.)

  • ilovefangandmax

    wat?

  • ilovefangandmax

    hello?

  • nightrider

    good god voltaire you sound like a business but i have to agree

  • ilovefangandmax

    lol! Nobody talks often here anymore. :(

  • Maximum fo-bo

    OMG!!!

    I JUST SAW THE MR1 MOVIE 2DAY……. IT WAS AWESOME……….. THE 2ND IS COMING OUT NEXT NOVEMBER I CAN’T WAIT FOR THAT TWO…….

  • voltaire

    wait what? thers a movie?

    and night rider, i like to think of it a a gift with words, but ya i guess i do sound like a pr rep. although i do talk more shit on the book that anyone else on the blog.(but only when the books deserve it)

  • James

    What do you mean you saw the movie?
    I don’t think the movie is out yet…

  • MRFan

    Did anyone ele realize that JP is wearing the same sweater in all of his interviews?

  • ilovefangandmax

    WAT!!!!!!!! WAT MOVIE? THERE IS NO MOVIE OUT YET!

  • Maximum fo-bo

    YEAH I SAW IT MY BEST FRIEND’S DAD WORKS ON THE SET. I GOT TO MET THE GIRL WHO PLAYS MAX. SHE IS REALLY NICE AND THE WING ON THE COMPUTER GENTICS ARE AWESOME.

  • ilovefangandmax

    WAT!!!!!!!!!REALLY! R U JUST LYING OR IS IT FOR REAL! WAT IS THE ACTRESS WHO PLAYS MAX NAME?

  • Beefy

    lies…

    No way you even saw the movie

  • ilovefangandmax

    OMG!!!!!!!(squeals and screams) I found out what the name of the fifth maximum ride book is. And You know how i told you guys about the plot i found for MR5. Well i was right. that is the plot. when i found the title for the 5th book there wasn’t a cover yet, but still. I know the title!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • ishouldno

    Maximum fo-bo is just trying to look big! The movie hasn’t been cast! They don’t even have a director yet! There’s no way Maximum fo-bo has met anyone, and the sets don’t exist! What a big fat liar!

  • ilovefangandmax

    the title for the 5th maximum ride book is on target.com!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • ilovefangandmax

    P.s: actually they do have a director for the maximum ride movie already, but they are not making the movie yet for sure. ok OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
    The 5th book maximum ride title is…………….
    Water Wings!

  • nightrider

    bull sh** you gotto see the movie oh yeah i just came back from myrtle beach and i was in books a million waiting for a movie time and saw a limited edition mr 2 it had a weird shiny cover and said it had these things
    exclusive interview with jp
    extended veresion of the story
    and an autograph but it was 15 bucks for a book no way

  • ilovefangandmax

    U guys don’t care about the 5th book title?!

  • voltaire

    not in the slightest if it takes after number four. and where did you find this, because (i know this is cliche’ but) not everything you read on the internet is true.

  • ilovefangandmax

    i fond this on wikipedia, target.com, and if you type in: Water wings the 5th maximum ride book on google it will show it there too. And P.S: My summary of the 5th book was correct! Soooo excitied! Escially since the plot is in Hawaii. Rumor has it that max and fang will get together in the 5th book!!!!!!!!

  • Maximum fo-bo

    don’t believe me then but im telling you it’s going to be awesome

  • MRFan

    If the fifth book is going to be like the fourth, I’m not all that excited.

  • DES

    I CAN’T WAIT for MR 5 I just love the romance between max and fang. Lets see what happen. p.s. Is there really a movie for MR

  • Maximum fo-bo

    yep will it’s not publicly out it’s just my bff’s dad works on the set so i got to see it.

  • DES

    when will it be soon in theaters. Will it be soon in theaters

  • anyoumous

    Maximum Ride is so cool! I just love the chemistry of Fang and Max. Yet the action packed adventures of the chase with the ereasers- epscally with Ari the son of Jeb. I can’t wait till the next book I read .They’re so adventureous and exciting I just don’t want to put the book down. It keeps me awake all night long.

  • nightrider

    good news bad news which do you want to hear first okay i will start with the bad news first so the good news might cheer people up the plot about saving fish is true and it is called water wings (lame) but the good news is that it comes out in 2009 found it on a sight called fantastic fiction

  • Maximum Obsession

    Waiting… for… fifth… book…

    March… sixteenth…

    Experiencing… withdrawl… symptoms…

  • ilovefangandmax

    I knew it was coming out in 2009! Soooo excitied!I also hope the movie dosn’t come out too late! And of course i want tons of FAX in the 5th book. I think the 5th book will be good. Do u think in the 2 MR book that Sam was an eraser. idk. i don’t think so. Do u know wat would be cool? It would be cool if in the 5th book Sam comes back and the flock finds out he huas wings too so then he joins the flock and fang gets jealous, but then fang tells max that he loves her then Fang and max will get together! Now that would be awsome. Do u agree? P.S:Sorry. Nudge moment there

  • DES

    yes I agree it would be great for fang and max to be together. P.S. has any read THE DANGEROUS DAY OF DANIEL X. It a great book.

  • ishouldno

    Again, Maximum Fo-bo is full of it. There are no sets yet! The movie doesn’t exist yet! I don’t know why he/she keeps lying! Oh wait–yes i do. But i do know that the movie will be totally buck when it comes out.

  • Maximum fo-bo

    listen [personal attack deleted] how do u even know that the sets aren’t up? You don’t know anything do you? Let me answer that as well Nope you don’t! Good day sir and or lady.

  • DES

    I can’t wait for the MR5 it’s going to be so cool

  • ilovefangandmax

    I also am soooooooo excited for book 5. i have 4 questions i wanna ask u guys and i want ur answer. 1. Do u think sam was an eraser? 2. Did u get excited when max got asked out on a date? 3. Did u like lissa? 4. What do u think the 5th MR cover will look like? answers plz.

  • DES

    no I don’t think sam was a eraser, yes i was excited when max got asked on a date, no, i think the bookcover will show max and her flock flying over the ocean and fish swimming

  • ilovefangandmax

    OMG!!!!!! I agree with u on every single answer. No i don’t think sam was an eraser. yes i was extremely excitied when max got asked out on a date. I hate lissa. She was too desperate. And i hope the book cover shows the whole entire flock. Not in shadows, like clear so u can see wat they look like. anyone else have answers?

  • voltaire

    i have some questions and answers but not to your questions. have u all noticed that essentially its been only a few people on the blog the whole way through, and that Jamiee (only posted once a while ago, the one i accused of being a site proctor) and DES are pretty mush the only two new people. have u noticed that all they do is reiterate what we’ve saide in the past only with more gammatical errors. it doesnt take much to realize that the girls of this blog are completely enamered with the idea of max and fang hooking up or any other semi romantic possibility. so once again, im calling foul. i accuse jaimee and DES of being adults or even worse, mrf reps.

  • Beefy

    hmmmmmmmmmmmm its been a while….

    well im done bloggging if jp just wants to ruin the whole series… he tends to do taht O.o

  • DES

    I’m not a adult I’m only 13 and who ever voltaire is u don’t know me. SO shut the hell up!!!

  • DES

    I found this website because my boyfriend told me about it and he knows that I like to read JP MR books.Don’t forget to answer the ?

  • voltaire

    i apologized des, i was getting ahead of myself. i judge, its what i do. and i think beefy has the right idea. im done talking about a series thats resolved itself to writing about a mythical phenomenon. i miss the days when books about genetic experiments could just be about sensless violence and the occasional examination of consciense. so this is going to be my last post ( unless someone says something really stupid that i just cant ignore)=P. So good bye nightrider, beefy,whoami,ilovefangandmax. sorry if i affended you. and one last thing

    I WANT A RESPONSE TO MY LETTER
    JJJJAAAAMMMMMEEEEESSS PPPPPAAAATTTTEEEERRRSSSOOONNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

    till someone says something stupid
    Voltaire
    (not my real name)

  • DES

    its okay I was just mad sorry

  • ilovefangandmax

    Hey!!!!! i’m 13 too! And no more fights! I hate fights. ok, let’s continue…. soooooo. What else to talk about maximum ride. oh! What do u think of total?

  • DES

    I think total cool my boyfriend has a small black dog that always remind me of him.I love to play with with his dog when I go visit him.The little dog is going to have pups and I get to have one

  • ilovefangandmax

    Oh how awsome! I love puppies! They are soooo cute! These questions i want everyone to try to answer because i’m really curious. 1. Has anyone here read twilight? 2. The first 3 twilight books? 3. Do u love them? 4. Are u extremely excited about the 4rth book and movie?

  • DES

    sorry I never read twilight my friend says its a good book

  • ilovefangandmax

    U HAVE TO READ IT!!!!!!!!I LOVE IT!I love it as much as MR! Has anyone else here read it?

  • iluvMR

    i haven’t but i am planning to, heard its nice. anyone got good comments about it?

  • iluvMr

    …heard that ittis ’bout a vampire..

  • iluvMr

    anyway the 5th bk sounds quite…boring..i mean about the whole fishing thing…if it is isn’t nice, i dun think i am goin 2 continue reading MR…i mean the 4th bk was bad enough…(though overall his series is great)

    oh ya n i dun y he takes sooo long to rite a bk.(esp since the 4th bk was so short.i read it in an hour!)

  • MRFan

    Ok! Lots of stuff to answer here. to answer ur questions i dont thin Sam was an eraser. I was excited for Max, only becaues she needed to get back at Fang for kissing lissa…and by the way I HATE lissa. she is WAY to clingy and desperate!!! i dont know what the fifth book cover will look like, but it better be good. Same goes for the story. the fourth book was really bad and if the fifth one is like it…
    And I have read twilight. they are AMAZING books! I just finished the first one and I am getting the other ones today. It is right up ther with Maximum Ride they are so good.

  • DES

    what the twilight about

  • iluvMr

    yea what the twilight about?

  • DES

    Does anyone know what the twilight about?

  • ilovefangandmax

    Yeah! The 4rth and final twilight book came out Aug 2nd. Reading it right now. Almost donw. Oh. Twilight is about a girl who moves to forks, washigton and goes to school and falls in love with a guy that’s a vampire. The vampire(Edward)tries to stay away from the girl(Bella), but ends up falling in love with her too. The thing is blood thristy vampires are coming to town and find out about Bella. READ IT! IT RULES! I LOVE TWILIGHT AND MR.

  • DES

    sounds like a good book.I’ll read it thanks.

    P.S. has any one read City of Bones it a cool book it kind of like Twilight. It’s about a girl{clary} that goes to a club in NYC and witness a murder but the thing is that only she can see the murders they call them self shadowhunter{demon slayers}.

  • DES

    and the murders are teengagers jace,alec,and isabella

  • Hippyhead

    whoever that voltaire person is he needs to shut up. i just found this blog soo im a little late, but global wartming is real and has had serious consequenses on the planet and anyone who says different is an idiot.

  • DES

    that right hippyhead global warming is serious.But you need to calm down.People are working how to stop
    it.So what do you thing of MR.

  • iluvMr

    For those who have seen the maximum ride blog, it STINKS, i mesn ittis just filled with videos from utube an load of other crap! I mean the blog should at least follow the storyline, drop a few hints about WaterWings here and there.The blogskin stinks too, it is like they did not put any effort into making it!

    yea n i just read twilight n ittis great! N Hippyhead DES is right, ppl are taking care of Global Warming.Global Warming is serious n i am sure everyone knows that,but it does not mean we have to think about Global Warming all the time.(esp in the books we read!)

  • nightrider

    this blog for one is getting boring and its supposed to be about mr not fucken twilight who wonders if theres going to be a seqel to when the wind blows and the lake house (which is an adult version of mr
    p.s. voltaire heres youre stupid coment youre an asshole
    hehehehehe

  • DES

    nightrider just because this blog is about MR we can still talk about others book once in awhile.Thanks for backing me up iluvMR. And people who are working to stop global warming good luck.

  • ilovefangandmax

    I agree with DES. Even though it’s a MR blog we can still talk about other books. If u don’t like it, THEN MAKE A SUGGESTION OF WAT TO TALK ABOUT MR BECAUSE WE ARE RUNNING OUT OF IDEAS!!!!!!!!!!!

  • DES

    Has anyone read The Dangerous Days OF Daniel X it kinds of remind me of MR

  • iluvMr

    actually ittis true dat we should not be riting about other bks, but face it there isn’t much more to rite about MR(other than comparing it with other bks that is)esp since the last bk was such a bore. SO CHILL…it is not like anybody’s 4getting MR…
    *oh ya n i prefer MR to the The Dangerous Days OF Daniel X

  • iluvMr

    ummm n nightrider i was talking about THE MR blog.

  • Voltaire

    IM BAAAACCCCKKK!!!(DAMN THAT WAS QUICK)

    wooooooooo there hippy chick, i leave for like a week and im being attacked. Please global warming is ridiculous, it’s 100% natural. If you look at the earth’s history the climate has always been changing, cooling to ice ages then reheating afterwards, causing the extinction of millions of species of biomass. We are simply experiencing the thawing stage from the previous ice age. If you look at the other major problem that has been ignored because of global warming then you might just change your mind. Over-population is what is causing the over-consumption of non-renewable energy sources and so the over-emitting of greenhouse gases. So calm down and continue life as normal, by the time anything awful happens, we will all have snuffed it.

    oh and nightrider i comment back: haha hehehe haha

  • Shahz

    Hey peoples, I’ve only read MR 3 but I’m hoping to read the MR 1 and 2 and 4 soon. I have a couple of questions.
    1. Are you all American? ( Not that It matters) The publishing dates would be different for the books and the vfiewings aswell.
    2. I can’t find the release date for Water Wings on the blog, what is it?
    3. Have any of you read the Shapeshifter series? (If not I recommend it).

    P.S I am British and an Asian, not that it matters!
    :)

  • nightrider

    nice to meet ya voltaires from indonesia mrfans from the uk and im from australia crikey

  • nightrider

    fine hears something for me to say remember comments 533-535 about disturbed well id use the album believe for the second movie i think some people have heard disturbed and just dont know about it you know liberates one of his most commonly sung songs you know liberate your mind/ you motherfucker youre so narrow minded/ so narrow minded/will you liberate youre mind/ hey hey/ liberate youre mind you motherfucker/ youre so narrowminded so narrow minded/ will you liberate youre mind this time both albums are worth checking into i give believe 4.5 stars and the sickness 5 stars (out of 5 that is)

  • nightrider

    good gosh i keep on blabbing check out fangs blog movie updates cant load it because of dang aol you also find out nudge watches gossip girls ugghhh

  • nightrider

    i think mr p should put this in at least one of his books bruce willisis famous quote who can guess it first

  • Shahz

    Nice 2 meet u 2. I’d like to guess that quote but im at a loss @_@

  • DES

    I’m a Mexican American and what is the shapeshifter about.

    P.S.I read twilight and its a good book I can’t wait for the movie
    :}

  • Voltaire

    dude im Irish what are you talking about nightrider?

  • MRFan

    I’m Canadian!

  • nightrider

    its a frickin joke and im from the polluted us of a okay ill go ahead and give away the quote from the movies die hard, die hard 2 (die harder ) and die hard 3 (live free or die hard) the quote is yipee kaya mother fucker. great movies

  • nightrider

    whoa didnt realize we had so many foreighn people

  • DES

    I think it’s cool to have people from different places people on this blog

  • iluvMr

    yea im singaporean n umm wasn’t it kinda obvious before, that there were foreign ppl on this blog it is THE WORLD WIDE WEB.
    n im waiting 4 the twilight movie too,but the guy playing edward stinks(he is the guy who played cedric in harry potter),n they got alot of the other characters way out of proportion. but other than the bad choice of actors the movie should be fine…

  • Voltaire

    this blog is getting boring, someone needs to insult me so i can argue with them and tear them a new one. remember when that hippychick insulted me. ahhhhhhh good times good times. and just an update i still haven’t gotten a response to my letter.

  • MRFan

    You can’t really say the people playing Edward and the other ficional characters in Twilight don’t look like them. They’re fictional characters, everyone sees them differently.

  • Voltaire

    what the hell, i just got like totally ignored.

    But i agree with what you said. it happenes with tevery book made movie. your imagination conjured a character completely different than anyone elses, the actors or usually consistent with the author’s idea of the character. for insatnce when i read the harry potter books (prior to the movies) i imagined professor mcgonigal( pardon the misspelling) as a woman wearing goggles. mcgonigal, goggles, can u see the logical jump. im just rambling now so ill end it with…. blaaahahahkjfhaisugfiu!!!?:A>PDKLF

    ps. did anyone else think ther did a fantastic job casting the original guy who played dumbledor. imeen he was dead on.

  • MRFan

    Yeah, they did an amazing job with Dumbledore.

  • DES

    I think cast cast for twilight is good.

    P.S. Is the movie coming out in November or December I saw 2 different dates for the movie

  • ilovefangandmax

    It’s coming out in Nov21!!!!!!!!!!

  • iluvMr

    ok i admit that everyone sees the characters in books differently.But seriously Rosalie was supposed to be very beautiful,no offence to Nikki Reed but she is NOT beautiful. i mean she is ok…
    so like i said i get the “everyone sees things differently part’but if someone is supposed to be pretty or ugly they shld look the part.(at least)

  • iluvMr

    oh ya n can’t wait for Nov 21!!!!

  • iluvMr

    *till

  • MRFan

    YAY! They changed the date for Twilight! It now comes out NOVEMBER 21ST!! YAYY!

  • MRFan

    I can’t believe Jp thinks “the Final Warning is the best story he’s every written.” I mean, his other books have been so much better!

  • DES

    yeah the “Final Warning” was boring and it was to short.
    YAY!!!!!! I can’t wait to see Twilight! It going to be a cool movie :)

  • iluvMr

    yea the twilight movie shld be good, n i dun think the final warning is MR.P’s best book(but that is just my opinion as a fan)he might really feelit is

  • DES

    what do you think JP best book of MR was? I think JP because book of MR was the first one it was the best of all 4.

  • iluvMr

    i think the first three were pretty good; the third book was probably the best(in my opinion).
    i hope the fifth book would be better or at least just as good as the first three…

  • jazz

    hi hi hi im singaporean and a bookworm…im deaf,too but i prefer the term hearing impaired…
    i love maximum ride!!but i love artemis fowl too!has anybody readbehind the attic wall by slyvia cassedy or whatver?im longing 2 read it!!!i think its really cool that many people from other countries …communicate with each other!!!i am hoping that the fifth bk of mr will come out soon!

  • DES

    yeah I hope the 5th book of MR is better than the first 4. I really hope it’s longer and better that the 4th book.

  • nightrider

    you like artemis fowl i like it too but man have you seen the graphic novel most people lokk really weird
    p.s. voltaire im not a hippy chick hell man i aint even a girl

  • DES

    what artemis fowl about?

  • MRFan

    The first three MR books are the best. I’d have to say my favourite is the second though. And ya, I hope the fifth book is just as good as the first three if not better…

  • ilovefangandmax

    the 5th book comes out march16th!!!!!!!Oh and also my favorite MR book was the 2nd too. And yeah wat is artimis fowl about?

  • DES

    Thats so cool that MR5 is coming out march 16!!!!!

    !!!!!!YEAH!!!!!!

  • MRFan

    WOOOOOOOOT!

  • DES

    Has anyone read Wing of Wrath in the MR site. I liked it. What do u think of it if u read?

  • voltaire

    i wasnt talking about you nightrider, just any hippy chick in general, needless compassion is a femanistic quality.

  • voltaire

    oh and i liked the artimus fowl books too, probably one of the best books you can read when your 1-12 and a guy. not much out there for you when your that age so im glad i found it. and if anyones looking for a great book to read i have a suggestion. try the ender’s game by orsaon scott card. it is by far the best book iv ever read. if you like it dont stop there, the sequals include xenocide, children of the mind

  • voltaire

    just to tell the two who asked. artemis fowl is about a young ( like 10 or something)boy who is a super genious. he is a dezendant of a long line of wealthy criminals, but after the disaperance of his father, his family has lost its wealth and prestige. so Artemis takes it upon himself, with the help of garganchuin body gaurd named butler, to restore his family’s name. he does this by desiding to find and steal FAIRY GOLD. ya thats were it gets exiting, its kind of like the italian job only with young mastermines and a race of pissed of fairies who dont like it when they get outwitted by “mudmen” aka humans. lots of story character switch offs (kinda like following both flocks when they split up that time) but totally managable. Im pretty sure its by eon culfer and has at least three sequals (that i know of).

    but no seriously READ ENDERS GAME BY ORSON SCOTT CARD. especially if your a teen. youll love it i promise. infact we wont hear from you for a while since youll be consumed by the need to read it and its sequals and its alternate narative series starting with ENDER’S SHADOW.

  • iluvMr

    whoa, u must really like the book! i’ll try to find it, see if ittis as nice as u say ittis…i currently have no book to read anyway…jus finished reading the new books i bought…

    anw, i found the Wing of Wrath quite nice too:)

  • MRFan

    READ MY FANFICS! WINGS, WEAPONS AND WHITECOATS. AND THE SEQUEL…LIQUID POISON.
    THANKSS!

  • iluvMR

    ummm sure… where do we find them anyway?

  • voltaire

    ender’s game you can pick up at ay barnes and nobles, or bourders book’s store. it’d be in the sci fi section. but dont be hesitant cause that sounds a little nerdy, although we are all typing on a blog about a book :p.

  • MRFan

    I’ll get you the links.
    Liquid Poison – that is the second one… and the first one is… Wings Weapons and Whitecoats if the links dont work, copy and paste them into the internet bar. remember…wings, weapons and whitecoats is the first one and liquid poison is the second as is still in progress.

  • Maximum fo-bo

    Holy spud soup!!!!! the storms that hit lately tore down two sets in for the movies.:-0

  • book lover

    i LOVE these books, he soooooooo needs to come out with a 5th one

  • voltaire

    i love how all the knew people are like “hi im so and so and i loved the books, he totally needs to make anouther. and like my first entry was a letter completely trashing the fourth book, hahahaha. and t tell everyone the truth, i dont think there should be a movie, and i probably wont go see it.

  • ilovefangandmax

    Wow i havn’t posted in a while! I read the ones above and OMG!!!!! MRfan, i didn’t know u wrote those fanfics! how awsome. i love fanfics they r cool. I read some of wings weapons and whitecoats, but ive been so busy with school and dance. and yes i do take dance. I take tap, ballet, and jazz. I promise MRfan, i will read ur fanfics. Yay i sooo excitied!So it’s been a while how r u guys doing? anything new?

  • nightrider

    just finished reading the dangerous days of daniel x pretty good but im going to have to waight a while for the sequel oh yeah has anyone read the alex rider series by anthony horowitz

  • DES

    What’s alex rider about?

  • iluvMR

    MRFan, i read a few chapters of Wings,weapons and whitecoats n it was quite good (just quite unrealistic fax) but ok overall i guess.if i have time i’ll try reading liquid poison, hope ittis better!

  • iluvMR

    oh, i just finished reading all the chapters to liquid poison definitely much better than the first one. nice work!

  • ilovefangandmax

    someone say hi to me!!!!!!!!

  • iluvMR

    hi

  • MRFan

    WOW, thanks guys for the comments. You all thought Liquid poison is better so far? (its not completed!) Really? I like the first one better so far…but your the readers!

  • DES

    HI

  • ilovefangandmax

    thx guys u rock! Yes MRfan! u fanfics were awsome!

  • MRFan

    OMG iluvfangandmax, are you dancerpointe? Is that ur username for fanfic? If not …w.e..but I was just wondering cuz u say yu dance…

  • Muscles

    WOW! The Maximum Ride series are the most thrilling books I’ve ever read. Surely this series will become an amazing movie and earn tons of money.

    Just one question: In “Final Warning,” what was the point of Max’s so-called poem? Besides noticing everything in Antarctica is white??? Is that just to add xtra imagery or what?!

  • MRFan

    Just extra imaginary…kind of comic relief…

  • Shahz

    Hey peoples. I haven’t wrote in for a while mostly cos of school and homework and cos i was bein lazy an not coming on the computer. By the way, the Shapeshifter books are amazing, there are 4 in all. I’ve read enders game ages before i knew about the blog and i didn’t think it was amazing but it was ok. I also thought that The Final Warning wasn’t as good as the first three (having finally read it after ages of waiting). By the way Voltaire, um heres your insult, umm you are a sexist moron.( I don’t actually think that!) Sorry, i’m not so good with insults:).

  • Shahz

    Oh yeah, i’ve also read the Artemis Fowl books, they are amazing:)!

  • voltaire

    thatnks i guess, i was mostly just looking for some good hate mail so i could make the sender look like an idiot. but i recomend you read children of the mind, on of ender’s game’s sequels. i guess those of you who are big mr fans might not actually enjoy reading the ednder’s game, its a bit more intelectual. not that im calling anyone dumb, its just that the only reason i even started reading the mr series was bcause i couldnt find a good book and i find the consept of flying almost euphoric. i cant think of a consept with more freedom atatched. but im ranking now so… i hope you give ender’s game a try but it is more of a novel for those who love to run with ideas. oh and as a writer myself im definatly going to check out the fan fic all u are talking about, i hope its as good as you say it is. the world needs young writers and its never too young to start look at paulini ( writer of eragon and eldest) oh and i also read all the alex rider books, the movie sucked though as did eragon, if you liked the books though i suggest young blood. pretty much an alex rider rip of but with more of a refined englich air to it. my posts are too long

  • ilovefangandmax

    no im not dancerpointe MRfan. I don’t have a fanfic. i only read them. i wanna get one ,but i don’t have a email address and my folks won’t let me get one. :(

  • voltaire

    pretty goof fan fic. i dont meen to tear but i know that perfection comes from curticism, so dont be hurt becasue i really like it. i just thought that it seemed a bit piuzzlepieced. with is to say that the dialogue was nothing that hadn’t been said before. it was almost as if you thought of each character’s most commone responce. eg. fang being brief, angel giving banbi eyes. im soory if i affended you with my curtecism

  • MRFan

    No not at all. What an author needs is well rounded critism!

  • iluvMR

    wow i was onli gone for three days and there are so many posts alreadi! umm MRfan jus wondering how to submit stories at fanfic, i jus registered so i am new there!

  • MRFan

    OK. yeah, i needed help at firt too!
    comment on one of my stories or whatever,, and i can send u a message on what to do.

  • voltaire

    if any of the gys on this thing have a good suggestion for a book, im all ears. i got nothn on my plate and i havnt read a book in two months

  • Muscles

    MRFan,
    You should definitly write a book about vampires, those are very popular with teens right now. One with action, because I know you’re good at writing action-packed scenes.

  • MRFan

    Yeah, thanks. As soon as I am finshed Liquid Poiosn, I am going to start on a Twilight Fanfic. I might do tell a story about Esme’s past or something. Something new. So look for it as soon as I’m done Liquid Poison, which shouldnt be long now!
    Talk to you all later! I got to do an English Assignment now!

  • iluvMR

    ya Esme’s past is definitely sth new! Good luck with the new fanfic, most twilight fanfics are kinda boring… so i really hope urs is interesting…and sry voltaire but i can’t think of any good bk right now

  • MRFan

    Ok, someone else on fanfic wrote a story called Esme’s story..
    :(
    Just recently too.

  • MRFan

    Oh, and thank you Muscles for the comment about how I am good at writing action packed scenes! XD

  • iluvMR

    ok voltaire i finally found Ender’s Game in some old bookstore i used to think useless…and i just finished reading it and u r right ittis great!!!Though i dun really get y u called it intellectual…it seemed normal enough…ok maybe not so wen compared to mr. just to make sure that i have got the facts right the next book after ender’s game is speaker for the dead right?
    oh n for all those who haven’t read ender’s game yet u should definitely read it!Come to think of it ittis really like mr.For instance in mr the flock is tortured and experimented on and they r sort of pushed to their limits during the tests of their endurance. In ender’s game the kids r recruited at a young age to save the world and they dun really have much of a childhood, Ender
    (the foreseen commander of the human army)is forced to fight for himself at the age of six, he is monitored and everything that happens to him is all part of a test(like mr), he is pushed again and again to do stuff no one his age should be able to do… in the end he ends up being the strongest person in the army, and thats wen he breaks down.

    i didn’t want to be it to be a spoiler so that u’ll actually enjoy reading the book. i think this is my longest post so far usually mine add up to one or two sentences…anw sry that someone had the same idea as yrs mrfan u can still rite it anyway as long as ittis not the same as the other esme story, and thx voltaire for recommending me the book i haven’t read a good book in days.

  • MRFan

    yeah,it is too bad to hear that,but I am writing James’s Perspective now on what hapened in the end of Twilight.
    check it out! its called Jame’s Story.

  • voltaire

    ya the next one’s speaker of the dead. im glad you liked it. it is my favorite book. i read it the first time when i was 12 and the sotry and my 12 year old brain just clicked perfectly. random i know but, did you think the consept of the desks at the school in the beginning and the ones at the battle academy were like an ownsome idea. idk it just seemed so cool to me. once again im glad you liked it. I say we start a book list for all the frequent bloggers. kinda like oprahs just not like oprah’s hahahaha First Book:Ender’s Game – Orson Scott Card

  • ilovefangandmax

    guys guess wat?! I found a new summary for the 5th MR! go to james patterson.com then click on coming releases, then click on MAX, then go on to the barnes and noble.!

  • MRFan

    I don’t know where to find MAX, ilovefanfandmax

  • DanMan

    OMG yes they r makin the movie james patterson himself said so on his website its gonna ROCK!!!

  • MRFan

    You mean they have started filming the movie, DanMan? Or they are going to make one, because we all knew that already. XD

  • MRFan

    I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHO THE ACTORS ARE FOR THE MOVIE! THATS ALL I NEED TO KNOW RIGHT NOW! THEN I CAN WAIT FOR THE MOVIE, I JUST WANT TO KNOW HIS ACTING IN IT!

  • voltaire

    idk i fim even wnat to see it. after that last mr book, i dont think james paterson desrves money for a while, till he redeems himself with a boo that doesnt have a some ridiculous alterior motive. and for any new people who havent read the past posts…. Hi im Voltaire, im the site cynic and i hated the last book. i enjoy pina coladas and getting caught in the rain. for more about me, see post # 494

  • MRFan

    ilovefandandmax, could you possibly give me the link to see the summary for the fifth book. i cant find it.
    thanks!

  • ilovefangandmax

    um i don’t know how to give u the link. Here did u go on James patterson.com?

  • iluvMR

    a book list? u mean come up with one on our own? anyway, i agree dat ender’s game should be at the top of the list. n I seriously dun noe y u guys r so psyched up over the the fifth’s book summary its been posted on this blog before, if i m not wrong ittis ’bout the fishes of the sea or sth like that anyway. oh ya n if anyone finds out who is acting in the mr movie can u post it here pls!

    thx.

  • DES

    the 5th book sound good but i hope much better than the last book.

    P.s if u know when the MR movie comes out please post.

  • ilovefangandmax

    NO DUR! i’m the one who posted the 5th book summary before!!!!!!!!!!! There’s a new summary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DUR!

  • iluv mr

    oh sry then,but i still dun see y ur’ll r so excited, i mean ittis not like jp finally came to his senses and changed the storyline. i mean it is pretty much the same thing right?

  • MRFan

    If its gonna be like the fourth one, I’m not excited. IF not, then great! Cant wait!

  • ilovefangandmax

    im excitied!!!!!!!!!!oh and iluvmr, im sorry that my comment sounded mean. i didn’t mean for it to sound rude. also here i’ll just give u guys the new summary. hold on.

  • ilovefangandmax

    THIS IS THE NEW SUMMARY:Comfortable in their new safe house,max and the rest of the flock finally begin to feel optimistic about their newly gained freedom. Then the machine geeks appear-part machine,part human,totally destuctive.They are in a service of an ominous mr.chu-who has his eyes on the flock and their unique abilities.And if he can’t have them, he’ll make sure nobody else can either!-As the flock battles the machine geeks,trouble is bubbling to the surface of the ocean. Millions of fish are dying and someone is destroying hundreds of boats.The government asks for the flocks help and it seems to be the perfect chance to escape from mr.chu and his marauding gang of thugs–especially if it means a trip to hawaii!But danger continues to threaten max and her friends.Can they protect themselves from mr.chu and save the ocean from utter desrtution?

  • Shahz

    Hey peeps, i think the new blurb sounds quite gd. i hope its better than the 4th book. Wot do u think about it?

  • Maximum fo-bo

    Wow….MRfan i love those fanfics there awesome….:-)

  • iluvmr

    ittis fine ilovefangandmax i was wrong anyway…the new summary is ok i guess, still not realy convinced that it is goin to be better than the 4th bk, but i m keeping my fingers crossed!

  • I heart Fang!

    I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!! KEEP WRITING THEM J. PATERSON!!!!!!! I HEART FANG AND MAX!!!! THEY ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • ilovefangandmax

    lol. i think the 5th bk will be better.i hope. hey um MRfan have u read the one relocation on fanfic?

  • nightrider

    sorry i havent posted in a while ive been lazy (and sick) you know what would be weird but interesting at the same time if max fell in love with an eraser kinda like a modern day romeo and juliet

    p.s. heres youre comment voltaire youre a fuckface-shitbrained idiota

  • MRFan

    Maximum Fo-Bo, thanks for the comment! And, I luvfanfandmax, i havent read that yet. Can you send me the link?
    And i am currently writing another story called to Kill or not kill. no one is reviewing, even though there are high hits. Please review!
    THANKS! XD

  • ilovefangandmax

    sorry! but how do u send a link?

  • voltaire

    does anyone here watch heroes on nbc. random i know but i love that show.

  • MRFan

    umm
    go to you story, copy what is in the url bar
    paste it here
    and we will read !
    no, i dont watch heroes. i just got into secret life of an american teenager. its not that bad.

  • iluvmr

    oh i read relocation too, its quite nice…
    here is the link.
    n i have onli seen a few episodes of heroes, i stopped watching the show after a while…

  • nightrider

    has anyone read the gatekeeper series

  • Shahz

    Is it the power of 5 series by anthony horowitz? If so, i have and i can’t wait for the next 1.

  • MRFan

    Quick Question: In relocation, they do get their memories back eventually right? Right!?

  • Shahz

    Yep, they sure do MR fan.

  • Shahz

    ilovefangandmax, i read relocation 2, its rely gud, keep writing!

  • http://www.myspace.com/TheRealAmberSkye Amber Skye

    I absolutley LOVE the Maximum Ride books. Ive read the first three so far in only 4 days. I’m very drawn to Max, I seem to relate to her. And as for Fang, well, WOW. He is like totally amazing. I really want him and Max to get over there pride and just admit there crazy about each other. These books are amazing and i’d love to hopefully someday watch the movie. As long as the people playing Max and Fang are the same people that are on the covers of the books. Thanks James Patterson, I love your work.

    Amber

  • ilovefangandmax

    oh shahz. i’m not the one who wrote relocation. i wish, but no. iluvmr thx for putting a post for everyone to see. Relocation is like a awsome story! i love it! and i have seen heroes i watch the show here and there.

  • k

    Has the cast been selected yet for the movie?

  • DES

    sorry i haven’t posted in a while so what’s knew @

  • DES

    on this blog

  • ilovefangandmax

    LOTS IS NEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not really actually. nice to have u back though.

  • MRFan

    Hmm. I cant think of anything to write.
    I’m bored . XD

    I want them to post the cast for the movie! I wanna see who is playing Max and Fang !
    PS I hope the girl that did the commercial for the books is Max.
    And ilovefangandmax, remember when I told you about taht commerical “maximum ride trailer last two of two” and you saw it..can yu give me the link, cause i cant find it anywheree ! :S

  • DES

    who found ever find the date and cast for maximum ride post it PLEASE!!!

  • MRFan

    I dont think they have a cast yet.. however, i heard that they casted the girl in the commercail (Amy rose) as Max, but i dont know if thats true.

  • voltaire

    wow long time no post but ya lots of stuff. first is to nightrider, i just have to say ” what????”. i havent post in forvever and i suddenly read that i need to f off or something. random but ok i actually read the fan fics u all have been raving about and both are pretty good, as i told ilovefangandmax before.umm what else… i too like the secret life of the american teenager even though im a dude. ya wierd i know but its like a train wreck, i cant look away. and ya i just wanna tell everyone to stop asking for updates on the cast or the lastest summary of book 5. when one of us know, im sure they will tell the rest of us. high to any new people and… i accuse shaz of either being the latest monitor for the blog or else just very stupid

  • ilovefangandmax

    HI voltaire! u havn’t posted in forever! oh and MRfan… wat do u want me to put a link on again?

  • DES

    Hi! I got an idea for another MR fanfic someone should mix The Dangerous Days of Daniel X and MR that would be a good story with fax of couse and maybe some dax or not

  • emilly

    i so love this book i finished it in school and i am reading it at home and i am almost finished with it i am going to get the whole series.

  • nightrider

    I got new internet woo-hoo

  • ilovefangandmax

    soooo……now wat?

  • Shahz

    Hi evryone! Sorry i havnt posted for ages peoples..and Voltaire what do u mean monitor or just stupid? and iluvfangandmax thanks for telling me ur not the author. by the way, Who is? Nearly halfterm and halloween. Just one more day till half term holidays!!! Can’t wait, well i can, but i dont want to. anyway im babbling….so…anything new?reply soon evryone!
    Shahz

  • DES

    there really isn’t nothing new if anyone thinks of something post it. :)

  • ilovefangandmax

    Shahz, i’m not sure of who the author is, i just know the username.

  • Shahz

    Ok thanx ilovefangandmax.
    p.s what’s everyone’s nationality?
    I’ve alredy asked this but, u no its just something to keep us occupied :)

  • Shahz

    oh, and by the way, has anyone read the inheritance cycle – Eragon, Eldest, Brisingr(the newest one, out in September 08) and also, has any1 read any julia golding books? She’s a rely gud author!:)
    Shahz

  • MRFan

    Umm..ilovefangandmax, i wanted you to post the link for that trailer i told you about a while back (maximum ride trailer (last two of two) you said you saw it and i cant find it anywhere and i was hoping you could sentithere.
    THANKS!
    :)

  • DICK

    AWESOME

  • Shahz

    Hiya peoples, Mrfan, u no the liquid poison and wings weapons and whitecoats fanfic? Is it urs? and is it a mr fanfic? please reply soon. Thanx
    Shahz

  • MRFan

    Yeah. Both those fanfics are mine. and they are mr fics. also, has anyone read daniel x? i have been debating about getting it for so long. is it any good?

  • voltaire

    hey, umm were do i start. shazh, i accuse every new person who says anything good about book four of being a monitor. mainly because i wouldnt pay the book a compliment unless you were to pay me. i do it to everyone new, relax. two yes iv read eragon and eldest and have just purchases brasingr from target. three im from california, four as i get older and continue to read the inheritence cycle, the author christopher paulini slowly ceases to amaze me. the books seem to be worse and worse. at this point in the book im under the impression that most 5th grader if given his oultine of backstory and magical races could produce a more pleasing combination of words. hi to everyone and ill end it by accusing emilly of being a monitor for jp

  • DES

    yeah the danielx is a good books. oh and before i forget i’m from californa east los angeles

  • Shahz

    Thanx peoples
    Shahz

  • Shahz

    oh yeah, before i forget what age is evry1, annoying i no, but i’m curious about this stuff for some reason, im 14 in year 10.
    Shahz:)

  • Shahz

    by the way evry1, what time does this blog work on, cos its 11:40 am in england.wow im writing a lot today!
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    sorry i havent posted in awhile getting used to my new internet i also figured out whose playing gazzy in the movie and he looks just like i imagined him except i thought his hear was straight not curled

  • ilovefangandmax

    OH…i don’t know where the trailer is. I can’t find it and also i might be reading daniel x soon.idk. oh and my rationality is hispanic.

  • iluvmr

    so i guess daniel X is good? cos i have wanted to read it for quite some time…n i have read the inheritance cycle n ittis good i guess… jus a little draggy.oh n nightrider WHO is playing gazzy?

  • nightrider

    i still aint tellin

  • nightrider

    oh yeah wings weapons and whitecoats was awsome

  • nightrider

    i just stumbled across this i was looking for a mr movie preview when i saw an mr trailor with the background (disturbed) song land of confusion to get to it go to youtube and type in Maximum ride with disturbed and it should pop up

  • DES

    WHO’S playing gazzy! OH and I’m hispanic and 13 years old. PLEASE TELL WHO”S PLAYING GAZZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • MRFan

    Thanks nightrider for the compliment on my book. Have you read the sequal?
    And whats this about knowing who plays Gazzy?

  • MRFan

    If someone knows who is playing Gazzy they need to tell us all ! Or its not fair!:)

    And i tried looking for that youtube video. I couldnt find it.

  • MRFan

    I FOUND OUT WHO WAS PLAYING GAZZY!

  • MRFan

    Who is playing Gazzy I should say.

  • ilovefangandmax

    WHO??????!!!!!!!!!oh and DES,i’m just like you…hispanic and 13!

  • DES

    cool ilovefangandmax. I live in east los angeles and go to montebello intermidate(MOI). what about everyone else. and WHOS playing GAZZY PLEASE TELL US!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • iluvmr

    argh come on jus TELL us who plays gazzy alreadi! and how did u guys “figure it out” anyway?

  • Shahz

    Yeah peoples tell us whos playin GAzzy, PLEASE!!!
    oh and thanx for telling me ’bout yourselves evry1.PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASETELL
    Shahz :)

  • MRFan

    go to http://www.imdb.com
    search maximum ride
    he is under cast!

    good luck!

  • nightrider

    hehehe

  • DES

    thanx

  • Shahz

    Thant MRfan

  • DES

    Finally he kind of looks like I imaged except for the hair

  • Shahz

    I agree with u DES! Hey, evry1 u no the trailer for maximum ride? Doesn’t max have brown eyes not blue?Sort of sad of me I no:)
    Shahz

  • iluvmr

    Finally!
    thx MRFan:)
    i agree with Des, the hair is kinda…ummm… different… anyways i hope they get the rest of the cast out soon!

  • DES

    yeah his hair is different but i hope the rest of the cast lookd like i imaged them.

    (:!!!!!!!!!!!HAPPY HALLOWEEN EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!:)

  • nightrider

    woah i overloaded myself on chocolate but i know there are some t… never mind

  • ilovefangandmax

    Happy Halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

  • nightrider

    finaallly my pc could support the pregame lobby videos my moms asleep so i was bightin my fingers to keep from bustin my gut

  • Shahz

    Hey peoples, anything new and interesting? If so plz share. Shahs:)

  • MRFan

    Nothing new, Shahz.
    Same old, same old.
    I just finished another Fanfic. Now I need ideas for others!
    Anyone got any?

  • Shahz

    Hey ppls, guess what? I finished Wings, Weapons and Whitecoats and Liquid Poison! They were both coolio but there were lots of mistakes on it. I’ll probably make tons of mistakes now! LOL
    Shahz

  • Connie Stepp

    I just love the max books, I cant wait for the new one to come out

  • MRFan

    What kind of mistakes did i make Shahz? Just asking for future reference!
    I have been checking imdb.com everyday now to see if they had posted any new actors. If i see any, ill let you guys know first !

  • Shahz

    Well, MRfan, they were mostly spelling mistakes but sometimes you mixed up words in sentences. You also said would of instead of would have and you said something like didn’t’t. Thats pretty much it. Oh, can someone tell me what the twilight series is like, if it is more for girls or boys and stuff like that please? I’d appreciate it!
    Shahz

  • Shahz

    Oh, I almost forgot, are there any new fanfics? Ones that I can understand because I have read the book? If so pls tell. Thanx
    Shahz

  • iluvmr

    in my opinion twilight is more for girls, but i noe guys who have read it and liked it so i guess it depends…oh n if u wanna read a MR fanfic, heres one there is also another good one but ittis kinda depressing, this is the link.
    hope u guys like it,they r one of my favs:)

  • Shahz

    Thanx iluvmr!
    Shahz

  • ilovefangandmax

    ooooh! i have fanfic idea that u should write Mrfan! it’s just a sugestion. Wat if max and the flock while flying ran into another flock only max finds out sam is in that flock! there should be mega fax and lots of sam+max!and fang should get jealous!

  • DES

    thats a good fanfic, i agree with ilovefangandmax

  • Shahz

    I absolutely agree with ilovefangandmax and DES. That is an excellent idea! BTW I read the first fanfic you suggested but at that time I had to copy the website name thing:) Evryone, what happened to Whoami ? I think he stopped posting when I started:/ Thanx for the sites iluvmr!
    Shahz:)

  • http://maximumridefan Maie

    I just want to say I’d love to see the girl in twilght play max and Selena Gomez to play Ella

  • MRFan

    I like Kristen Stewart, and i think she’s going to be an amazing bella in twilight, but not for Max. I dont like her.
    Yeah, I was going to say, what did happen to Whaomi?
    Hmm.

  • Shahz

    Oh, peoples I suggest u read the Percy Jackson and the Olympians series by Rick Riordan and Julia Golding books(she is a really good author) and the shapeshifter series by Ali Sparkes.
    They are all really good books!
    Shahz

  • ilovefangandmax

    thx for the suggestion Shahz! oh and MRfan…would u plz write that fanfic?

  • MRFan

    I guess a little short one about that couldnt hurt. (Ten chapters?)
    But what could happen other than the jealousy? I need something else to happen. (You know, a REAL plot.) :)

  • Shahz

    MRfan plz start soon, it seems like a rely good idea! Oh I was Reading the blog and I noticed there are different comments that I didn’t see before or something but there are definitely more comments. :) I want 2 read something now. *sigh* I might look around on the fanfic site for any good fanfics! I have no idea why I put an exclamation mark there. Wow I’m writing a lot today. YAY, I practically finished my h/w in school! Coursework sucks. I’m happy I don’t have to do any right now. PLs reply soon :)
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    have a good idea for a fanfic but im perfecting it in my head

  • iluvmr

    i like ilovefangandmax suggestion for a fanfic ittis pretty good, MRFan u could make them work together to defeat itex or sth…anyways i agree that kristen stewart should not play max, for one bella and max have totally different personalities and it would be seriously weird to see them being played by the same person. oh n do u all still have school or sth cos my school closed a week ago…n i always wanted to noe if all holidays start at the end of the year.

  • Shahz

    Unfortunately, iluvmr, I have school again. Its only been a day or 2 since the end of the FIRST HALF TERM holidays! I wish we were back in summer holidays.*sigh*.
    Shahz:)

  • MRFan

    Ok. I’ll start writing and see what I can come up with. The first chapters might be posted this weekend? Maybe..

  • Shahz

    Thanks MRfan

  • MRFan

    Ok, I am already in the middle of another story, but when i am finished i will start writing that story! I PROMISE. PINKY SWEAR.

  • DES

    cool a new story did any one read Wings Of Wrath i thought it was good what did u guys thing.
    P.S. Obama won the election who did u guys vote for

  • Shahz

    Hey peeps, DES, how old r u? Did u actually vote? BTW I’m british, not american :) .MRfan, wot fanfic r u half way through? Please start the other one soon!:) and DES, even though I am not american I wanted Obama 2 be president- I think john mcain said sometime bout obama wanting to invade Pakistan, did he? I hope not. :) He made history 2day, the first black american president! and just in case u r thinking it I am not obsessed with america!

  • nightrider

    hey guys im here sucking on a warhead (extremely sour candy in fact so sour it makes the inside of your mouth shrivel up) im still thinking about the fanfic im going to write but im going to let mrfan to write it (if i do ) something messed up my email which means i cant write it

  • MRFan

    Ok, nightrider. Sucks that your email wont work.
    And, Shahz, I am in the middle of another story that should be posted fairly soon. I’m not going to tell you the plot though, cause last time i did that, i think someone took my idea. keep an eye out for it though!

  • Shahz

    Coolio, thanx MRfanand I agree with MRfan bout ur email,I hope it works for u in the end:) Cant wait till ur fanfic is finished so I can read it MRfan! Wanna read urs 2 nightrider! Its like 11:43 in England – just thought u might wanna no!
    Shahz
    P.S its like 11:45 now:)

  • DES

    I’m 13 why? I meant who did u want to be presindent besides i’m not old enough to vote. great fanfics by the way.

  • Shahz

    thanks for straightening that out DES! Pls could u tell me what ur fanfic’s name is, MRfan?so i can read it:) tellme if u hear anything peeps:)
    Shahz
    P.S. Hope ur email starts working nightrider:)

  • MRFan

    Don’t have a title yet, Shahz. When get one, and when its posted, ill let you know! :)

  • Shahz

    Thanx MRfan

  • iluvmr

    wow…so Obama really is the first black american president? sry for being so ignorant, i just never bothered much about America’s history(no offence)

  • Shahz

    Dont worry iluvmr, there’s no need and I’m not even american I’m british. Pls get ur fanfic’s posted MRfan and nightrider! Cant wait 2 read them :)
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    im just going to write it down here maybe one of you will copy it to fanfic .net but if you do please give me credit

    p.s. ill have first chap in a few hours got something to do now

  • nightrider

    YOU GUESSED IT FIRST CHAPTER. RATE ME 1-10

    REVIEW the flock meets another winged child after mr2 how will they respond, how will he respond maybe a little FAX okay im joking moderate FAX + language

    CHAPTER 1

    Shadows pov

    I stared out at the itex building in Florida. Yep the one and only in Florida and at that thought I clenched my fists, oh how I hated that place so badly. Thinking about itex brought back some hated memories especially the ones about Kaiser my best friend,leader of their group and my girlfriend. I scowled trying to get her picture out of his head “god damnit why cant I stop thinking about her” I said to myself and just blanked my mind like I usually do when my brain goes down this path. Of course to everyone who had ever met me this was normal.People whod met me said I had no heart just a big block of ice or that I was just an uninteractive person who showed no interests in life. “That isnt true” I thought. “I do like some things like uh heavy metal and hot wings and cars and some other stuff like that”. “Yeah I remember when ghos… uhh why the hell cant i stop thinking about them” I thought. And before I knew what was happening i was crying my eyes out. “big crybaby” I thought to myself but i just couldnt stop, it was about everything that had ever happened Kaiser then ghost then my wings. Oh yeah if you are wondering about the wings part thats completely true,14 feet long black with a greyish tint at the top which faded into a silver. “Yeah my wings kick ass” I thought just before I heard a huge BOOM!!!!!! I heard and turned around towards itex they had a huge gaping whole in the wall. I tried to use my raptor vision to see what was going but a huge cloud of thick black smoke obscured my sight. “Probaly another genarator malfunction but it serves them right.” About two minutes later I heard voices “MAAAXXXXXXX can we please stop and rest im just so tired and… “Nudge can you be quiet for once youre making my eardrums bleed.” “sorry” that girl nudge said and made landfall. I pulled out my sharpest kinfe and came up with a plan.

    Maxs pov

    “Oh yeah ,” I said were gonna– “BLOW THIS JOINT” .”Total” I called , and he jumped into my arms and licked my cheek. We seriously have to talk about that and we did an up and away that looked like poetry. We flew on for a few more minutes before Nudge had to say something “MAAAXXXXXXX can we please stp and rest im so tired and… Iggy covered her mouth and replied “Nudge can you be quiet for one minute youre making my eardrums bleed” and he pointed at his ears. “sorry” nudge said and we touched land. As sone as my feet hit the ground I knew something was wrong and gave a look at fang.All he did was nod but before I could say anything I was shoved up against a tree with the cold steel of a knife at my throat and a snarly voice said ” make one move and i will bury this knife so far into your neck it would take a crack team of archealogists to find it “.

    ————————————————–
    hehehehe pleaseate 1-10 1=bad 10=perfect oh yeah and if you thought this was a chapter it isnt there will be more chapters to come though

  • Shahz

    nightrider, that is realy, realy, realy amazing but just a few spelling mistakes. I would rate it 9 out of 10. Pls upload again soon!
    Shahz

  • Shahz

    nightrider, that is realy, realy, realy amazing but just a few spelling mistakes. I would rate it 9 out of 10. Pls upload again soon!
    Shahz

  • MRFan

    Hmm..I’d give it an eight or seven? It is really good.

  • DES

    that sounds good nightrider upload it on the blog so we can read it and your fanfic name.

  • iluvmr

    That was good…
    u just had quite alot of spelling mistakes and grammar too….
    but other than that it was great!
    i really like ur story line…u shld post the link to ur story here, then we could help u review. trust me, the more reviews u have the better, most ppl read fnfics with a large no. of reviews.

  • nightrider

    more to come

  • Shahz

    Thanx nightrider
    Shahz

  • nightrider

    forgot to mention in summary there will be SAISER
    as well as FAX and i need help with a title cant think of one
    ————————————————–

    Shadows pov

    I looked at the person who i pulled the knife on and was suprised to find it was a girl.”She is really pretty” was my very first thought “wait what the hell” that was the first time i’d thought that about another girl. The girl was 14 maybe 15 long blonde hair and a grey tattered shirt with blue jeans.Suddenly I heard a noise behind me and whirled around a tall guy with pretty much all black clothes launching a roundhouse kick at me. I practically laughed when i caught the kick and twisted it which made him fall on his back and without hesitation kicked him it the rib.CRACK!!!! “ooh that had to hurt”.But he jumped right back up and launched a punch at my jaw and it hit dead on causing me to fly backwards.”what am I doing with these people” I thoughtand launched myself into the air and used my hyper speed and was soon going at least 220 miles per hour.”Nobody could catch me now” I thought and slowed down and turned around.But instead of seeing a blank sky he saw a dark shape rapidly approaching

    Maxs pov

    He took off into the sky and I was right behind but i was suprised to see him blasting off at about 200 miles kind of like my “warp drive” as gazzy called it.I then conentrated and felt the air warm up and was soon blasting through the air. The forest around me was a big green blur. Then I saw something up ahead.OH MY GOD it was that kid and I was going to fast to slow down.What can I do?

    Shadows pov
    That black shape formed as it came closer and at about 50 yards away it took the form of a kid.And at about 20 yards away I found out it was that girl.”wait what am I doing standing err..flying here”.I tried to move out of the way but wasn’t fast enough and she slammed into me at 200 mph.I heard at least 6 things crack. I tried to open my wings to stop the fall but instead crashed causing my wings to crack.I let out a low pitiful moan before I sank into a blessed painless darkness.

  • Shahz

    That is realy gud nightrider, pls upload more and quickly!
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    you guessed it…(And gauranteed FAX)

    CHAPTER 3

    Maxs pov
    I landed in the clearing that he crash landed in.”Ooh this looked really ,really bad and it was confirmed when iggy checked him out.”whats up ig” I said.”whats up max well i will tell you that when you tell me how you about killed him” he replied.”I about killed him”! I exclaimed.”Yeah not to mention he has 5 broken ribs, a broken arm 2 broken fingers, a snapped wrist,broken nose,a sprained ankle and both his wings are broken” he said and I sucked in a quick breath at the damage”I hadnt meant to hurt him that bad”.”well patch him up as well as you can” I said.Pretty soon we had a fire going and our “guest” looked like a mummy.”Alright time for bed” I said to the flock several grumbles were heard but they listened.”I’ll take the first watch” I said. Pretty soon i heard iggys snores (he does snore by the way) when I felt the hairs on the back of my neck stand up.”Will you stop that” I said and whirled around .As usual I heard the same voice “quit what,breathing” said fang. I replied “yeah can you stop breathing,on my neck” .Suddenly fangs face became a mask of seriousness “max we need to talk” he said.”Well talk i’m listening” I replied and crossed my arms across my chest. Well um…Max ummm.”Wow this is the first time i’ve made you nervous” I said.”Max umm.. Oh what the hell” he said and leaned down and kissed me.”OH MY GOD THIS IS ME AND FANG”I thought but I couldnt do anything about it. “go with the flow max” the voice said.”Great it just had to pop up now” I thought.But followed its advice and just went with it.By time we pulled apart we were both gasping for air.Then fang pulled me close, so close I was practically on his lap. Suddenly he whispered in my ear”max sometimes when hold you I never ,ever want to let you go.And suddenly he layed me down and wrapped an arm around me and said “Dont worry max i’ll always be here for you”.I replied “you sure becoming a chatterbox” .”Yeah but only around you” he said and he smiled one of those smiles that made it seem like the sun was coming up and he leaned over to kiss me again but before we got 1 inch from each other before a voice said “you mushy mushy birdkids goi’n all smoochy smoochy in the middle of the night” And I turned to see who the voice was coming from. It was that kid.

  • MRFan

    Um…kind of sudden…and unfanglike…

  • ilovefangandmax

    Wow! i havn’t posted in a long time. That’s because i was in california for my birthday. My birthday’s tomarrow! Nov-10! im so excitied! anyways… back to u guys;MRfan thx for writing the fanfic! im cant wait till you finish it. i bet it will be good. And nightrider your fanfic is AWSOME! i love it!keep writing!

  • nightrider

    uhh thanks

  • MRFan

    Ok. Here’s the deal. I have kind of hit MAJOR writers block for my fanfic that i am writing. So, I am going to go ahead and start this other one with Sam that you want me to write. Sound good?
    However, I need help. I’m going to have Sam’s flock/group have the key to defeating Itex. GOt any ideas on what that could be? If so, let me know (haha that rhymed) because the story cant go on without it.
    THANKS! :)

  • Shahz

    Hey nightrider, ur fanfic’s still realy gud. some writers can’t maintain a certain quality throughout their writing! u have a gud plot and u write It realy well. and mrfan, the key could be a person that is traveling with Sam’s flock!
    post soon both of u.
    Shahz:)

  • MRFan

    Hmm. i like that ideas Shahz. But what do you mean excactly by that? How could that certain person be the key to destorying Itex? Please answer.
    AND WOW. I just had a really good thought. I think this is going to be a good story.

  • MRFan

    OK.
    THERE IS A NEW FANFICTION.NET SITE AND I HATE IT.
    I cant get to see my reviews. I dont know how it works! Can someone please let me know ! THANKSS SOO MUCH !

  • nightrider

    this chapters going to be good you will get a flasback about what happened to shadow

    CHAPTER 4

    Shadows pov

    “you mushy, mushy birdkids goi’n all smoochy, smoochy in the middle of the night” I said. Then the girl turned to look at me and said “so”.I could tell by the tone of her voice she was suprised.”Now all I have to do is stall for time and I could probaly get my knife” I thought.”So” I said “how long you guys been together”.Then the tall dark one replied “why do you wanna know , jealous” he said and grinned.Suddenly I reached for my knife cause I was so pissed.But was I suprised when I felt nothing but empty air. ” Huh ,what the hell” I said and his grin grew even bigger.Then he pointed to a spot on the ground. All my weapons were there 2 c4 grenades, a black switchblade that I kept in my back pocket, two strike throwing knives in my pockets, my very special diamond tipped knife I got from kaiser and a butcher knife from my backpack. “Wait they’d been in my backpack ooh I was going to murder them”. “But they had all si… wait 1 2 3 4 5″ now I was grinning and they looked confused. I reached down into my shoe and pulled out a mini kitchen knife. Youre probaly wondering why I have a knife in my shoe well you never know, like now. “Now you guys tell me who you are” I said. The girl replied “okay I’m max, he’s fang,the tall one is iggy , The tall black girl is nudge and the two are re lated are gazzy and angel”.” Come on more then names like how you got your wings”. ” They looked weird at me and told me everything. An even I have to admit there story was rough but not as much as mine”. I told them about my 11 years at the school in minnesota and about how me ghost and kaiser escaped My first date with kaiser and this was the part I was most scared about.

    FLASHBACK

    They threw a bloodied and bruised kaze into the cell we were trapped in. I wasted no time in running to her side. “Kaze, KAZE” i yelled at her and she smacked me. “Uhhhhh will you stop yelling at me you’re giving me a headache. she said. “Sorry” I said to her and leaned down and kissed her, OOOHHHHH I heard ghost moan and he put his hands in front of his eyes and I just grinned and I leaned down to kiss her again but was interrupted by Dr roland . “Uhhh I need uhhh expirement x-jy62g1 and uhhh expirement x-tl56z2″ he said .”Yeah uhhh well do uhh whatever you want uhhh” Kaze said with a straight face and I grinned but that grin went away when I heard they’d been killed. “WHAT” I yelled and burst into tears and pulled out the very special blade that kaze gave me and stabbed the exucutioner and burst through them out a set of doors and took off into the night sky.

    “Shadow youre crying” the girl max said. And I realised that I was wet with tears. “I wiped my face and said “go to sleep i’ll take watch” . They nodded and moved next to the fire to sleep. I bet it wont be 5 minutes before there next to eachother again. And you know what I was right.

  • DES

    Thats good nightrider keep writing. So whats new

  • MRFan

    Aww.. poor Kaze.
    Its kind wierd how they trust him so quickly though! :)
    i started my fanfic, and i stil would like you guys to let me know how a girl in Sams flock ahs the key to destroying Itex.

  • nightrider

    Action coming up in it also explains why trust came so easily

    CHAPTER 5

    Shadows pov

    I was on my watch when it happened 15 erasers burst through the trees. I hopped down from the tree I was in and gave max a little kick to wake up and she jolted out two fingers onto the nearest person which happened to be fang and before too long everyone was on their feet.This was going to be fun.

    Maxs pov

    A little kick in the ribs woke me up. “UUhhh is it my watch already”. Then I heard erasers voices and woke up fang and in under 5 seconds we were all on our feet. I launched a punch at an erasers jaw hearing the satisfied crack of a tooth coming out. The erasers eyes were bloodshot with anger and he punched me in the rib and my breath left me in a whoosh but used the momentum to fuel a snap kick and the eraser was out for the count. I checked up on the flock. Everyone was doing fine but that one kid shadow he was fighting off 2 at once. I dont see how he could fight at all with those broken bones but he was. then 5 of them ganged up on him. Then he pulled out 2 similar knives and shoved them right between their eyes. I was horrified this guy was commiting murder like it was nothing. “But my sensible side says he might of died if he hadnt done that” I thought. The rest of the erasers were easy pickins. “we have to get out of here” I said and nodded into shadows position and said “can you fly”.He extended his wings and flapped a little and sucked in a small breath. “I can Fly” he said through gritted teeth.”Are you sure” I asked and he just nodded and we took off. After at about 5 minutes of flying about 85 miles an hour I noticed shadow was a little behind and flew back and asked him “are you sure you dont wanna land” and again he nodded and said “yeah” but it was strained and I cant believe I’m saying this but I was worried. Then I flew up to angel and asked “Angel I know you gave us some info about him but could you give us more” and she nodded.But then her eyes turned shadier with troubled knowledge . And said to me ” max that school was terrible and then suddenly a picture was in my mind “huh angel hadnt been able to do that before” . It showed a human-avian hybrid getting beat senseless with a belt. Then a whitecoat said “now we can do this the easy way or the hard way. “The hard way” the kid said and I knew he had tasted freedom because he had on a ragged t shirt and some blue jeans. Then the whitecoat laid him down on an operating table to where his wings were facing up and the whitecoat took out a saw .I saw the cold fear enter the kids eyes and he said in a weak voice “you wouldnt” and the whitecoat just replied “I would” and the last thing I heard were the kids painful screams. I flew back to shadow and had angel send the same thought to him and asked” who is that kid and why is he in youre memory”. He finally looked up at me and his face was controted in agony and he said painfully “he was my brother”

  • ilovefangandmax

    WOW! that’s really good nighrider. Write more plz! Oh and MRfan, i sooooooo excitied that ur working on the story! My idea is that the girl has tons of freaky powers like angels, but scarier! oh and make sure you have sam/max and FAX and tons of jealousy. sorry about the reminder, but i really love the fanfics with fang jealous instead of max being jealous. idk why. Oh and can you post the 1st chapter here plz. it’s fine if u don’t want to. i understand. LOVE U ALL!

  • nightrider

    CHAPTER 5

    shadows pov

    “Can we land now” I practically pleaded. Sure I was sore but I wanted to check up on some stuff that was important.Max didn’t say anything just motioned for everyone to land. As soon as I landed I went off into the brush and I heard max ask “Hey where are you going”? And I just said “Out here for some privacy” she started to follow but I said “alone” and she started to make place on the ground for a fire . Once I was far enough away I set my back pack on the ground and pulled a string out of my pocket and on the string were 2 keys and I used them to unlock 2 out of 3 locks on my backpack and I put in the combination for the last one and went through my most precious possesions a diamond ring,a few pictures, a typed letter until I got to my most precious item a black notebook. It was kind of like a journal except instead of just words it also had pictures videos music disks data stolen from the school and all my thoughts about everything.I when needed always wrote in it I remember one time when I was in the desert and I had nothing to write with so I used my own blood I ended up getting a broken rib from kaze for doing that I had stolen my black notebook from a whitecoat an he had never figured out who had stolen it. I wrote down a quick message and by time I came back Everyone was asleep. I curled up next to a tree and fell into a deep and troubled sleep.

    Maxs pov
    I woke up about a paticularly bad dream and went into the woods to use the bathroom. After my “business” was taking care of I noticed a little black notebook laying on the ground and opened it up, it was a journal.”I shouldnt be reading this” I thought but as they say curiosity killed the bird kid.I opened up to the first page and it had an intro

    INTRO
    If anyone is reading this besides me you better put this book drown because it is private property and I will kill you if you read it.

    “some intro” I thought then opened it up to the first page

    SEP 23 1997

    Just stole this notebook and I am using it for a journal testing sucked today they tried to see how fast and how long could I fly.

    I flipped randomly to another page.

    FEB 09 2002

    I think Im falling in love with expiriment x-jy62g1 she is so bueatiful and smart and she is another human-avian hybrid heres a pic of her.I looked at a picture of kaze and he was right she is pretty she had long blackish hair and cloudy brown eyes Which was almost opposite of shadows electric blue ones. I flipped to another page and it was written red ink .”wait that isnt red ink” I thought “Its …oh my god its written in blood I started to read it

    AUG 18 2003
    Were sitting at the top of mt rushmore right now and I cant stop looking at expirement x-jy62g1 aka kaze as she calls herself she is so gorg

    And thats as far as I got before the book was snatched out of my hands and shadow yelled “WHAT THE HELL MAX”.”WHY ARE YOU READING MY STUFF” he shouted and took off into the sky.

  • nightrider

    hoped you liked it im sorry for a bit of confusion but i forgot to add in the first paragraph he also wrote in his book using blood on mt rushnore

  • Shahz

    nightrider that is still realy gud and MRfan I agree with ilovefangandmax. she should have lots of freaky powers but not so scary!
    Shahz:)

  • MRFan

    Ok, ok I am liking where the ideas are going here. thanks iluvfangandmax, and Shahz.
    and nightrider, you do a really good job of describiing action scenes! good job! (chatper 4)

  • MRFan

    MY STORY IS POSTED !
    ITS CALLED : A key? Or another runaway hybrid?
    CHECK IT OUT !:p

  • MRFan

    Okey dokey.
    I need a name for the “key to destroying itex”
    she’s a girl. got any ideas?

  • Shahz

    Sorry, MRfan I don’t have a name that I think would suit her….yet!
    Shahz

  • nightrier

    CHAPTER SIX

    Ghosts pov

    “UGGGHHHH I was so mad at max, why the heck was she looking through my stuff anyways I thought. I went into super speed mode and I started to feel better until I thought “Oh my god I hope she didn’t read DEC 13 2005″ and I clenched my fists and started to go faster “whats this” I thought.400 500 600 700 suddenly I broke the sound record (751 mph) and in under 5 minutes I was in new york and I slowed down and landed on a building in times square. “Hey I got a great idea stupid but great” I thought.I jumped down and started going super fast and windows shattered because of the sound, papers blew evrywhere, telephone poles actually snapped in half and people were actually screaming. “WOOOHOOOOO” I shouted and kept flying until i landed in paris,yeah paris. I stopped and bought a soda in an internet cafe.Then I flew back and they were asleep then I saw something shiny and picked it up it was a dart.”Oh hell” I thought as I felt a prick in the back of my neck and sank into a dark slumber.

  • MRFan

    I think I have a name in mind, but if one of you give me a better name, I’ll change it.

  • nightrider

    sorry for such a short chapter and how aboutchristi or kayla

  • MRFan

    ok, the name i am thinking is Ariana.
    I found it on babynames.com! XD

  • MRFan

    I need specific powers for Ariana to defeating ITex. I am stumped and I need your help. The story cant go on without it !

  • Shahz

    Heya, nightrider, keep if up and MRfan, how about her being like a human weapon, they literaly fuse with the person they choose by singing their fusion song and they have other powers aswell like a healing song and a light attack song thing. I watched this anime called elemental gelade ages ago and that’s where the idea is from. they have a gem on their body as proof and evrybody wants their power. How about it? you should probably change stuff, like no gem and no singing, stuff like that:)
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    how about extreme strenghth not like the flock but much stronger superspeed and ability to go for periods up to an hour without oxygen wings immortality and invincibility (immortality and invincibility are totally different things immortal means live forever invincible means you cant be destroyed but you can still die)

  • nightrider

    a big suprise in…

    CHAPTER 7

    Shadows pov

    I woke up in a dog crate “as usual” I thought and I heard maxs voice “dont worry we will get out of this, we always do” she said. Then a whitecoat walked in with four erasers behind him. Then a weird eraser walked in with grey fur “wait grey fur” I thought “NO IT CAN NOT BE HIM” I though and looked up at his face and saw his shiny green eyes. It was him the exocutioner.

    Maxs pov

    Suddenly shadow went berserk and yelled “WHEN I GET OUT OF THIS CAGE I WILL PERSONALLY RIP YOUR THROAT OUT”. Then a grey eraser leaned down and said “well it’s a good thing that wont happen” “Oh we will see about that” he snarled and grabbed the bars and pulled then I heard a creaking sound and the whitecoats looked suprised. Then one of the bars snapped and it broke them out of their trance and they shouted “get the tranquilizer gun”. The whitecoat pulled out a weird gun as he unlocked the cage he jumped on the grey eraser and threw punch after punch as the whitecoat shot a dart into his back he was so pissed that he didnt even slow down the whitecoat launched three more darts and he still didnt slow down “thats impossible” the whitecoat said “thats enough tranquilizer to knock out an elephant” as he shot five more his punches slowed and soon he was unconcious.

    Shadows pov

    I woke up in a room white of course. As I sat up I felt a dizziness and had to use my hands to support myself. I took a look at my surroundings and saw a huge mirror probaly a one way knowing their tricks and saw another person with their back facing me. Then I saw a black and silver wing and even though I hadnt seen it in over a year. It was Kazes.

  • Shahz

    wow, how r they gonna get out of that? pls post soon.
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    CHAPTER 8

    Shadows pov

    “Oh my god” I whispered and went over to her and brushed some hair from her face to see if she wasnt just a hologram. She shot up and tisted my wrist then she saw who it was she had the same reaction “Oh my god” she said kind of hoarse from lack of sleep. “What had they done to her” I thought but said “how are you alive”.She looked at me and said “They tried to fuse the bones in an erasers neck and it brought him back to life and they did the same to me after you ran away so they would have an expiremental guinea pig” I replied “But I thought you were shot”. She said “Thank ghost for that he broke my neck right before he died of the gunshots he did me a favor”. A single tear rolled down her cheek “I miss him a lot” she said and sighed. “Yeah me too” I said and pulled her up into my lap and said “I wont let them hurt you no more”. But I added in my head “Or i’d die trying”.

    Maxs pov

    After they took shadows limp form away they took us to a white room with a mirror “probaly a one way” I thought. “Wow this is an improvement, really guys” I said at the mirror Then jebs voice was projected through hidden speakers “Max why dont you trust me” he said “cause youre a delusional maniac” I replied. “Max” he said “you cant deny youre destiny and that he said is to save the world” he said and I yawned knowing that would piss him off. And he said “dont screw this up max” and I heard a crackling sound as the speakers shut off leaving us alone.

    Shadows pov

    I woke up with kaze asleep in my lap “This is probaly the best sleep she has gotten in a while” I thought and clenched my fists. Then a whitecoat walked in and said “I need expirement x-jy62g1″ he said. “You leave her alone” I said in a low deadly voice and she woke up. “You leave her alone or I will snap your fingers one by one” and she looked shocked. He said “no I need her now” and I leaped up and snapped one of his fingers and he yelled out in pain and I just said “need any more encouragement”. He shook his head and got out as fast as he can. I pulled kaze back down and I said “I told you last night that I wont let them hurt you no more” and she just smiled and fell back asleep. A few hours later the whitecoat came back and shot me with a dart full of silver liquid.”What is this stuff” I said and he just sat back and waited for me to fall into unconciousness.

  • Shahz

    its like half past midnight here, on a FRIDAY, yay no school 2 morrow. Keep it up nightrider:)
    Shahz:)

  • ilovefangandmax

    MRfan; remember to have sam have wings like them. Also i read ur story and it is great. post soon plz MRfan!

  • MRFan

    OK.
    It won’t let me upload anything right now, so I’m going to upload Chapter 4 on here for now. I will post it on the fanfiction site as soon as i can.

  • MRFan

    Chapter 4:

    MAX POV:

    Adrenaline raced through my veins as I took a Flyboy out with a roundhouse kick. I had no time to see if the others were awake. Surely they were, right? I mean, how could they not be?

    Then, I heard a grunt from behind me, and turned to see Fang, his usually impassive face flaming anger. Good. At least I knew Fang was awake…

    I turned from Fang to see two Flyboys coming at me. I flew up higher at the last second, watching them crash into each other. There were ten of them…nine now, thanks to Angel’s ability to control minds. Ouch, that had to hurt.

    Gazzy and Iggy were dropping bombs from above, and I quickly did a U turn in mid air to avoid one. “Watch where your throwing those things!” I yelled.

    Max, Angel’s in trouble.

    I quietly regarded the Voice as I flew off to help Angel. Watching her struggle against three Flyboys brought back memories a few months ago, when she was taken back to the School. I shuddered, but also got flamed up, ready to rip apart anything.

    I lunged at one, giving Angel a break, and she flew off ten feet into the air. I took the Flyboy I had grabbed by the neck and looked into its lifeless red eyes.

    “I’m going to make scrap metal out of you!” I shouted, already beginning to punch the lights out of him, literally. The red glow faded and he dropped like a rock. Before I knew it, we had already defeated the ambushing Flyboys.

    “Sheesh” I said, looking over at Fang. “When will they learn to send more than a dozen?”

    Fang shrugged. “Hopefully never.”

    I nodded in agreement, looking at the pieces of metal below the trees.

    “Anyway, we need to get out of here. Come on, lets pack up our stuff”

    The flock hurried back to our tree, where we packed the little supplies we had and took off.

    “Come on guys, lets just get this School business over with.”

    They nodded. It wasn’t like they’d be able to fall back asleep now. Might as well do this while the adrenaline was pumping.

    We flew for forty minutes, until we reached what we knew was the School. Now that I thought about it, sneaking in in the middle of the night was probably a good idea. Certainly there cameras couldn’t see us at such a high altitude, in the middle of the night?

    I lowered myself slowly into the play yard, where Erasers were trained to hunt and kill their prey. It made me shudder, but it was our way in…and hopefully our way out.

    PAGE BREAK

    I crawled along the wall, my back stiff, my left hand out in front of me, feeling for signs of anything. A door, a window. Anything that would get us in. I put my hand further out in front of me, the brick wall rough on my hands. In less than a minute, I had found what I was looking for: a door. I knew it was a door as soon as my thin, bony and bloodied hand touched the cold, smooth surface. I moved my hand around more, looking for a way in. I felt the cold handle, and brought my hand back almost instantly. It was cold. Really cold. I jiggled it quietly, soon realizing that it was locked.

    “Iggy, over here, 1-o-clock”

    He nodded and crept his way from the back of the line to upfront where I was. It took him three minutes to open it, and in that time, no one had discovered us. I was getting a little creeped out. Was this a trap?

    Iggy opened the door and it swung open with a small creek. It was eerie, and made the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end. We followed in single file, Fang shutting the door behind us with a small click.

    The normally brightly lit hallways were pitch black, and luckily we could all see in the dark, it wasn’t really a problem. We moved along the hallway, our backs stuck to the wall like a static cling. When I realized we had no clue where we were going, I consulted Angel.

    “Can you figure out where we need to go from here?”

    She nodded and her eyes flew shut, concentrating hard. She was searching the minds of scientists, looking for a lay out of the area. Her eyes flew open and I acknowledged her.

    “Where to?”

    Angel looked up at the low ceiling above us, where a small vent was waiting. “Up.”

  • MRFan

    How is it? You can review here on the JP Blog. Thanks !

  • Shahz

    Its realy good, keep it up………upload soon plz! And could u have less cliffhangers aswell MRfan? Cliff hangers can be realy bad, especially in situations like that!
    Shahz:)

  • MRFan

    haha .
    ok less cliffhangers !
    ill try !

  • Shahz

    YAY!!!!!!!!!!
    ummmmm…….I mean……umm…*he regains composure* I mean cool! lol, thanx MRfan:)
    Shahz

  • ilovefangandmax

    lol! i loved it! it was awsome. i agree with the cliffhangers. post soon plz!

  • nightrider

    now you will find out what that silver liquid does and if you thought it was boring before things are about to heat up.

    CHAPTER 9

    Shadows pov (a dream)

    “Shadow” kaze yelled and I ran through thick underbrush with spiny plants instead of bushes. I ran into a clearuing that was half bright sunlight and the other half total darkness. Ian in just in time to see ghost get his throat ripped out by an eraser. “NO” I yelled and pulled out a knife and killed the eraser through the slashing of a vein and realized that all of the erasers were gone and grabbed kaze into a hug as she began to cry. Suddenly I transformed. My hair stood up in spikes, ragged 4 inch claws erupted from my fingers, my teeth grew until they were over an inch long, my eyes torned into red slits and I shoved my claws into Kazes ribs and laughed when she screamed in pain. And I said in a voice just like mine except it was more monster like “Youre time is up” and twisted my claws slashing her heart open and she stopped breathing and I let out one more evil laugh before I

    shadows pov

    I woke up in a cold sweat and bit my lip to keep from crying out and suddenly I felt a peircing pain in my lip and thought ” I must have bit my lip harder than I thought but then saw myself in the one way mirror. I looked at myself in the mirror and sucked in a breath I saw what I had in the dream. Me with claws, super sharp teeth, spiky hair, and red slits for eyes and immediatley got scared. Suddenly my claws and fangs grew a tad longer and I heard that same voice from my dream the one that sounds like me but more evil “Dont worry youll get used to it”. ” But I dont want to get used to it” I shouted back. I probaly looked like a fool yelling to no one. “You may look like a fool but all I can think about now is how hungry I am” evil voice said and as if on cue my stomach grumbled. A few hours later a whitecoat brought me some moldy bread looking strangley at me until I actually growled at him and he left in a hurry. “What am I turning into” I thought as I picked the bread up “I wouldnt do that if I were y” evil voice started but I put the bread in my mouth spitting it out as soon as I tasted it. “Oh god” I coughed as i started choking on the nasty taste. “Its not like I havent eaten moldy bread before, but it never tasted this bad” I thought. “What was in that silver liquid” I thought and I put my hood up and my hands in my pocket cause someone turned up the ac. Suddenly a teardrop went down my face “I might not be able to be with kaze or max and them because I might not be able to control myself” I thought. “Get ready here comes your chance to escape” said evil voice.

    Dr charles pov (a whitecoat)

    I was just about to leave work after a long and stressful day but nooo the mean Dr jonathan just had to make me do one more thing so he could get home early. “Jackass,retard,Shithead” and I went on in my head calling him every nasty name under the sun. I typed in the keypad code for my destination. I put a hand on my tranquilizer gun, Dr jonathan suggested this because this expirement number x-dx12z1 was highly dangerous and extremely violent. I opened the door and saw him just standing there hands in his pockets and his head down and I called out to him “hey freak howa ya doin” usually when a scientist made me mad I took it out on one of our expirements it always made me happier. But the freak said “bad move, bad move” and looked up and I saw his 2 inch long jaws. Then he pulled his hands out of his pockets revealing his 5 inch long claws. I also noticed the red slits for eyes “evil eyes” was the first thought that came to my head. Suddenly he leaped on me and shoved those claws into me and I let out a painful scream and the last thing I heard was an evilish laugh before everthing went black

    Shadows pov

    I laughed as I killed him “I am becoming a monster” I thought and before I knew what I was doing I was licking my claws “mmm yum” my evil voice said and I spit the blood out and screamed grabbing my head “WHY IS THIS HAPPENING TO ME” I yelled and leaned down and scooped up the blood and poured it into my mouth savoring its mettalic taste nothing mattered anymore except living. I noticed my claws and teeth shrink back to normal as I drank blood. then I remembereds kaze and max “I have to get them” I thought and ran out the door.

  • DES

    man nightrider that is awsome keep writing. who would have thought u could write.

  • Shahz

    Hey, nightrider, is that sort of like a new power for Shadow? plz post soon nightrider, you to MRfan!
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    not a new power a new blessing or a nightmare depending on the way you put it

  • MRFan

    I’d call it a nightmare ! :)
    Anywayy, I posted chapter 4 and 5 for my fanfiction. Checkk it out !

    (Chapter 5 is wheree they discover Sam for the first time ! )

  • Shahz

    Thnx nightrider and thnx 2 u aswell MRfan, I’ll check it out now!
    Shahz

  • ilovefangandmax

    wow it was awsome MRfan! i loved it! hurry and write the next chapter plz!

  • nightrider

    First MRFan you better post the next chappie tommorow because I gave you 5 reviews wanna know what they were
    1.THIS
    2IS
    3.A
    4.AWSOME
    5.STORY

    and second

    I heard this joke at my cousins birthday party thought it was funny

    A man was going to heaven and it was just like he imagined it streets of gold, pearl gates, diamond walls except one thing there was a huge area filled with tons of clocks he walked up to st peter and said “This is just how I imagined heaven but whats with the clocks” st peter replied “Oh see every time someone tells a lie the second hand moves forward one
    example that is mother tereases and it hasnt moved an inch cause she never lied he pointed to another one with one second on the clock that was george washingtons cause he only lied about the charity tree. The man pointed at another one with no clock and said whos was that st peter said that is george bushes it spins so fast jesus decided to use it for a ceiling fan.

  • nightrider

    double digits and part song-chap trust me this song goes good in a fight scene in between song break ups their will be details of action the song is disturbed indestructble

    CHAPTER 10

    Shadows pov

    I knocked out the guard at kazes door, luckily this was one of those guys who couldnt remember keypad codes so he kept a slip of paper in his wallet and used it to open the door I took one last look in his wallet and found loads of cash “Damnit” I thought “I should have checked the other guy too”. I looked in the mirror just to make sure I didnt look like a freakish demon from hell. I gave her a little nudge to the ribs and she shot up into a fighting position. And before I knew it I grabbed her into a hugand squeezed her so tight she started couging. I let go and said “sorry” and all she did was grin an evil grin. Then she smacked me across the face and I said “Well what was that for
    ” and started rubbing my cheek pretending like it hurt even though it was just a playful smack. “Come on lets go” she sid and I was about to follow her whenever I remembered max and the flock “Kaze I cant go yet I have to get some friends” and she just stared at me, then she yelled”YOU FUCKING IDIOT HOW COULD YOU BE FRIENDS WITH A HUMAN YOU KNOW THAT THEY COULD GET HURT FOR YOUR STUPID ACTIONS” and I hit her this wasnt a playful smack either it was real. She flew to the ground and got up a moment later if this had been an eraser she would have been up bloodlust in eyes ready for a fight but this was me and she got up tears in her eyes. Right at that moment it felt like the beast in me had ripped my heart apart. I ran over to her and grabbed her into a hug and even though she was struggiling against me I didnt let go, even though her elbows were cracking my ribs I didnt let go. “Im so sorry kaze its just that you were screaming and im a mo” and I didnt even finish because a sob got caught in my throat and I managed to say “Oh geez ive been a real crybaby lately”. I looked down into her eyes and she said “Im sorry to I shouldnt have yelled at you”. Then she pulled me down into a kiss “My first one in over a year” I thought and saivored it. At that moment max and the gang came running down the hall. The little ones shouted “eeeww” and covered their eyes while the bigger kids just stared. Kaze pulled away sharply and got into a fighting position. “Relax kaze” I said “these were the friends I was telling you abot and she relaxed a little. “Uhh max this is kaze and kaze this is max,fang,iggy,nudge,gazzy and angel.”Nice to meet ya” kaze and max said at the same time and at just that moment about 15 erasers and the exicutioner walked in. “Party time”I thought

    DISTURBED INDESTRUCTBLE

    Another mission
    The powers have called me away
    Another time to carry the colors again
    My motivation
    An oath ive sworn to defend
    To win the honor of coming back home again
    No exclamation
    Will matter after we begin
    Another dark destoyer
    Thats burried within
    My true vocation
    and know my unfortunate friend
    You will descover a war your unable to win
    ————————————————–
    I launched a kick at the exocutioner which caused him to fly into the cement wall and I watched a small crack go up it.
    ————————————————–
    Ill have you know
    That Ive become
    INDESTRUCTBLE
    ————————————————–
    He grabbed my wrist and twisted it causing it to break but I whirled around and launched two punches then an uppercut to the jaw and I broke and I laughed.
    ————————————————–
    Determination that is incorruptible
    From the other side
    A terror to behold
    Ahhniliation will be unavoidable
    Every broken enemy will know
    That their opponent had to be invincible
    Take a last look around while youre alive
    Im an indestructble
    MASTER OF WAR
    ————————————————–
    I snapped a kick at his rib hearing it cracked and did a roundhouse kick which almost knocked him out but he got up and launched a wobbly punch which I easily avoided
    ————————————————–
    Another reason
    Another cause for me to fight
    Another fuse uncovered
    Now for me to light
    My dedication
    To all ive sworn to protect
    I carry out my orders
    With not a regret
    My declaration
    Embedded deep under my skin
    A permenant reminder
    Of how it began
    No hesitation
    When i am commanding the strike
    You need to know that youre
    In for the fight of youre live
    ————————————————–
    He managed to land a kick in my kidney and I wanted to cry out but I cuffed his eardrums causing him to fall to the ground screaming.
    ————————————————–
    You will be shown
    How I become
    INDESTRUCTBLE
    ————————————————–
    He got up and kicked me in the manly place and I doubled over and moaned in pain “At least this proves Im a guy” I thought and managed to land a punch to his head.
    ————————————————–
    Determination that is incorruptible
    From the other side
    A terror to behold
    Ahnillilation will be unnavoidable
    Every broken enemy will know
    That their opponent had to be invicible
    Take a last look around
    While youre alive
    Im an indestructble
    MASTER OF WAR
    ————————————————–
    I landed another kick and a punch when He grabbed my leg and hurled me against a wall causing it to crack.
    ————————————————–
    Im Indestructble
    Determination that incorruptible
    From the other side
    A terror to behold
    Ahnnilation will be unavoidable
    Every brken enemy will know
    That their opponent had to be invicible
    Take a last look around while youre alive
    I am indestructble
    (Indesructble)
    Indestructble
    Determination that is incorruptible
    from the other side
    A terror to behold
    Ahnililation will unavoidable
    Every broken enemy will know
    That their opponent had to be invincible
    Take a last look around while youre alive
    Im an indestructble
    MASTER OF WWAAARRRRRRRR
    ————————————————–
    I launched punch after puncyh and then did a two fisted punch and he went right through the already cracked wall

  • nightrider

    sorry about the chapter I was going to write another chap but one thats a okay stopping place
    two I measure how long my chapters
    using the scroll wheel pressing it once makes it go a certain distance my highest until now was 14 scrolls now its 31 scrolls

  • Shahz

    that was really good nightrider, keep writing! and u MRfan plz post the next chappie soon!
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    You know the drill

    CHAPTER 11

    Shadows pov

    We prepped our wings for flight and I stretched my wings when kaze said “Holy crap what happened to your wings”. I looked over at my wings and saw blood red gash like marks instead of my usual grey and silver streaks “great, what else did my new ability change” I thought “I mean next thing you know Ill die whenever sunlight touches me”. Evil voice replied “No but you will find some other changes as time goes on” I took off into the sky noticing my new speed and agility instantly I mean, I could hit 120 without trying. “Erasers” max yelled and I looked directly below me and saw about 15 of them. I launched myself in a diagonal cartwheel striking one across the head as I fell and he dropped like a sack of poatoes. “pinwheel” Fang called and gazzy launched himself sideways and fang caught him and began spinning like a tornado I went over to help nudge who had just gotten punched in the ribs. Fang then threw gazzy sideways through the air. I caught him and he looked confused and I said “trust me” he gave me a small nod then I grabbed nudges arm and thought “This is where my super strenght could come in handy” and did the same thing fang did except I had one person in each arm this took out five erasers. Then one flew up and brought out a gun and shot me twice in the leg and I had to keep myself from screaming in pain and small claws escaped my fingertips. “This is not the time for this” I thought “The flock cant see me like this” I ran errr flew to the eraser who shot me and sliced his throat. I licked the blood off my fingertips and suddenly got a big jolt of energy it felt like I could fly to pluto and back. “Woah whats this tingily feeling” I thought Evil voice said “human blood is like vegetable,fruits,grains and milk going through the food guide pyramid” “Now eraser blood is like the sugar which is why you got that jolt” Already dreading the answer I asked “Whats the flocks blood”. Evil voice said one word “meat”. I tried to slash anothers throat when I noticed my claws were gone “Great” I thought notice my sarcasm. I snatched his gun away (A mp5 sub machine gun by the way) and hit him in the head with it causing him to collapse to the earth. “Report” max called “Fine” angel and gazzy said at the same time “Okay here but those dumb erasers ripped my favorite jacket” Nudge said glumly. “Ok” said iggy slurred because of a busted lip.”Here” called Mr tall dark and enotional as max called him. ‘Im okay” I said hoping they didnt notice the pain in my voice apparently they didnt. Kaze was fine too she just had a black eye which in some way made her seem even more bueatiful. “I knew something was wrong when A.I was flying at the flocks pace and B.I started getting dizzy I was about to tell them about the gunshots when my wings folded like wax paper.

  • Shahz

    That was realy good nightrider thnx and MRfan pweeeaaaaaaaase upload the next chapter. Will ya, will ya ?! pwease with puppy dog eyes:)
    Shahz

  • MRFan

    I WILL SOON! AS SOON AS I GET SOME MORE WRITNG DONE.
    and nightrider: what is the title of your story ?

  • nightrider

    I dont really have a title and

    CHAPTER 12

    Maxs pov

    We took off into the dark night sky and I noticed shadows red gash like wings. “I wonder if at the school his wings had grown more like an adults which might explain the wings different color” I thought and saw erasers . “Erasers” I yelled and shadow launched himself into a diagonal cartwheel that was really cool the voice said “There is a change about him but I cant point it out exactly”. “Pinwheel” Fang called and launched gazzy through the air I checked up on iggy who had a busted lip and grabbed the eraser attacking him in a headlock until he passed out. Iggy grabbed a bomb or two from his pocket “I really need to find where he hides all of those” I thought as I exploded killing 6 erasers. “Report” I called and everyone was fine Kaiser had a black eye and iggy had a busted lip as I said earlier. Something was wrong with shadow because earlier he had to slow down to keep our pace but now he was straining to keep up with us. I was about to ask him what was wrong but then his wings folded and he collapsed. “SHADOW” kaiser yelled and divebombed and managed to catch him 30 feet above the forest floor and we landed down into a forest filled with thick oak trees. “What is wrong with him” angel said. “Stupid As.. err butthead he got shot and he didnt tell us probaly trying to act all macho in front of us”. “Remind you of anyone” I called to fang and he scowled at me. “Guys we are going to have to take him to the hospital” I said and their eyes grew wide. “Why” fang said in his usual one word answer and I replied “Well one the bullets buried deep in his leg and two he has lost a lot of blood”. Then he groaned and kaiser was at his side in a second and said “You idiot why didnt you tell us you were shot” and he moaned “Well we had to get far away from the school and I didnt want to slow you down” “Well we are going to take you to a hospital” I said. A look of fear went into his eyes and he said firmly “No I am not” “Uhh yes you are” I said getting annoyed and he said again “No I aint”. “fine” I said exasperated “how will you get the bullets out” I said and I knew I had won. I was suprised though when he pulled out a pair of tweezers. “What are you going to do pluck your eyebrows” gazzy said “No” he said and brought it down to the hole. I then knew what he was going to do and tried to take them from him but he plunged it down and sucked in a sharp breath and jerked pulling out the bullet and did the same with the other one. I took out a bottle of guaze and cleaned the wound. As soon as I was done he leaped up and said “come on lets go” “right now” I replied and he said “Yeah and leaped up in the sky and I went up after him”.

  • Shahz

    Still good. Keep it going nightrider.
    Shahz:)

  • DES

    KEEP WRITING NIGHTRIDER AND MRFAN. Great job

  • DES

    Have u guys seen the cover for MR5 it looks really cool check it out

  • nightrider

    Double night

    CHAPTER 13

    Maxs pov

    We flew for a few hours until we landed in you guessed it a forest I was glad we landed I was starting to feel strange. After we had dinner of basically anything we can roast over a fire the rest of the flock excluding fang settled down to sleep. “Ill take first watch” Fang said and then nudge said “Ooh max can I take a watch cause I ate a lot of sugar and like Im not tired at all” I replied “Nudge are you sure I mean this is your fir..” she cut me off and replied “yeah max I wanna do it” and she gave me puppy dog eyes and I said “Okay I will let you try but be careful” and she smiled. Then fang came over and sat next to me and sai “Max Im feeling a strange pulse like feeling”. I was shocked “Yeah me too” I said and a voice behind me said me three I turned around and saw shadow messing with a machine gun. “Where the heck did you get that” I said and he replied “I stole it from an eraser who attacked us” and he reloaded it. “Yeah Im feelin strange too” Kaiser said. “Wonder what is happening” I thought. Then fang started rubbing slow warm circles between my wings and I suddenly I leaned in to his touch. I had to do some thinking about him I mean I had tried to kiss him back that one night But I didnt want to think abot that tonight and pretty soon I was out,out,out

    Shadows pov

    Fang had fallen asleep with max in his arms. “They are toally unaware I mean evry time one of them walks into the room with the other their hearts beat almost twice as fast they find it hard to breathe and they start sweating like crazy”. Then I felt another pulse like feeling “What the hell is this I thought and evil voice replied “You are maturing basically it is like human puberty only more bird like and strong” “Okay what will this change about us” “basically your nerves and senses get more acute girls get curvier boys get more muscled youre start feeling attractions toward girls hair might change color” “WHAT that many changes isnt that a lot” “Yeah it may be but enough about that I am totally starving”. I launched myself into the air and flew to the nearest hospital and used a claw to cut a window and somehow ended up in an empty room. “How lucky” I thought

  • nightrider

    My fault so sorry accidentaly hit publish so here is

    CHAPTER 13 PART 2

    Shadows pov

    “How lucky I thought and quickly consulted a map and found a blood storage room. A hospital worker called “Hey you there this room is off limits” I walked up to him and stabbed my claws into his chest and said “Access granted” and did an evil laugh before I walked over to shelves and shelves of donated blood and a whimper of hunger curled into my throat. I quickly gulped down abot ten packs before I was full. My good side said to go back to the flock my bad side however was the one I lstened to and stuffed about 15 packs of blood in that restricted section of my bookbag and gobbled down one more before I flew back to the flock and noticed no one was on watch “Oh well they need the sleep and curled up besides kaze and fell into deep and for once untroubled sleep.

    Maxs pov

    I woke up in fangs arms feeling all warm and good because for once I had a good dream and not a nightmare about the school. I looked up at fang and sucked in a breath.”Oh my god” I whispered and fang jerked awake “what is it max” He said and I replied thinking I was hullacinating “fang youre hair is..blonde” I finally cracked and started laughing. He grabbed a mirror out of my backpack and looked at himself and his look told me that he thought he was going to faint. Then I noticed a few other changes too like it looked like he had woken up in the middle of the night and pumped weights. Then he looked down at me and chuckled and said “You aint got no room to talk max seeing youre a redhead and all”. “Oh god” I thought and grabbed the mirror out of his hands and looked at myself. He was right I did have red hair and I was more like a woman, curvier you know. “hey blondie and redhead shadow said behind me and I took in the fact that his hair was blood red unlike my coppery hair and he had an arm around a light brown haired kaze and they were just like us shadow was more ripped and kaiser was curvier. “whaz up” iggy said sleepily and took in our silence. Then nudge came up and stopped dead when she saw us.”Fang you have blonde hair and max and shadows are red and kaze has brown hair this is so strange and mmphh” Nudge said before iggy covered her mouth and said. “Fang you have blonde hair. “Dont ask” fang replied.

  • Shahz

    Ur doing really well nightrider, but u might wanna consider starting a new line whenever someone different is speaking and also use punctuation, like commas, when there is a pause.
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    okay ill try

  • MRFan

    HAHA.
    This line was so good:
    “Remind you of anyone” I called to fang and he scowled at me.
    That was good.
    But, yeah like Shahz said about the commas and doing a new line when someoen is speaking, and all that jazz.
    Des: where the MR5 cover? Can you send the link? or let us know where to go ?
    thanks! :)

  • flygirl13

    i luv the max series!
    fang is sooo hot!

  • nightrider

    CHAPTER 14

    Maxs pov

    “So guys what are we going to do today” I asked. Then Shadow held up a huge wad of cash and my eyes widedned. “Where the heck did you get all of that moolah” and he sent me an evil smile. ” stole it of course” he said and smiled an evil smile again. “Okay guys we are going to check into a hotel” and the flock looked at me as if I had said I was an alien. But shadow was all for it “Wow ive never been to a hotel before” and the flock (including me) all gaped at him. “You mean you have never ever been in a hotel” and he just nodded. I looked at everyone to check and see if everyone was wanting to go and everyone was smiling ,except of course MR tall dark and handsome.”Wait,did I just call fang handsome what is happening to me”. Then angel giggled “Oh no” I thought if angel giggles you better start running to save your reputation. Then angel said “Max thinks fang is handsome” I looked up and fang was actually smiling,and you guessed it the rest of the flock was gaping and I put my head down to try and hide that I was blushing. “Lets just go” I mumbled and took off into the sky.

    Shadows pov

    After we took off into the sky My evil voice couldnt help but butt in ” Im starving” he said. I replied “Well be patient its a virtue you know” and I practically heard him snort. “Lets touch down” max said and we landed close to the edge of a country motel. We walked in the front and saw a sixteen year old with heavy acne, oh yeah thats another advancement of our bird-kid package no acne so cheers. Max walked up to the counter and said “Hey we want four rooms,adajacent if possible” and smiled. The kid at the front said “Hey how about you get three rooms and I take you home and you can dump emo freak” and pointed at fang. Fang clenched his fists and anger practically rolled off of him like waves at the beach. “No we just want four rooms please” max said clearly losing her patience. “Are you sure my beds really soft” and smiled a perverted smile. Fang then lost his cool and jumped over the desk and punched him in the nose and with every punch he said a word ” YOU…LEAVE…HER…ALONE”. Then the manager came in and said “what the hell is going on” and looked at fang “You leave and dont come back you uncontrolable teenager” she yelled at him. We stormed out and max said “hey fang thanks for sticking up for me ya know” And bent her head and blushed. Fang nodded and we took off again. A few miles away we found another hotel with no perverted teenagers and we got our rooms. Fang was still mad so he grabbed maxs hand and stormed into the elevator. “Wait There is something I have to tell y..” We didnt hear her because the elevator doors shut before we could hear the rest of her sentence. We went to the fourteenth floor which was where our room was at. Angel and nudge got the third room because of the pink walls and huge window, Iggy and gazzy got the first room because it was the only one with a kitchen. Max and fang walked into their room and saw there was only one queen bed and she gulped. Then Kaze and me walked in and said “Guys we have only one queen bed too”. “So thats what the lady at the desk had been trying to tell us all even number rooms had a single queen bed while odd number rooms had two singles. “Well crap” Max said.

  • nightrider

    Im trying to get to a good part planned for the story which means I will have to post chapters faster sooooo p.s. this is a more lovey dovey seen for kaze-shadow

    CHAPTER 15

    Shadows pov

    “Well crap” Max said. I took in fangs smile and knew he was happy. “Man those two need to get together” I thought. “You know,I dont get these teen hormones there just strange” Evil voice said and I kind of agreed with him. “Max” nudge said “I need to talk to you its about something important” She said. Max nooded and said “Okay maybe in a litlle while and nudge suprisingly didnt say any thing back just nodded. Just then gazzy burst in and said “Oh max can we please go to the pool”. “Well…” Max began but then gazzy said “Pretty please with sugar on top”. But then max said “Well what about our wings”. But gazzy just replied “Angels said shed close down the pool for us” and I couldnt help but smile they were just like little kids ,well technically they still were but they knew to much to be as innocent as children. Kaze went into the bathroom to go change and came out in the sexiest two peice Id ever seen. “She is so bueatiful” I thought So bueatiful in fact, that she took my breath away from my lungs. I think she knew how bueatiful I thought she was because she tossed her hair over her shoulder and my hormones went berserk I wanted to go up and kiss her fifty thousand times which I tried but she pushed me away after the fourth and said “Good gosh calm down before you sufocate me” and I smirked. Now it was MY turn to embarass her and went in and changed and came out in red and black swimming trunks and she looked down and blushed and I once again smirked. Just then max came in in a one peice, trust me I knew by her attitude that she did not care for very revealing clothing. Then I had the craziest idea I ran into nudge-angels and opened up the big window. Max said “What the H-E double hockey sticks are you doing”. I replied “Skydiving” and leaped out the window.

    Maxs pov

    Then the idiot leaped out the window and I ran over and looked down when I saw what he did, the window leaned right over the pool and he was doing a huge cannonball. I saw a big splash and heard faint laughing and a distant “Come on its fun”. Then I leaped out the window and fang was right behind me followed by iggy,nudge,gazzy,angel and Kaiser “My flock” I thought. I splashed down with everyone right behind me and evryone was laughing, even fang and I wished this moment would last forever. But of course something had to ruin the moment. “ERASERS” shadow called and iggy looked confused. Then iggy said “Yeah hes right and we jumped out of the pool just as they flew over the wall leaded by that grey eraser. The grey eraser said “Hey little piggies get ready for the big bad wolf”. “Wow that was really corny” I called. He replied “Hmmm your feisty and pretty maybe we could have a bit of fun after your little friends are dead” and fang scowled. “Hey sucker” I heard and shadow landed on top of the grey erasers head. The fight wasd on.

  • nightrider

    Part song chap since you complemented on the last one same as last time And i think it kind of goes with shadows evil side read it again and you will get why

    Shadows pov

    DISTURBED VIOLENCE FETISH

    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    If youve ever
    Known anyone
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    Can you feel it
    UH AH AH
    ————————————————–
    I launched a kick at the exocutioners head feeling a sharp pleasing crack as it broke his jaw and he howled in extreme pain which I added to by breaking one of his ribs
    ————————————————–
    How do you sleep
    When you live with your lies
    Out of your mouth
    Up from your mind
    That kind of thinking
    Starts a chain reaction
    You are a timebomb ticking away
    ————————————————–
    He launched a punch and it hit me in the stomach but I fueled a snap kick at his chin but he tried to duck and it hit his nose causing it to break
    ————————————————–
    You need to release
    What your feeling inside
    Let out the beast
    That your trying to hide
    Step right up and be
    a part of the action
    Go get your game face
    Because its time to play
    Your pushing and fighting your way
    Your ripping it UP
    ————————————————–
    I went up into the air and did a twenty foot drop on his head which knocked him out of the action. I saw Kaze having some problems with three erasers at once, so I went over and knocked two of their heads together. Two down 22 too go.
    ————————————————–
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    If youve ever
    Known anyone
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    can you feel it
    UH AH AH
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    If youve ever
    Known anyone
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    Can you feel it
    UH AH AH
    ————————————————–
    I pulled out my mp5 machine gun and took out about 7 erasers before it ran out. “Note to self MAX HATES GUNS” and used the end of it to take down another one.
    ————————————————–
    How did you live
    Without playing the game
    Sit on the side and
    expect to keep sane
    Step right up and
    Be a part of the action
    Go get a piece
    Before its too late
    Take a look around
    And we dont love what we see
    Were living in a violent
    so-cie-ty
    Well my brother let me
    Show you a better way
    Get your game face on
    Because its time to play
    Your pushing and fighting your way
    Your ripping it UP
    ————————————————–
    “Duck” Evil voice said and whirled around and faced an eraser. It looked normal to me but max yelled “Ari”. “The one and only” He said and I brought up my gun and hit him in the stomach with the butt of it and heard a satysfying oooof as the air left his body
    ————————————————–
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    if youve ever
    Known anyone
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    Can you feel
    UH AH AH
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life if youve ever
    Known anyone
    Bring the violence
    Its sigmificant
    To the life
    can you feel it
    UH AH AH
    ————————————————–
    I launched a kick at his head but he just barely dodged it, But I was ready and launched a punch at his spine and he flew into the pull and I dived in after him.
    ————————————————–
    TELL ME WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO BE
    ANOTHER GODDDAMN DRONE
    TELL ME WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO BE
    AND SHOUL I LEAVE IT ON THE INSIDE
    TELL ME WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO BE
    ANOTHER GODDAMN DRONE
    TELL ME WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO BE
    Should I get ready to play
    Your pushing and fighting your way
    your ripping it UP
    ————————————————–
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life if youve Ever
    known anyone
    Bring the violence
    Its significant
    To the life
    Can you feel it
    UH AH AH
    ————————————————–
    I smashed Aris head against the edge of the pool knockin him unconcious and I climbed out. We flew up into the hotel got dressed and launched ourselves out the window. This time we werent laughing.

  • nightrider

    new longest chapter lenght 35 scrolls

  • DES

    Great story

  • MRFan

    flygirl13, YEAH FANG IS SO HOT !

  • Shahz

    Still good nightrider.
    Shahz:)

  • ilovefangandmax

    it was awsome nightrider. oh and MRfan i read ur fanfic. yeah it was…….TOTALLY AWSOME! just like nightriders is. Plz post soon. im begging! lol. oh and flygirl13 welcome to this site. also i agree FANG IS TOTALLY HOT!

  • nightrider

    finally someone new

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    wow its a been a while since ive been on here…

    my last comment was 601? so thats like….

    …………………………………………………………. 514…………………………………………….. umm thats like 311 things ive missed…

    probally cuase i was pissed

    well im back… for the night cuase im really friggin bored and the only thing on is National Lampoon VAn Wilder which is pretty much a hardly man movie…

    aka gay

    now first of all… nightrider…

    plz stop copy’ing those…i got through like 1 then 2 then 3 then my brain started hurting

    second… PEOPLE YOU DON’T REALLY KNOW IF FANG IS HOT.. OK THAT REALLY KINDA ANNOYED

    BECUASE——–no one knows what he looks like… well i guess you could make some… manly picture in your head with no chest hair….
    which isn’t very manly…
    at all….

    THIRD i just read that one you last posted ( i think it was the last one im to lazy to scroll up and check ) but that was pretty gay how he used a gun… the point of this is that they don’t use guns cuase with guns… there is less violence

    fourth if you want i can keep you with funny shit on youtube… just click my url (IF ITS WORKING CUASE IM RETARDEED AND SOMETIMES DON’T KNOW HOW TO WORK THAT SHIT) or just copy and paste it in your … lil bar where you put your website thing… yeah…

    + i just made it right now cuase my old one overloaded… forsay… on videos that i could make…. OR FAVORITE
    so if you look for anything tonight or tomorow it will be updated tonight and it will have some vidoes on there tomorow.

    fifth i decided to come on today and maybe for a while becuase actually believe it today im having a good day….

    I KNOW :O

    SURPRIZE FACE

    BECAUSE…

    got—
    gears of war 2
    resistance 2
    wow: wotlk (dont be hatin :P)
    and i know the realease date for killzone 2 today

    FINALLY IF YOU FIND ANYTHING EXCLUSIVE OR… DISASTIFYING………..OR ABTRUSIVE… DONT DELETE THIS MESSAGE CUASE IT ACTUALLY TOOK ME A WHILE… AND IF YOU HAVE TO CUASE ITS LIKE YOUR JOB OR SOMETHING JUST LIKE… PARENTHENSESES IT OUT….

    I DO BUTCHER THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE

    P.S. I LIKE CAPS AND PERIODS…………..

    ALSO ———————————— ALSO

    most of the videos on my youtube account (all of them XD do contain strong language… suggestive themes/lyrics….. and A CASE OF HILARIOUS HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH….ha

    so yeah………….

    ENJOY

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    I FORGOT SOMETHING…..

    :O

    i did get the new alex cross book Cross Country and ive gotten to like the second part in the book and i do have to say its pretty good NOT GREAT LIKE THE FIRST ONE CUASE THAT ONE WAS FRIGGIN AMAZING but it was still good… and i do encourage reading it if you like mystery murders and… strong language… and if you like THE LAKE HOUSE and WHEN THE WIND BLOWS you might like that..

    PERSONALLY I LOVED THE LAKE HOUSE AND WHEN THE WIND BLOWS ALOT MORE THAN ANY OTHER OF HIS BOOKS AND I BELIEVE HE SHOULD WRITE A THIRD

    ALSO I JUST LOOKED AT THE SITE AND IF YOU ALREADY KNOW THIS I DONT WANT TO HEAR IT…

    IMPORTAINT——————————IMPORTANT

    fifth book called—MAX

    comes out March 16 2009

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    where can i find the cover for the book

    personall if its about GLOBAL WARMING OR ANY ENVIRONMENTAL SHIT LIKE THAT im done…

    SEEE NOW YOUR RUINING MY PERFECT DAY AT 10 PM JAMES PATTERSON

    DAM YOU

    DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMM YOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    BTW

    this is WHOAMI

    AKA BEEFY (for like.. what 5 comments?)

    well im done im gonna set up that youtube page and then go watch jackass… mmmmmmmmmmm entertaining violence…

    yay 😀

  • nightrider

    so what whoa…..projectbiohazard its my story [personal attack deleted] so I can do anything I want with it

  • nightrider

    In fact if you hate it so much im going to write the next chapter because other people do oh yeah they finally start to learn what he is in this chappie

    CHAPTER 17

    Shadows pov

    We were flying again over some dense forests whenver nudge starts complaining about how hungry she is, and as if on cue my stomach grumbles. “I am so goddamn hungry” My evil voice practically growled at me and I had to admit I was starving. “Okay guys were going to land and get some chow” Max said and everyone cheered and we began their descent. We happened to land right near a fast food place and we walked in and I noticed iggy smelling the air and breathing it in deeply. “Whatta ya doin that for” Kaze asked and he just smiled, “Just wishin my bedroom smelt like this”. “Yeah, back when you had a bedroom” I heard max mumble under her breath. Max walked up to the counter and said “Uhhh I want two chicken sandwhiches,one cheeseburger, two fries and a coke”. The cashier looked suprised and that face grew more and more suprised as the rest of the flock ordered. After kaze ordered up enough food to feed four men she asked me what I wanted and I just said “Im not hungry” and she gaped at me. She leaned over and whispered in my ear “You havent eaten for almost two days and your saying that your not hungry, usually if you go a day without food you practically pass out because you are always active”. I repeted what I said earlier and she just replied “Suit yourself”,picked up her tray loaded with food and went to sit with the rest of the flock. I sat there for a while but my stomach was starting to get to me not to mention my evilish voice kept on whining about how hungry it was. “Im going to the bathroom” I grumbled and walked in. I unlocked those three locks and pulled out about 5 packs and gulped them down. I was starting on my sixth when fang walked in “This aint gonna be pretty” I thought

    (one of the few times I will do fangs pov)

    Fangs pov

    “I shouldnt have gotten two refills on that extra large Dr pepper” I thought and walked to the bathroom. I opened the door and saw shadow in there with a pack of blood tilted to where it dripped into his mouth. “Oh my god” I managed to choke out and before I knew it he had pinned me up against the wall fury in his eyes. “You tell max,kaze anyone about this and your dead”. He looked down and then brought his head up his eyes red slits “Got it” he said and his eyes returned to normal and he sent me a look that I thought was guilt. I walked out of the bathroom and max knew something was wrong. “Whats wrong fang” max asked me and I just frowned and replied “nothing”. “Come on fang, somethings wrong I can tell” and she put her hands on her hips “Its okay fang you can tell me” she finshed. I looked up at Shadow who was brushing some hair from Kazes hair and I replied “No max, I dont think I can.

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    except you can’t make it gay… so you might have to go back and change a few things :(

    youtube page is up

    AAAAH MORE BRAIN HURTING

  • Shahz

    Hey, welcome to the blog flygirl13 and I suppose you too, project blohazard. I KNEW YOU WERE WHOAMI WHEN YOU WROTE THE FIRST MESSAGE AS PROJECTBIOHAZARD! BTW, what you said to nightrider was really rude. Anyway, that was really good nightrider. YEAH, THAT’S RIGHT, I THINK NIGHTRIDERS STORY ROCKS.
    Shahz:)
    p.s I am a boy not a girl, if that’s what you think when you read this and I’m not gay AND I don’t have anything against gays.
    p.p.s That’s right, Whoami, I called you PROJECTBIOHAZARD but it was an accident!

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    look nightrider i do see its amazing how you can write all that in “your story” in one day… i think thats kinda of amazing… cuase i could only get like 4 sentences out of what you wrote if i wrote that

    so come on

    COME ON

    really?

    did you really write this???

  • what?

    this is better than Twlight! feel free to disagree. but this book freckin’ rocks!

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    i don’t disagree these books do friggin rock

  • MRFan

    Um..okaii.
    Welcome back Whaomi?
    I haven’t read that chapter yet Nightrider, but I will. I just wanted to get this down.
    I posted Chapter7? I think it was that..for my fanfiction, and I am not posting chapter eight until i get four more reviews.
    I’m letting you know this so you can review.
    BYE! :)

  • nightrider

    yes i wrote that and [Personal attack deleted by Comments Editor] i will give you those four reviews

  • http://www.EurocriticsMagazine.com Christopher Rose

    Play nice now kids or someone will take away your toys.

    Christopher Rose
    Blogcritics Comments Editor

  • iluvmr

    wow…
    ummm welcome back whoami and flygirl13 too…
    mrfan: i cant find ur story so could u paste a link here or sth?…
    oh n nightrider ur story is great but u should really post it on fanfiction instead of here cos the stuff u rite is really long and my head kinda hurts too and anyway i doubt u r supposed to post ur own stories here…
    des:where did u see the cover for MR5?
    jus wondering but did any of u guy read the mortal instrumets series, cos i just read it and i love it!

  • iluvmr

    ok…wow…so they r threatening to take away your toys…do u think that christopher guy was trying to be sarcastic?

  • Shahz

    Nope iluvmr, I’m pretty sure he was serious and I haven’t read the mortal instruments series……..yet:) Projectbiohazard, I’m gonna call you pbh now, k? anyway, pbh, I’m sorry, I think I was a bit out of hand and you sound like you like nightrider’s story:)
    (smiley faces fix everything) lol :) oh, and MRfan, I’ve read chapter 7 – It’s really good and the cliffhanger is……….cliffyhangeryish. lol:)
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    first sorry pbh its just you didnt have to call it gay its like my bus driver says if you cant say anything nice dont say anything at all

    second my email is still messed up so im going tohave to post it here or i cant post it at all ill try and fix it tonight

  • MRFan

    Yeah I’ll give you a link. Here it goes.

    Again: if it doesnt work,copy and paste it in the url bar!
    ENJOY !

  • nightrider

    wooo hoooo hooooo i got my my email fixed

  • ilovefangandmax

    yo peeps…JK. Hi peoples! i have a lot to say! 1. i think fang is hot because i saw a picture of him in book3 and they describe him in the book. SO THERE PROJECTBIOHAZARD!!!!!!!Also nightrider you are doing awsome in ur story so don’t listen to projectbiohazard. oh and MRfan i read ur latest chapter! it totally rocked! keep writing. post soon plz!

  • nightrider

    signed up

    name nightrider1234

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    i was gonna get on when i got home from school but i just died on my sofa and got up like… 4 hours later

    and you can take away my toys becuae i dont really have any… besides my url maybe…. :(

    ————–FROWNY FACE———————–

    nightrider i don’t know about your bus driver O.o but mines pretty awesome so ill say yes i’m sorry for calling your story gay its not bad i think i only called that gun part kinda gay… unless there was other…. random chatter…

    and please dont call me pbh -_-

    sounds like… p…b…and j

    ALSO that youtube page is up

    -_-

    -_- figures

    anyhow anybody wanna tell me where they saw that book cover???

    and is it still the idea of them saving all those fish in Alaska or something…. or do they stop hunters from hunting bears!

    O NO SAVE THE ANIMALS!!!

    please tell me asap

    and also everytime somebody says welcome back it looks like the following bellow…

    umm…. ok…

    welcome back?????

    and thats offensive to me cuase it seems like your saying wow this person is a fag

    but you know what thats just me…

  • MRFan

    Uh , no not really…thats not what I was getting at…
    THANKS FOR READING MY STORY! PLEASE REVIEW !
    :)

  • Shahz

    Heya, ppls. School is probably one thing ALLof us on this blog have to deal with. It’s so suckish sometimes. I just wrote half my school life here but I just deleted it……….such a waste of time. Anyone in the U.K will know about the stress of being a year 10. *sigh* oh well. anything knew? Projectbiohazard. Your name is too long for me to type up every time, can I call u whoami instead? cool. thnx. Ur stories are still good nightrider and MRfan!:)
    Shahz:)

  • What?

    School does not suck! only the books you have to read and the page limit! no 400 to 500 page books (sigh).

  • What?

    I forgot to say this… I’m wrighting a story about the secret life of glue people (people who play with glue although this is more like a secret government thingy) I got the idea last year. dose that sound too weird? ’cause I got like a million others I’m working on, I wright comedy.

  • nightrider

    school sucks

  • ilovefangandmax

    i agree

  • nightrider

    gonna put my story on fanfiction may add/delete minor details sometimes major

  • nightrider

    first chapter posted

  • nightrider

    ok mrfan how do u add another chappie to an existing story

    p.s. for some reason you have to put the things at the top like genre etc on rated T to see my story

  • nightrider

    never mind figured it out chappie 2 posted

  • nightrider

    the story is called shadow strike

  • DES

    sorry i haven’t post for a while my computer messed up so i can’t post as often. the TWILIGHT movie ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • nightrider

    I got chapter three posted but it says that i only have 2 weird

  • nightrider

    oh yeah i want three reviews before i post the next chapter

  • MRFan

    Added new chapter to my story.
    Chapter 9 I think. I have ten done, and I am half way through eleven with writers block. I need you guys to review Chapter 9 (5 OR REVIEWS) & then review Chapter 10 after I post it(because you reviewed ! ) and then when u review for chapter 10, please give me ideas of what to happen next.
    The chapter will be dedicated to you if i use your idea, and i will mention everyone who gave me an idea ! :)
    PLEASE HELP!
    the story wont be able to continue without you !

  • What?

    You guys probably think I’m really weird for just joining(that was reason one) two, saying I love school, three, checking in only every so often. I have a reason for that last one. I secretly use my twin brothers computer. (for those of you gasping out there. Yes I do have a twin. no we are not identical) oh yeah and four, my choice of a name. but I need your help! does that idea I said above sound weird? I need help!

    any way I will post some of the wrighting in one of my books. Tell me what you think this is very important!

    “Mom are haunted houses supposed to be scary?” I asked with honest couriosity.
    “what do you think Ella?”
    “yes… no… yes?… no…y-”
    “Yes Ella! they are supposed to be scary!” my mom cut me off.

    I’m going to skip some of it ’cause it’s long and rather boring.

    “Holy Crap!” I said.
    “what is it Ella?” Alice said sounding scared… probably for my sainity. sain people don’t go around screaming “holy crap!”
    “I swear that kid is Milo.”
    “It is Milo.” she said. she had gone to the same public school as I had.

    It goes on that it really is Milo… who has had a crush on Ella sense like… forever. and she runs into the guy she’s had a crush on in the fourth grade, the guy is still 4’9″. Milo is cute now and… I haven’t goten that far yet.

    Please tell me what you think! this will kill me if you don’t!

    MRFan. wrighters block sucks! if you read you get over it. I had a wrighters block once… but that’s ’cause I kinda toald a homacidle kid I didn’t really like him in one of the stories I wrote that he read. I was just scared.

    If you want to read some of the weird (just like me) glue story. I’ll post it if and when I get the chance.
    oh yeah by the way… that exert was from “Dark Matter” a series I’m wrighting kind of about my life. but I changed all the names so you can’t track any of us.
    and (I know you think this is going on and on and on.) happy thanks giving one day late! please respond and not just ignore it! you guys only seem to respond to the, excuse me, but quite frankly stupid things I say.
    I still like school.

  • Shahz

    Hey pplz! I’m back again!
    What? – This is for you. I think school can be okay but it can still be really suckish. I think the best thing about a school day is seeing my friends. I wrote some more about that then deleted It again………..another waste of time.*sigh* lol. I read twilight a few days ago and now I am reading new moon! They’re good but the time when bella is without the cullens can get really boring!
    MRfan. I read chapter 9 and it’s good! could you try to make your chapters longer please?
    DES. Is twilight really that good? I feel sorry for the guy playing Edward. Everyone is saying he doesn’t live up to their expectations.*snigger* I feel like bad. I was only joking!
    nightrider. that’s really good that you have story up! I’ll probably bookmark it! Does anyone else here read +Anima? It’s really good. I started a while back.
    Shahz:)

  • What?

    Thank you for responding! I may not say anything for the next couple of days because I have a 5 hour give or take on monday. that sucks worse than school. then performances the rest of the week. and I’m sick of using my twin brother’s (stop gasping. you can skip this if you’re not still gasping, gawking, ect. it’s not that cool.) computer. it smells like B.O. and gas in here. I’m getting my own computer with internet in two or so weeks for my birthday (I’m gonna be 13!). so this may be my last entry for a while. you guys won’t miss me though. I’m not that important.

    Thank you for responding Shahz. If I spelled it wrong I’m really sorry! please tell me what you think of my wrighting and/or ideas! I toald you this will kill me.

  • Shahz

    You gave an excerpt of your writing earlier didn’t you, What?? I’m sorry, but I have no idea what you were on about! lol.
    MRfan. Please update soon. If I have to, I’ll give you 5+ reviews, ‘kay?
    I think that’s all I have to say. Oh, I finished new moon yesterday , when Jacob left Bella’s bike for Charlie to find, it was so annoying. Oh, well, jealousy’s a disease. Stephanie Meyer is a good writer, especially when describing emotions. I’m gonna have to get eclipse now. School tomorrow.*sigh*
    Guess what? I guess there isn’t really any point asking that, I’m gonna tell you right now. This blog is really good for venting or rambling, cos you can just delete it. not so easy with a person. oh well!
    Shahz
    p.s. Post soon.

  • nightrider

    pleez review me story

  • MaximumRide fan

    When The Wind Blows and The Lake House is one of my favorite series! I think james patterson should write a third one to that series.

    MaximumRide rules! I still haven’t found any series better than it, and I’ve been looking almost a year@

  • nightrider

    i agree with maximum ride fan they should make a third

  • Shahz

    Hey everyone, what’s up? or down? or all around? wow, talk about crazy.
    nightrider, I’ll try to review but idk if I’ll be able to.
    Shahz:)
    p.s. post soon

  • Projectbiohazard

    no url on this one cuase im on my moms mac…. no copy paste…. ><

    fail

    o well yes maximumridefan i agree they should make a third cuase i like those alot better… its like maximum ride except with language, sex, drugs… you know like gta (GRAND THEFT AUTO)

    and no im to lazy to scroll up but whoever was like ima call you whoami

    TO BAD I MADE THIS NAME SO YOU CAN CALL ME THIS NOW

    GRRRR

    venting….venting

    GRRRRR

    venting…venting

    better
    ok then also i really think Twilight kinda sucks and some guys are only reading the book series cuase they heard that they have sex in the third book -_-

    which i doubt

    plus i think the Edward in the movie… like the actor… is gay…

    YUP I SAID IT!
    WHATS UP!
    WHATS UP!

    and school doesn’t really suck… well only becuase i get to see my friends… but yeah

    my social studies teacher acts like an asshole towards cuase on the second week of school i guess i back talked him… i didn’t its called sarcasm

    but yeah its not bad i have to go now cuase my mom wants it back but my teachers kinda suck…. -_-

    remember children….

    ITS GREAT TO LEARN!
    CUASE KNOWLEDGE IS POWERRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!

  • nightrider

    my math teacher gives me 30 problems a night weekends and holidays included

  • MRFan

    I think the actor is GORGEOUS first of all.
    AND: they have sex in the fourth book.
    I like twilight, but whatever. It’s your opinion, not mine.

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    oh so they do have sex…. hmmm

    also i just added Pregame Lobby Lol 6

    its funny ass hell check it out

    url for youtube page

  • Shahz

    hey ppls.
    1. Twilight is really good.
    2.I’m still gonna call you WHOAMI. That’s right. Anyway, its not like your life depends on it.
    3. ppl, why are you talking about h/w? well me aswell but still, WHY?
    4. I still need to buy eclipse. *sigh*
    Bye, MRfan, upload soon, you too nightrider.
    Shahz :)

  • MRFan

    Guys, I am not uploading until I get ideas ! I am sooo stumped. PLEASE HELP! I MIGHT BE FACING THE WORST WRITERS BLOCK IVE HAD YET!!!

  • Shahz

    I’m sorry, MRfan, but I’m stumped aswell.
    Shahz O.O

  • MRFan

    Sheesh. I cant thinkof anything! It is making me REALLY MAD !

  • Shahz

    I no, it’s driving me crazy!
    Shahz
    p.s. I’m not being sarcastic.

  • What?

    Hi!!! I toald you it’d be forever ’till the next time I wrote.
    Just as and FYI five hour rehearsals suck! When I got home I ate like 2 and a half bowls of ravioli, I have never eaten that much at once in my life!!! Well this has been about the only free time I’ve gotten all week!
    My dog is on her way out so I’ll be spending more and more time with her than here, so if I don’t say anything in forever I’m sorry.

    I’m reading an awsome book called “How to ditch your fairy” total girl book, so you boys on this site don’t read it. But girls it’s pretty awesome!

    Going to see the Twilight movie for my B-Day party tonight! Judging by what you said it’s probably awesome!

  • Shahz

    Thanks for that, What? It’s so unfair, twilight being out earlier in America.*sigh* oh well…..but the good news is that the day it comes out is the last day of term…..and then we have CHRISTMAS HOLIDAAAAAYS.

  • MRFan

    I posted another chapter to my story. I already have the next chapter, but I am not going to post it until I get 12 reviews ! Come on, I only have 3! PLEASE REVIEW !
    -MRFan

  • What?

    First of all, Twilight rocked! Second what do you do when you find out that the guy you had a crush on possibly likes you and might ask you out on a date? That’s not even the worst part. He’s my lab partner and politic buddy. Eeeeeeeeeeeeep! Help Me!!!! and third what do you do when you find out your best friend’s boyfriend is bi-sexual, and there’s a kid in your class that hates anything that isn’t straight?! My life is crazy I know. Oh yeah… I turn 13 tommrow, so… I don’t know.

    MRfan, I have two questions. What’s your story about and where is it? I want to read it… but I can never find it (I’m sad). and, this will make me sound stupid but… What does your name stand for? Is it Maximum Ride fan or Mr.fan? Have you gotten over your wrighter’s block yet? Oh yeah… that’s three isn’t it?

    One last thing, have any of you experienced a paranormal activity? and not like on TV shows I mean the real deal. I have. If you have any ideas on how not to be so scared tell me. The idea of dead people living (for lack of a better word… we all know they’re dead) in my house scares me to death, I’m not dead though… how and why did they come up with that?
    Love ya’
    P.S.
    Happy St.Nickolas feast day one day late! It’s also called Sinter Klwas day. Look at how much I learn from Catholic School.

  • MRFan

    It’s stands for Maximum Ride Fan.
    As for the bi-sexual thing, I don’t think I can help.
    The other proble,, I can relate. This guy liked me, and I didnt. Then, I liked him, but he didn’t like me. I don’t know if I can help you though…
    Try waiting it out. I find that guys lose interest after awhile. No offense, boys !
    My story is called “A key? Or another hybrid Runaway?”
    I am past the writers blcok and if you read it, REVIEW! I have the next chapter raedy, but I am not posting it until I gett 12 reviews. I am at four! So please review !

  • What?

    Thank you… just one problem MRfan, I really like him back.

  • What?

    Got in car accident can’t think or see straight. Thought I might let you know. Talk later.

  • Shahz

    Hey, I’ll try and review for you MRfan and What?, I’m a boy but I think I might be able to help a bit……..If you like him then just go up to him and ask him if he likes you in the same way that you like him or you could just ask him if he’d like to hang out with you. Something like that. Post your response soon! Hopefully I’ve helped:)
    Shahz
    p.s. you should probably know that I’m gonna get an arranged marriage so I haven’t actually had or will have a girlfriend so you can think it over and see if it’s worth taking in my advice and using it. aaaaaaahhhh, the perks of being an Asian! (sarcasm ppl, learn it, know it, use it):) I hope I didn’t give out the wrong impression. Just in case you’re thinking I’m against arranged marriages, I’m not. Both people get a say in it………aswell as the parents. Wow, talk about a one man coversation!:)

  • What?

    Thanks Shaz. It’s my B-day today. I had to stay home from school because of that car accident I talked about. Can’t tell him. And I also kind of told him I liked another guy who’s liked me for 8 years… I hope I didn’t break his heart. He is very cute. And so help me if either of them is reading this I will either a) become a nun, b) kill myself, or c) move to another school. Oh yeah… life isn’t that simple… my mom said I had to get at least one PHD before I can even think about having a boyfriend.
    I would like an arranged marrage sometimes. But my mom’s against that kind of thing. Oh the perks of being a too smart girl in Utah, just for the record, I’m Luthran and have one mom! Although I am the fruit of polygamists.

  • What?

    Sorry about this one more thing. I kind of don’t let anyone on to any of my feeling because that’s the person I am.
    Anyone ever been to a middoe school dance before? This guy asked me to dance. I thought it was because of my friend but she told me he danced with me on his own free will. Once again EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!
    I get my computer today… I’ll post some of my stuff later.
    One more thing about the guy… My mom kind of told his older brother she wanted him to grow up and marry me, even though I’m two years younger. I would never in my life date anyone in that class if my life depended on it.
    It’s snowing!!! Not to excited. normally I would be but it’s been doing this for hours.

    I love all of you!!! (Like brothers and sisters. Not like that guy)

  • MRFan

    Lots to digest.
    Sorry to hear about you being in a car accident, What? Hope you feel better !
    It’s snowing here in Canada too! (What a surprise!) But I don’t like it, because its not enough for a snow day ! Snow is only good in my books if it can bring me a snowday.
    Anways:
    I have to go do a Gepgraphy Project thats due Wednesday, and English Homeowrk that I really don’t understand. Later skaters!
    MRFan

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    ummmmmmm

    if he is gonna ask him out and your pretty sure you know it you should ask him out before he asks you out

    and mrfan i really did think your name was like Mr. Fan

    not maximum ride fan

    and if you think some guy is bi ask one of your guy friends to check if he looks at his ass in the locker room -_-
    trust me it happens… because like this kid was in the boys locker room and he told someone that he was gay ( i think it was a joke ) anyway he told someone else then that person told another person… and told another… and they told another…. and then someone told a teacher and it ended up that kid got suspended like for life..

    and yes i get snow for like one day but by the time i come home its gone

    ummm updated vids: Dead Space GAme review

    updated favorites: Chad Vader – Day Shift Manager #1 !!!!

    p.s. i like the snow cuase i like cold weather plus we hardly get snow becuase i live in Indiana but all of a sudden we get a lot of snow becuase of GLOBAL WARMING
    OMG I SHOULD LISTEN TO THAT MR BOOK… IM GONNA GO RE-READ IT…

    jk

    o yeah that sucks that your dog is gonna die

  • nightrider

    u live in india???? we in my class are lerning about india and i havent had a snow day in like 4 years cause america is so filled with global warming

  • What?

    Never had a snow day alomst 3 inches here. Ski season!!! yeah. Stupid lake effect.

  • What?

    Wait are you saying I’m from India? I’m from the U.S. as in Arches Natl. Park or Kenacot or Mormom capitol of the world or even, as much as I hate it, High School Musical.

  • MRFan

    Three inches?
    Wow. Try thirty centimetres here in Canada !

  • ilovefangandmax

    WOW!!!!!!!!u guys have chatted a lot! sorry i havn’t been here!im usually on maximum-x.com! i love it. its sooooo much fun! anyway… MRfan u said u needed reviews… sorry, but i don’t have an account so does this count as a review: POST PLZ! i also have an idea for ur story, um maybe sam and max could kiss and fang sees and gets mad. i think that’s awsome,but u decide.: ok so join maximum-x.com it is really cool!

  • MRFan

    Sam and Max did kiss. And Fang saw. I don’t know if you read that far though ?

  • What?

    Hay! My heart went all fluttery when this guy I’ve been talking about walked throught the door. It was like ahhhhhh. He is so cute!
    Well I almost froze my legs off today. You try dropping from 75 degerees F to freezing! It is cold!
    I am boycotting High School Musical 3 and I don’t know why!
    I have read all the way through the fourth book, those of you who have read that far, I feel like Max with Fang! Jeeze! I have a crush on my politic buddy and my smart buddy who has known me for 8 years and liked me ever sense! It is akward! I’m still waiting on that paranormal thing to I need help!
    I’m cold and bored here in Utah. I studied for finals for like the last three houres. I’m only in 7th grade and I have finals!

  • nightrider

    no im talkin to pb and h or projectbiohazard

  • DES

    Sup Guys n girls I haven’t posted n a while and I just want to say whats up to the new people. I’ll be posting as soon as i can keep up with the fanfics.

  • Shahz

    Hey peeps. Wow, u sure posted a lot while I was………how do I put? ummm, not on the blog! yeah. anyways. what? ur only in year 7?! and ur having love problems?! wait, is seventh grade the same as year 7 in England? I’m in year 10. anyways, thnx for the brothers and sisters comment what! that was nice! it doesn’t really snow much here, but it can be nice when it does. there hasn’t been a snow day while I’ve been at my current school! urrgh….I shudder to think what could happen during a snow day at a boys school!
    Shahz:)
    post soon!

  • MRFan

    I haven’t posted either, even though I have been checking the blog to see if anyone is posting something new or interesting. So far..nothing.
    Come on JP! Give us something to talk about! Any new news about your book?!?!? :)

  • http://www.youtube.com/user/prjctbiohazard projectbiohazard

    umm no i said I-N-D-I-A-N-A

    indiana

    its in the usa

    not inda…it doesnt snow in india… i dont think O.o

  • nightrider

    oh shit thought u said india damn

  • nightrider

    wrote a new fanfic called Maximum ride used to
    it is rated K+ under general it IS a songfica and something weird happened first line of every song stanza is normal and to the left instead of bold and centered

  • MRFan

    Did you finish your other fanfic?

  • DES

    sup people

  • MRFan

    notmuch.
    REVIEW FOR MY FANFIC PLEASE ! I ONLY HAVE FIVE REVIEWS AND I WANT 12. PLEASE HURRY! I WANT TO POST THE OTHER CHAPTER THIS WEEKEND!
    THANKSS !
    BYEE !

  • nightrider

    no but nobody is reviewing for it but i got more than 6 reviews for the one i just wrote in the first day i published it

  • DES

    That funny that u guys want reviews just wait for them to come instead of begging.
    Although it is funny

  • nightrider

    maximum ride used to was liked by some others so i posted a prequel called maximum ride is through

  • Shahz

    Hey peeps, hope you get more reviews! Are there any decent fanfics that you would recommend? I was so surprised when I found fanfics with thousands of reviews, no joke! therewas one with like 10 thousand! Lets hope some of yours can get up there!
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    yeah i got 2 good stories to recommend…mine!

  • DES

    Cool

  • What?

    studied for houres today. Ugh finals! Still like this guy. Is it weird if I dreamed he died onece and came back to life?

  • nightrider

    i am writing yet another story since my first one is getting no attention at all ( i may delete it soon) it is called monster please read and review i already have four chappies posted and i need one more review before i post the next 2

  • MRFan

    There is another story called Monster. They posted it on Fang’s blog. Just letting you know in case someone tells you or something.
    Sorry to hear that your story isn’t getting much attention. :(

  • nightrider

    i just read the other one and it was really good but mine isnt making max into an eraser

  • nightrider

    chapters 5 and 6 added please review

  • What?

    They make glittery converse now! that made my day! Why can’t I get over this guy?! it’s been like two weeks! the last time I had a crush it lasted like… three days? probably less. just so you know shaz i’m 13, 7th grade is 12-13 yearolds, but I do take freshman science and algebra 1 so you can take that anyway you want to.

  • totalmrluver

    this is definentily 1 of the best books i have ever read and thats not show bis talk I really mean it. My favorite book out of the series is #2.and all that stuff that guy said about the 4 book not being good is pathetic he is so jealous because he cant write as good as u can i cant wait for the movie and the 5 book 2 come out I have always been a big fan of reading and now that I have read the maximum ride series my nag for reading has cranked up a whole notch
    p.s jp rules

  • What?

    Wow got like 6 inches of snow, isn’t Utah a desert? The weather tower thingy says it’s going to snow again!

    My friend(s)’s are all obsesed with Twilight! I can’t get them to read Maximum Ride! The only person I can talk to about it is a guy who likes my friend and my friend (who is a girl who dosen’t like Twilight and I have knowm for almost 10 years) who likes him back, and I’m probably going to… I don’t realy know, but I’ll do something, if he doesn’t ask her out on a date.

    I’m supposed to be grounded, so I’m not supposed to be on here so I may not wright for a while.

    I love you all!!!

  • Shahz

    ey peeps, what??, when u say u take freshman science and algebra 1, what do u mean? is it a lesson u don’t do in year 7/7th grade? well, I suppose it is cos u wouldn’t just say that if evry1 in year 7 did it. a freshman is someone who’s just started highschool, right? oh and sorry about ur story nightrider:( nearly Christmas holidays, just 1 more day of school WITHOUT LAST LESSON! YAY!
    Shahz
    p.s. post soon

  • MRFan

    sorry i havent been writing my fanfic. mild case of writers block .
    sorry, gotta go. dont have a lot of time.
    byee !

  • What?

    Shahz, Algebra 1 is not a course in 7th grade, math 7/fundementials is avarage. Then it’s Pre- Algebra which is for smarter people and then algebra 1 which is what most people in Utah take in 9th grade, or freshman year… then there’s geomatry and algebra 2, I take that next year, that means in my senoir and juinor year I’ll take math and science at the surrounding colleges. I am special!

    It snowed even more in the last week or so, I now have about a foot of snow, it’s the dry kind. good for skiing but not much of anything else. Oh yeah those of you not in the U.S. that’s about 30 centimeters.

    6th graders are officialy the worst singers ever, or at least in my school. 5 year olds sang the same song and sounded almost 100 times better.

    I just about failed all but one of my finals. Oh, not grounded anymore.

    Well I still can’t say much about the guy I like, either he likes me and won’t admit it, or he dosen’t like me. Well another guy likes me. And I can’t tell if this Austrailian kid in the 6th grade likes me or hates me. I was his summer school teacher so that may explain alot. How do you tell if a guy likes you or hates you?

    Love you!

  • What?

    Sorry about not waiting for any of you guys to respond just thought I Might post some as in Preface chap. 1 and 2 for you to read and review. This is from Dark Matter, it’s kind of about me but I changed all of the peolple’s name’s, most of them any way all the places are real though. enjoy!

    Preface
    7th grade was to be the best year of my life. I could feel it in my bones, my blood, and just about everything else. Maybe it’s because I’m so determined to have romance in my life that actually includes me and not everyone else around me, or that I’m finally not going to be called one of the “sixes” or that last year eighth graders aren’t here or that I’m finally in the older class or that my brother isn’t there by my side to hug me in class (yuck!) or that… well you get the point. Full or ors and different things.

    Things will be different this year. But a better kind of different. A new kind of different.

    Chapter 1.
    The night before school started, I had a dream, that my alarm didn’t go off and no one bothered to wake me up. Then we had to take George to school… witch was a total contradiction on reality because George didn’t start school until the next week. By the time we got George to school, got Max settled in class, and cleaned out the garage school was over. I’d missed the first day of school. And the funny thing was I totally believed it was real.

    I woke up to the loud beeping of my alarm clock. “I don’t want to make cookies.” I mumbled to myself as I wandered across the room to flip the alarm off on my clock. The air was hot and it felt humid, well feeling humid is actually pretty darn dry in Salt Lake City, Utah. As I did this my mind did a double take. It was the first day of school. The first day of the unimaginable 7th grade. And that this was my last hour being a 6th grader. No matter how much I wanted to saver it and make it last forever, time went on. My clock, ticking away the seconds, the minutes, as I stood there in my pajamas wondering how fast the summer went by. I mentally counted the days. Glancing at the calender, whose page I hadn’t bothered to turn, it said it was still July.
    Then I looked at my laundry basket. And there on top sat my uniform. The green plaid skirt and the white polo shirt I stared at that for awhile. Then I looked at the window. And on it read “school starts tomorrow!” in my cheery sloppy print I had written that last night in expo marker because I was way to hyper to sleep. I groaned. It felt too much like summer for school to start. I put on my uniform and skipped down the stairs two at a time the mossy green carpet felt mushy underfoot.
    I heard my parents shaking my little brother Max who, like a hibernating bear, is nearly impossible to wake up… and when he dose, well also like a hibernating bear, if you wake him up. Get out as fast as you can, he’ll kick and bite and all kinds of nasty things.
    By the time Max had been woken up and we’d eaten breakfast Max, my mom and I were walking out the door. Max, being a 7 year old with a short attention span was bored. So he reached out his stubby, short clipped finger and jabbed me in the arm. “Fat Jiggle.” he said through giggles. I growled… or at least I tried that just made him laugh even more.
    I stormed ahead not wanting anymore “Fat jiggle”s I also didn’t want to risk jump-starts, kicking, biting or scratching. I did not want to come to school with blood stains on my shirt I’m sorry to those of you who think that’s cool and all but I don’t want to scare the new kids away with blood stained shirts. They don’t need to know I’m crazy… yet.
    My mom had taken my little brother’s and my pictures I walked to the gym like all the other people had.
    “Hi!” I said. No one answered. No one acknowledged my existence. Talk about de-ja-vou.
    “I miss Ian.” Gabe said. Gabe had somehow managed to get taller over the summer. What are you talking about Ian is right here. And you say I’m crazy. I thought. “But luckily I have Alastair here. So I may survive.” I blushed at my own stupidity. Ian the eighth grader from last year. One of the two that I wasn’t totally rejoicing that they had left.
    At first glance Alastair looked much like his brother. And if somebody in the class asked me if I thought he was “cute” I probably would have said “yes” and then something like “He’s not my type. Don’t get any ideas.” and then that someone would have said “Ella you don’t have a type.” and then I would have said “You’re probably right about that one.” or at least something along those lines. Some of the girls were looking at him like stray dogs looking at a piece of meat. That explains the no one noticing me.

    Chapter 2
    The rest of that week was fairly uneventful. I slipped back into the routine of tripping on stairs and other such fun things.
    Thursday that following week was something to remember.
    It was grammar class. We were categorizing nouns. “I hate this stupid sunburn.” I said. That weekend was spent in the heat of the August sun.
    “Don’t worry… you’re still as pretty as ever!” Elizabeth said.
    Elizabeth in all her brilliant Barbie doll glory was calling me, a sunburned little dork, “Pretty”.
    I hid under my notebook, and what wasn’t coved by that was covered with my thick, long, dark brown hair. “Yeah you’re still pretty even with the sunburn.” Gabe said.
    I groaned.
    “I still love you, Ella.” Gabe said.
    Gabe, in case you don’t know, has shaggy, curly, brown hair, and is extremely tall.
    “I thought you have gotten over that!” I said through the covers and pages of my notebook and my hair.
    Gabe smiled and shook his shaggy head “Nope.”
    I groaned again. If he really loved me he’d stop that. I thought to myself. I was reflecting on the fact that I never even let him have the chance to flirt with me last year. I’d just threaten to stab him with a pencil and he’d back off… for a little while that is. Until it became a contest. “Who could last the longest with out getting stabbed.” I didn’t like that at all. Just as an FYI Gabe and I are only friends. Don’t get any ideas.
    As that class ended and we lined up for science I grumbled to myself about my sunburn and how raw and stupid it looked spreading across my nose to my cheeks down to my lips and then to my chest and back and finally to my arms. It itched it burned and it didn’t feel to nice.
    When we arrived at science we talked about matter. The teacher explained what matter is and that it makes up everything in the universe I raised my hand. “Yes?” she said.
    “Doesn’t matter only make up about 4% of the universe and the rest of it is dark energy and dark matter and that kind of stuff?” I said. Trying not to sound too smart. The new kids looked astonished at the fact that (1 there’s more to the universe than just matter and (2 that I knew what it was.
    “Yes.” the teacher sounded astonished at the fact I knew this little piece of information. “But that’s another subject that is really hard to understand.” she said.
    I know exactly what it is. I under stand it perfectly too. I thought. If you don’t know dark energy and matter is, it’s untestable. I like to think of it as a noun that means “can’t” because you can’t touch it, see it, hear it, test it, know it, taste it, feel it, sense it, or even breath it in. We only know it’s there. I also like to think of it as God (Just so you know from my point of view what can’t be proved by science I blame god for… well that’s not the right word for it… I give God credit for it… that sounds much better).There’s more questions about it then there are answers(the God slimily works here too. Think about it.) and that’s why love it. I can answer those questions with “It is what it is.”(God!) “I don’t know and they don’t know either.” (God! Again) or “It’s just there.” (God! Wouldn’t I make a great science/religion teacher?) call me crazy but that’s why I love it. The rest of that class period I was in my little scientific bubble of bliss. I felt smart and it felt good. I felt that maybe I’m actually some brilliant cosmologist(doesn’t work with makeup) and that little seed inside of me just needed a little nourishment and this discussion was all it needed to sprout and bloom.

  • Shahz

    Hey everyone! I like ur story so far What?:) and, I agree with u about being special (I mean about u being special!)
    Shahz – post soon everyone:)

  • nightrider

    *laughs* i just read a fanfic called maximum ride chocolate. its about how fang takes maxs chocolate away and she will do anything to get it back anythiung at all. so fang writes a story and tells her to decode it and if she does she gets her chocolate back. so she used the first letter in every paragraph and guess waht it spelled

    G
    I
    V
    E

    M
    E

    A

    K
    I
    S
    S

    A
    N
    D

    Y
    O
    U

    W
    I
    L
    L

    G
    E
    T

    Y
    O
    U
    R

    C
    H
    O
    C
    O
    L
    A
    T
    E

    B
    A
    C
    K

    it works kind of like

    Boy the panthers suck
    You hate them too??
    EEK they suck so bad

  • Shahz

    LOL

  • Shahz

    That’s probably the shortest post in the entire blog:)
    Shahz:)

  • What?

    Thanks for reviewing I would like two more reviews before I post some more. You guys are like the only people I’m letting see this, who don’t know me personally. This is a big step for me.

    Shaz, no idea what on earth you just said about my being special and all that, blah, blah, blah, but thanks… I guess?

    How much more snow can Salt Lake get before we all freeze our toes off? It’s hard to think that less than 6 months ago we had 100 degrees F weather. Now we have about a foot and a half of snow and it’s 20 degrees, people not in the u.s. it’s not at boiling point, but half way there, ’bout 50 degrees and now it’s in the negitives somewhere.

    Love you all!

  • Shahz

    Yep, u that was a compliment What?

  • What?

    Hi, still waiting on those reviews I’ll check back later today though, it’s only 10 o’ clock here. Need 2 more.

    Love you all!!!

  • What?

    Gave it some thought, decided to post some more. here is chapters 3,4,and 5. enjoy!

    Chapter 3
    Friday came. It was a long day because we all awaited the long weekend that followed. I fidgeted, crossing and uncrossing my legs and ankles. Tapping my pencil, clicking my pen. I couldn’t stop moving. All for a weekend I’d probably spend cooped up in my room listening to music, playing on my computer, and reading.
    I didn’t understand why I was so excited, that there was one more day to be bored, one more day of being obnoxious just because there’s nothing else to do. One more day of lounging in my pajamas and playing video games. Okay I have to admit the video games sounded pretty fun. But that’s not the point. Three day weekends in early fall remind me too much of summer. Too much of sunburns and other such fun thing of that variety.
    Looking forward to long weekends and loathing Mondays, what’s wrong with me? Is this what being a teenager is all about? Being board all the time? If it is then I want to be a pre-teen all my life.

    Chapter 4.
    Just as I had thought the long weekend was fairly boring. I finished my favorite book for the 3rd or 4th time. And as I thought Monday was spent playing video games.
    Tuesday… excuse me Mouesday (a combination of Monday and Tuesday that my 3rd grade teacher came up with) was frantic and fun.
    I woke up thinking this day would be like any other. Then I realized that well my skirt was missing. So I went around the house looking for a button so that I could fix my extra skirt… but we didn’t have any buttons the right size, so I figured that it would be much easer to simply find the normal skirt, and it was. I ate breakfast, and was brushing my hair when, my sunburned scalp decided today was the day it was going to shed. So frantically I combed my hair, all the pieces came out but as soon as I was done my mom said the most shocking thing of all that I freaked out about most. “Ella you’re saying the prayer today.” she had said nonchalantly. My blue eyes grew to the size of tennis balls. “Okay.” I said in a meek and exhausted voice. I groaned as I walked out the door. It was 7:50. I had 10 minuets to get to school. I half ran there.
    I told the teacher my job and went down to the office. “Where’s the book?” the secretary said. I gulped my, heart beat faster. I looked at the intercom system. The red LED lights stared at me like the eyes of the devil. This was the intercom, a contraption I didn’t know how to use. I squeaked under my breath.
    The book was shown to me. It was a large book. I had to read the whole page out loud, I stumbled and fumdled with some of the words I began to shake and tremor, I was afraid I would scream in terror or let go of the talk button mid-sentence and not push it again.
    I let go and breathed a sigh of relief. I had done it and only messed up with only a few words. The realization hit me that I would have to do this again.
    The rest of the day went by so fast I felt like I wouldn’t have enough time to get the words out of my mouth. This blur lasted up until the last half of math. Where time slowed to a crawl a slow elongated crawl that seemed that it may last for eternity. Eventually it ended. I went to math counts, came home. And slept. I was so exhausted it wasn’t even funny.

    Chapter 5
    “Alastair here! I’m done isn’t it awesome?” I said. Holding out a ball of marbles that were strung together with wire and several others with wires.
    “This is out atom?” he asked
    “Uhhhh-huuuuuu.” I said. “I thought you might want to help finish it. I’ll show you how to do this.” I grabbed the ball the was to be the nucellus one of the pre-measured wires and looped and strung then I grabbed one of the single marbles and looped the marble to that.
    This is how the characters in my favorite book start out… but they were in biology… and juniors in high school… and the guy was a vampire… but… uhhhh… ummmmm… yeah… big difference there I do not think Alastair is a vampire. Was what went through my head.
    What I didn’t realize was that our Language Arts teacher was staring at us. She doesn’t think we’re going out dose she? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I told my thoughts to shut up.
    “Best lab partner ever!” he said while wiring an electron to the nucellus.
    I smiled and blushed. There are many times like these that I wonder exactly what goes on in peoples minds around me.
    We sat in an awkward silence. Around “cute” boys I live by the rule speak unless spoken to for fear of saying something stupid, or something that might make him like me. You see I have four major fears (1 heights (2 spiders (3 people hating me (4 boys asking me out on dates. Surprisingly I’ve had a nightmare for all 4. Anyway I wondered what Alistair thought of me. He didn’t belong with someone like me. He belonged with someone like Elizabeth or Christine or Paulina or Dianne or the new girl Alice who looked quite a lot like Elizabeth. I wasn’t good enough and I probably never would be.
    You know those girls that seem way too smart to fit in with anyone, group, or clique? Yeah… that’s pretty much me. I take algebra 1 over at Judge Memorial High School. I know way too much about the universe and what it’s made up of and what can happen to it and all that fun stuff. I guess I’ve never really fit in with anyone because of my overly developed brain. I’ve never really been able to.
    Back to the story we worked in silence except for the occasional “hold this” or “sure”.

    This all really happened, these are all real people, I want you all to guess the guy that I like here. He has showed up so guess!

  • selena

    I loved all the books, but was wondering from reading the last one , will their be another one?

  • selena

    the books were totally amazing , my favorite of all the books was the one when fang kissed max! i was so tatally happy! I was like OMG!!! I wasn’t surprised,because i was expecting it, but still i was so happy. though i love all the books, i still love the third one the best.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Love Bug 11

    I LOVE LOVE LOVE Maximum Ride!!!!!!!!!! I have read 1,3, and 4. My schools library don’t carry 2. I love how it combines action, adventure, and some Romance. I have a Fang of my own. I love 4. It’s over due because I just don’t want to stop reading the romantic parts! If you havent written a fith, PLEASE DO!Thanks keep writting!:)

  • Tay Tay

    OMGosh! I love MR Series!!! I was reading through old comments and if bannas and cream is still on I’m caught between Fang and Max! (Cute Couple BTW) anyway i’m a lot lk=ike max. She is a leader (ME) a tom boy (ME) determined (ME) and stubborn (ME ME ME!!!) but the one thing I don’t like about max is that she uses the Lord’s name in vain. The reason I like Fang is because he sounds HOT! He’s not afraid to kiss! And so mysterious and strong. I got one of them. HES SOO HOT and we’re buddies but other than that I don’t think he knows I exsist on the dating field! Anyone got advice?

  • Tay Tay

    BTW I want them to make 3 into a movie! And if the Actor who plays Fang is as hot as Fang sounds SIGN ME UP AS MAXXXXXXXXXX! For real, Im a actress in training. WWJD! SMILE JESUS LOVES YOU!

  • nightrider

    oh my fu**in god, two new people. what a suprise

  • nightrider

    and i am somewhat like fang. black hair, black clothes, dont talk much. But i laugh more

    :p
    :(
    :)
    :,(
    >:(
    :l
    :O
    >:O

    I dnt know y i did that. damn i need to stop texting

  • DES

    Sup people n new people i haven’t been on for a while cause my computer is F*ck up so yeah. Later people n new people.

  • What?

    Do I still count as new? and review my book, memoir, novel type thing! I need help!

    Why is texting so cool? I don’t think I’ve ever really texted anyone.

    To review my book (that’s what I’m calling it from now on.) see messages 1014 and 1022. Please!!!

  • Tay Tat

    Why yall cuss so much. It aint sumthin 2 b proud of!

  • Love Bug

    Hey I have a friend like you nightrider. But the only difference is hes emo! But not like hardcore emo.

  • Tay Tay

    Im so happy! My teacher just bought mr2!!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE!!!!

  • Love Bug

    Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this series!I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Much like MAX. Iggy sounds so nice, Gazzy sounds like one of my friends and Fang, he sounds like my crush!Its so cool!

  • Love Bug

    Hey just to say something, I dont see how they would make theyre movie. Most of the time shes thinking while fling, sitting or something! Seriously she would be narorting most of the time. Im not tryin to dis mr.P but I think when they do make the movies romance! Not so far were their well ya know ;)But like she dont run away so quickly! MERRY (almost) Christmas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • MRFan

    MERRY CHRISTMAS !

  • Love Bug

    Cool! Christmas is awesome! I got enogh $ to buy the SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Tay Tay

    Sup peps!! Hey i got a ? is there gonna be a 5 book or not! It would really SUCK if there wont be
    1! It just leaves you hangin! You know what really stinks! Even though shes a bok character Max gets a guy. Shes a tomb boy yet she gets the guy she wants! Didya know THAT IS NO FAIR AT ALL! K 12 year od tomb boy only two years younger! Why cant I be Max just for a little while! >:p But the book is still awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • What?

    Merry christmas!!! I have one thing I hate about the holiday… well technacally two, but they’re kind of the same thing, 1) snow. 2) Lake effect that causes more snow! probably have like between 2 and 3 feet of snow (almost a meter) and it won’t stop!

    Review my story!!! I need to know what you guys think. and also guess who my crush is, he shows up in my story. I want to give him a name other than him with a dreamy sigh inserted. One more thing, I didn’t get the names for my charecters from Twilight even thought that might sound like it (once apon a time Gabe was named Edward, my dance friends said it sounded like a rip off, Edward and Ella. Even though there was no romance between us to begin with! Yuck! So Gabe stuck.)

    Don’t have texting, and I don’t swear either! Go us Tay Tay! Here is what I have to say about swearing “Darn it, Darn it all the way to heck!” I;ve been saying that sense I was 7!

    Love you all and try to stop swearing!

  • Shahz

    Hey peeps! wats up?Welcome new peepls! and what, i dnt thnk ur new:) Yes, there is gonna be a new book. I dnt really swear either. Im glad im not the only person. Quite a few of my friends swear…a lot.anyway, here’s a late MERRY CHRISTMAS. Even though i dont celebrate it. lol. Apart from giving and recieving presents from our neighbours….pleasantries.I’m pretty sure they hate some of my family… i wonder wat they’re plotting now….lol – jking, a bit. Ur story is….interesting.darn, why does it have to be to find an adjective to describe some stories. oh, and wat is UP with u people who always wear black. I can understand that u like the colour black. r u constantly grieving for someone or always going to a funeral? I highly doubt it. Hope u don’t take my rant as an insult cos that wouldn’t be very nice and i try not to be like people at school who r always taking the mick out of nerds and geeks, and im a boy. I sound like a hypocrite, don’t I? ppl, if u get the impression that i am obnoxious, then im not really! I swear, scout’s honour……even though i was never a scout…oh well. LOL
    Shahz – Oh, MRfan post soon plz.

  • Tay Tay

    Shahz, Thanxs for not swearing you too WHat. And Shahz the reason people wear black is because theyre goth. I dont know why other peps wear black. FYI some dudes can pull it off and its HOT! Like not with the nose percings or whatever but just the long black hair that covers their eyes that makes them look mysterious!

  • Tay Tay

    Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who thinxs that iggy should get a gf in the new book?

  • What?

    Oh yeay, ummm, Tay tay about that message you sent earlier, tom boys always get guys. trust me. My friend who I’ve known for like 10 years got the guy of her dreams, the number of times she’s worn a skirt is probably less that 100, my other friend got asked out on 2 dates by 2 different guys, I can count all the times I’ve seen her wear a skirt. and yes some guys (cough cough not my brother) can look good in black.

    Shaz, my story is weird! there’s a good word! I know that too! but it’s different, well I’m kind of different, realy different. none of you have guessed who I like so I’ll just say it (it’s not Gabe/Edward) the charecter I like now, and was my most recent crush that lasted three days is Alastair (that’s his name in my story)! Now that kid can make a nasty navy blue, polyester pants that stand up on their own uniform look good. He can so totally pull off black.

  • Tay Tay

    Well then I geuss im just a wierd tom boy What. I only get really desperate guys! YOur friend must just be a lucky girl! But seriously do you think iggy should get a gf in the new book?

  • What?

    Hay, I’ve been crushing on this guy for almost a mont! that’s a record, and guess what?! He likes one of my best friends. Look tay tay, you either have to be a girly girl or a tom boy to get a guy in this world. Sadly, I think we’re nither.

  • MRFan

    Aww, what? Im sorry to hear that .
    Funny, same thing happened to me. :(
    he liked me, i didnt like him, then i liked him, he didnt like me…instead liked my best friend..i look back and its pathetic how we fought over him then..
    they dated for a bit..until he broke up with her..OVER EMAIL.
    that is pretty pathetic.

  • MRFan

    ohh and yeahh i hit the publish button before i could write this: i will update today!

  • What?

    He could like me, can’t tell. We were talking about who’s cute and of course I said him, he’s totally gorgeous, and he got all smily and happy and then I told him I like this other guy who has liked me sense kindergarten. And then my other friend gave me reasons why I should go out with this guy. Does that mean anything?

    Love you! I still have only sent like three texts, all of which were to a copany that keeps sending me text messages. Yeay, I’m out of the loop!

  • Tay Tay

    YOu should try the guy. Its not like a life time cometment What?. Dont run away from your feelings like Max!

    Im such a hippocrite though! I cant tell the guys i like i like them! They havent shown any sign of them liking me back! At least a non-desprate guy likes you What?.

  • Tay Tay

    BTW What?, Ive been crushing on these guys for 3 years! It sucks!

  • Shahz

    Wow, this is really turning into a boyfriend trouble blog type thingy, isn’t it? But at least there’s some hope for you what. and MRfan, you should break out of your 3 year cycle thing.:)hmmmm, let’s think of a random subject to talk……or blog about. What kind of music do you like? I’m a mixed person. I like pop and RnB and some rap…not much. I’m doing I.T coursework. Talk about boring. It’s so messed up. You have to write stuff and make a booklet and cut and paste and copy and paste and hand it in on a certain deadline and post stuff to this thing online for our school where we’re told what what to do for what task. wow that must be really confusing for you, seeing as u have no idea about what i’m doing and coursework and GCSE stuff. I finished my 5 history questions! and i just have to finish my art. I’m so glad i decided to take art. It’s one of the subjects that’s most fun – I sit with my friends and talk and work and the teacher is helpful but strict. We get 2 WEEKS for one piece of h/w but we work quite hard on that… or i do. gtg, my I.T work is calling me.
    Shahz

  • What?

    I finished a romace novel about the Mona Lisa. It drove me crazy! There’s a reason I’ve never had a boyfriend, and that’s because I hate mushy feelings!

    Shaz, I like rock and alternitve and classical and jazz (both the music and the basketball team) and R and B. I just positivly hate country (excluding the dixy chicks), hard rock (excepting Queen) and rap. They give me head aches.
    I know I’m picky.

    It’s finally not snowing!!! I’m so glad!!! but everything is covered in snow.

    Love you all!!!

  • Tay Tay

    Shaz Im with you on the music thing. But I throw in a little bit of country and yeah i know its geeky but broadway tunes! Its not a boyfriend trouble site, it WAS realated in someway to Maximum Ride ya know! Plus it wasnt even BOYFREIND more like CRUSHES.

  • Tay Tay

    Hey What i agree with you on the Dixie Chicks >:P Yuck! But Taylor Swift and stuff like that aint soooo bad. Anyone like the Jobros?

  • Tay Tay

    nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooo

  • MRFan

    I don’t like the JObros .
    I like Taylor Swift, proobably the only country music i do likee.
    SPICE GIRLS ! all the way .
    and i like miley cyrus ..she has good music .

  • Tay Tay

    Miley Cirus has good music but i hate her murchandise! Pocket books, clothes, DOLLS! i see her face everywhere. It gets SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO anoying! Why dontya like the jobros? i mean how can you not like love bug? Spice girls, Ok. Not great but i like soma there songs MRfan.

  • What?

    Ewwwwwwwwww! How can you even like Miley Cirus/Hannah Montanh?! She’s taking over the mindes of my 2nd graders, my student’s are losing they’re minds to her! Think about it that way! It’s painful to watch them on free dress days, all they whear is her merchendice! Ahg!

    Getting off my hatred of that person who here on this blog likes Greenday, or Amy Whinehouse or even Jack Johnson? Those guys are my favorites, besides all the swearing that is.

  • MRFan

    Spice girls rule!
    They’re amazzinggg ! Best girl band ever !!!!
    I don’t think the JoBros have any talent AT ALL .
    And I don’t think they’re cute either !!

    Although Kevin is kina funny !
    :)

  • Tay Tay

    YOU DONT THINK NICK IS CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!! MRfan! And what, I dont like her face more than the next person but i still love her music! Rock Star! AWWWEEEESSSSOOOOOOOMMMMMEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I like Hot and Cold to awesome song!!!

  • MRFan

    Hot n Cold is a good song, and yeah i dont think NIck is cute.

  • What?

    I have no clue what any of you guys are talking about unless jobrothers stands for Jonas Brothers… their music grinds on me, it’s like dragging nails down a chalkboard. I only like one of their songs, and that’s because I danced with my crush durring that song, so it’s not even a real reason.

    All the songs you guys are nameing I don’t know either, but then again, I didn’t know about Jessy McCartney, the Backstreet boys, and In Sync, till I was like nine or ten. I knew about Betoven and Motzart by the age of three. So incase you can’t tell I’m way out of date.

    Who likes the song Rehab by Amy Whinehouse? It won a grammy or something or other, my poor yearbook teacher thought she was in rehab. No one has answered my question… does anyone like greenday, the song hoiday in particular? I love that song!

    Love you guys!!!

  • Tay Tay

    Greenday is ok what?. You spelled Nsync wrong btw. I have always hated the music of motzart and all that clasic junk! Exept for what they play in the Nutcracker Ballet. I usually hate ballet, but my mom took me to see it and its beautiful! If its coming to a town near you, see it guy or girl. i also love old-timey church hymns. Like “Amazing Grace” or “Victory in Jesus” or “Im glad I know who Jesus is” and alot of others….. Any of yall Baptist who read a KJV Bible?

  • Tay Tay

    BTW: At least you like Hot n Cold MRFan.

  • ilovefangandmax

    HIYA! sorry i havn’t posted in awhile! iv’e been busy on maximum-x. does anyone else on here have one? anyway… sorry MRfan. i didn’t read that far yet in ur fanfic, but i read all the chapters now and I LOVE IT! it is really good. plz post soon and wat do u think will happen later in ur fanfic. also HI TayTay!im ilovefangandmax asu can see. well anyways…i also love the song Hot n’ Cold. Katy Perry is sooooo pretty. have u seen the music video? its is hilarous.=)

  • Tay Tay

    Hey ilovefangandmax!I <3 FANG!He sounds so Hot Teah but her song “I kissed a Girl and I liked it” so stupid and twisted! Is she British?, she sounds like it sometimes!

  • Sftballgirl20

    I have never read Maximum Ride but Tay Tay told me about it so now I think I want to read it. So I think if I read it I might be more intrested in reading tay tay said I probably would. Well bye for now.

  • Shahz

    Hey everyone:)
    MRfan – I gave u seven reviews and TWO EXCELLENT FANTASTIC IDEAS….NOW UPDATE DAMN IT!!!!!(BANGS FIST ON TABLE AND SPILLS COFFEE ON HAND)AAAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHH
    Sorry, crazy moment.
    Altogether, I have spent around 5 hours on ONE STUPID F***ING TASK. I HAVE WASTED MY HOLIDAYS ON WORK!!!!:( *cue dramatic sobbing*
    Man, I AM feling crazy today. Meh….
    Hi again ilovefangandmax. What happened to Voltaire and nightrider…..I sort of miss their cynical comments and insults and calling new people monitors…*more dramatic sobbing*
    Imaginary friend’s POV
    Man, Shahz – Ur crying a lot today…..for a boy….Meh
    My POV
    Quiet Imaginary friend….or i’ll turn u into a SHEEP!!!
    (A few seconds later)
    Baaaaaaaaaaaaah
    Oh, go eat some grass.
    lol. I hav my own mini story.
    Bye for now. I have to take my crazy pill/medicine.(Joke)
    Shahz

  • Tay Tay

    DUDE! Calm down with the frekin cussin! Its stupid and wrong! There is no excuse even if you bleep out half the letters, your still thinkin them! You know there are some kids on this website who dont want to hear any of that Crap! Seriously STOP cussing! Go to Church, get saved, And STOP CUSSING! Get it Got it GOOD!

  • What?

    WTF?! (F stand for freak)

    Oh Hi! ilovefangandmax! and stfballgirl20! would atleast some of you review my story?! I’ve worked on that, alot. I’m already to like chapter… 18? and I’ve only posted like 5 chapters + my preface. Please?!

    Tay-Tay… you go girl!!! I hate cussing. It makes me feel… dirty and yucky, not to sound to religous and all but, GOD DOESN’T WANT YOU TO CUSS!!! You do relize that it’s like the second commandment not to cuss (technacally it’s “don’t use the lord’s name in vain, but it’s the name concept)

    Anyway. It’s finnaly warm!!! and there’s only 19 days till Obma is president! And I know it’s like a week late but HAPPY CHRISMAHANAQUANZA!!! and new year!

  • Tay Tay

    You mean Boarak will-bombus? oh wat eve. I think theres nothin wrong with being religous and standing up for the perfect sinless Son of God who died for EVERYONE including you. Hey theres nothing wrong with that What?. God is good so we should show that. Im a saved CHRISTIAN and not ashamed to say so. If you are saved you should too.

  • What?

    Yeah Tay-Tay!!! wow…2009! Exciting!!! But it’s hard too wrap your mind around it.

  • Tay Tay

    Yeah. Lets get off the subject. UMMMM I like broadway plays, musicals, romance films and action movies. What kinda movies do yall like. I cant stand old westerns or black and white films BLECH! There so BORING!!!!!!!!!!

  • Tay Tay

    Hey What?, I just read your story and it was awesome! Publish it, i think its good enough, but thats just a 11 year old girls opion. Anyone read the twilight series?

  • Shahz

    I’m sorry for…..half swearing. You’re right – It’s stupid. And i’m a muslim…I’ve read the twilight series…almost. I need to get BD. I think MRfan’s read it. What?, is ur story on FF? If so, what’s ur profile name? and what’s ur story called. Just today (Friday) and the week end left till we’re (as Tesco say it)’back 2 skool’…or is it school? I still hav 2 fin my I.T but I can’t do some of it cos my folder’s at skool. Some ppl are way behind…..or so I’m told.
    Shahz:)
    hmmmm…..still got to finish art h/w….

  • MRFan

    I have read twilight. its really good.
    hmm..you guys have talked alot…
    ilovefangandmax, i really dont know whats going to happen in the next few chapters, do you have any idea how they should destroy ITex?
    CAUSE I HAVE NO IDEA !
    Thankssss ! :)

  • What?

    Thank you for reviewing here is chapters 6, 7 and 8.

    Chapter 6.
    Not very much happened over the next few weeks other than Elizabeth’s threats to drag me by my hair to the dance and a few streaks of brilliance. All in all I did not go to the dance because I choose to go to a football game instead. Which is so unlike me it’s not even funny, but because of my non-contact personality I choose the game over the dance.
    A few student council meetings went by and I was informed it was part of my duty to go to the dance at our school… which is where the next one was going to be held.
    About a week went by. I got sick and missed a day of school and that’s where I’ll start.

    “Mom I don’t feel too good.” I said lying im my bed my breath was hot. And I fell asleep.
    I woke nearly two hours later to the sound of violent movies with the volume turned up too high. I groaned my little brother was here to. I wanted to sleep (that is not normal at all) and read (that is perfectly normal). I spent my sick day resting lounging and making sure my little brother didn’t blow up the house.
    Wednesday was odd. I felt like everything was an inside joke and I was the only one left out of it. Wednesdays never really change that’s why I like them.
    Thursday was slow as usual. But as the end of the day approached it started to speed up that was unusual. We finished lunch and went outside instead of having music, the music teacher had an unfortunate accident, broke her back and was not teaching yet. We went outside and I promised myself I’d keep an eye out for Alastair because for the past few weeks he had gotten hurt.
    It was possibly the last warm day of the year and my friends and I were dancing and turning and jumping. For three seconds I did not watch Alastair. Figuring the odds were very low that he’d get hurt… little did I know fate was waiting for those three seconds and as always… the odds always stack up against me and tower over me like a skyscraper.
    I heard a thud Hamburger down I thought. There was a kid in my class named Michel and he always asked how to say hamburger in different languages, even though it never really varied from language to language he still earned the name Hamburger. And Hamburger usually fell down while playing football.
    Then I heard a scream. I turned and saw Alastair. With his hand over his head. I wanted to swear. Instead I gawked. I failed my own assignment. And it was a very easy assignment.
    He took his hand off of his now swelling forehead.
    My stomach dropped and filled with something jellyfish like that was stinging my internal organs. I wasn’t close enough to smell it thank God for that but I could see it, and you know how I said I didn’t think Alastair was a vampire… I was still a bit sketchy about that but this disproved my theory completely.
    It looked like a red lake with rivers running down from it into his blue eyes and dyeing them a blood red. If I weren’t already on the ground I would have been. I looked down at the asphalt and tried to get the jellyfish to stop stinging, to get my stomach to stop knotting. I looked down and I saw blood on the ground. Every which way I turned I saw blood. Which made the jellyfish sting more and make more jellyfish that stung more, they gradually pushed my lunch up to my mouth I looked at the sky. The sky couldn’t be blood stained. That was my only relief.
    My friends tried to help but… they only made it worse. Saying things that would make the jellyfish only more hyper. Like “Think about a car Ella.” immediately blood was splattered over the hood.
    “Hit and run.” I said. My friend Jenny laid in front of the car with her tong lolling out of her mouth and her arms splayed out. I laughed a forced laugh. Laughing made the stings burn. “Not helping Jenny.” I said. Gripping my torso. One hand over my mouth.
    “Wooooooow. What’s wrong Ella?” Gabe said.
    “Blood.” I mumbled through my hands. My stomach heaved.
    “So you saw it?” he asked.
    “Duh!!!” Jenny and Luptia said. “And It’s not funny either. Just look at her!” the two said.
    “Ella you don’t look to good.” Gabe and a few others said.
    “No really?” they said.
    My stomach heaved again. I closed my eyes and saw only the horrific scene replay and felt guilt butterflies battle with the blood jellyfish. I groaned. Eventually the butterflies and the Jellyfish mashed into one mutant hybrid that I call a Jellyfly. It stung and had the mass of a Jellyfish but moved as freely and quickly as a butterfly it sucked. And I groaned. Chapter 7
    Days passed after that event. It was now the week of the dance and I pondered a) How and where I was going to express the fact to Alastair that it was all my fault that I messed up his face and b) What in the world I was going to where to the mandatory dance.
    On Wednesday he walked into class and I knew I would never reveal my guilt because that would only make him hate me. So I decided to avoid him.
    “Ella, I left my notebook up stairs. Would you come with me to get it?”
    “Uhhhhhhhhhh, I have to get to P.E.”
    “Ella would you help me with my math?”
    “Got to do my own.”
    “Ella I need help with my spelling.”
    “Ummmmmmmmmmmmm, I suck at spelling.”
    I understand I’m a truly selfish and evil creature, and maybe in thirty years I’ll come out but until then… well I’ll avoid anything that will result in a casual conversation. I could slip. I’ve done it before. I told Christine I once hated her, I don’t now, but I just don’t think I’m ready yet.
    And with my selfishly avoiding Alastair the dance approached rapidly, without my permission. Before I knew it the dance was at my heels and nipping at them to. And by Friday everyone was talking about how totally awesome it was going to be. While I groaned.

    I walked into the dance not wearing any make up because Kendrick had told me not to because girls often wear way too much and look like vampires. I felt out of place already because I saw Olivia and she was even wearing make up and I looked like a dork.
    I must admit, I don’t need makeup. My cheeks are naturally red and so are my lips, and my undertones make me look like I’m always wearing eyeshadow, and I hated makeup beyond reason, but I still felt like a dork.
    Well I nervously paced the dance floor (which was actually the gym decorated by yours truly) with my friends. Nervous is actually the best word ever to describe this dance.
    Eventually Kendrick showed up and assumed that my nervousness was due to the fact that I hadn’t danced with anyone yet and tried to comfort me, and I had the strangest feeling that he was going to ask me to dance at the end of his monolog but instead when he was finished with the sentence “Don’t worry I haven’t danced with anyone yet, then again I just got here.” some girl named Hannah, and not my best friend Hannah that I have known for just about ever, asked him to dance.
    Which made me sad. Then about five minuets later (one of the worst 5 minuets of my life by the way) a couple of girls, who quiet frankly scared the heck out of me, told me their friend wanted to dance with me and that they would go find him and me in time for the next slow dance, little did I know it was a rather mean practical joke to mess me up even further, I found my friends and excitedly told them my exciting news. When the slow song came up the boy was nowhere to be found and I was once again feeling like a social retard that was bound to end up alone and loveless, and despite the fact that I was Lutheran, I should just become a nun.
    I felt like that for the rest of the dance until the last ten minuets, that was when I decided to ask Kendrick to dance because a) he knew very little about me b) was kind of cute and roughly my height c) was the most likely to say yes (bad incident with Gabe even though I didn’t want to dance with him) and d) was the least likely to laugh in my face about it, but my best friend Hannah beat me to it. So I was left to pace in a small area of closed in dancing couples. Chapter 8.
    Over that weekend I pondered just how I was going to tell Kendrick about how I wanted to dance with him at the dance instead I decided, as usual, not to.
    I went to school on Monday, inquiring about the dance. “How was the dance?” “Did you like it?” “Was it dark/light enough for you?” stupid questions like that.
    Then we were playing capture the flag out at break that Wednesday and I was talking to one of my best friends ever… Hannah. Somehow the dance got brought up (I’m guilty you caught me) and then Kendrick came up. Now I must admit that Kendrick is pretty cute, once again not my type but totally Hannah’s, he’s semi-tall and has blond hair.
    “You know I was going to ask Kendrick to dance.” I told my tom-boy best friend who was sitting next to me, she was in jail. And incase you don’t know Hannah is really pretty, he has blond hair and blue green eyes she is also semi-tall and decided that she was going to be Jewish at the age of seven. She and Kendrick would make the cutest couple.
    “I know.” she said.
    Traitor I snarled in my head then it hit me a kind of epiphany or enlightenment of some kind… or just one of my ever so common blond moments.
    “You like him don’t you?” I said appalled and then suddenly so proud. Hannah could have her first boyfriend ever! And before me too.
    “Like who?” she snapped back. Kendrick was standing quiet close to us actually.
    “You know…” I said flicking my head in his general direction. “The one with the K at the beginning of his name.” well there are two kids in my class that’s name starts with a K one is Kris (with a K, I can’t help it, it’s a bad habit.) And then of course the one who was Kendrick.
    She was stunned with my guess “Maybe.” she said. This calls for a middle schooler translation. Drum roll please. Maybe always translates to (dramatic pause) “defiantly yes how on earth did you know.” or “yes and I just don’t want to say it.”
    I made that sound you see 2nd graders make at a puppy or a kitten, the really cute kind that they never want to look away from, inside my head. Because I had the funniest feeling inside that Kendrick liked my quirky best friend of almost 9½ years. That or he liked me. I can never tell the difference.
    And speaking of who likes who I’ll tell you who I liked, ed as in past tense being key. As a matter of fact I did like Alastair.

  • What?

    Oh yeah forgot… MRfan. If your story is about Max, fang and all of those other guys Max should do some major butt kicking, and then run into snakes overcoming her fear for the love of her flock she single handedly beats ITEX!!! just a random violent thought, I get those a lot.

    Ummmm, about my story. review it!!!

  • MRFan

    I like it, but HOW could she beat Itex excactly ? we need to get into specifics….hmm..
    ’cause i am in the mood to write tonight, but I have nothing to write !

  • Tiff

    Hey dose anyone now when the 5th book is coming out?

  • Shahz

    Hey ppls.The fifth book comes out 16th MArc or 21st or somethind like that. That was really good What. I liked It, even though I don’t really understand some of it like wat happenned to Alastair. You should talk to the person who’s Alastair in real life. I feel like such a dork. Did u notice It sounds like when some girls say ‘I can’t wait to find MY Edward’…..
    anyway, sorry MRfan I’m out of ideas right now. I’ll let u no if i do get a good one(idea)
    Shahz

  • Tay Tay

    YOur first geuss was right 16th I think there needs to be more more more Romance! Am I the only one who thinks that. I think the 5th book is called MAX rumors ya know, never sure. But Max and Fang, lots more romance. But I think(i probably said this a while back but) iggy needs to get hooked up.

  • ilovefangandmax

    Hey peeps! im back(for now), but anyways im sorry MRfan, but i have no clue of how they should desrtoy Itex. hmmm, maybe somehow they r able to break in and of course nudge uses her computer skills to do some part and gazzy and iggy build a bomb and (dang it! i can’t remember the name of the girl) she finishes it off. hmmmm maybe a twist with earsers(spelling?)come and fight and take off with max and both sam and fang look for her. u decide. also HAVE U SEEN THE COVER OF THE 5TH BOOOK?! it looks okay…i guess…IT LOOKS AWSOME! lol!xoxoxoxo

  • What?

    The reason I haven’t said anything all day is because the internet died.

    first of all yes! march! that gives me time to work on my science project (did you know you can get 28 times more fuel from an arce of cattails than an arce of corn?)

    Shaz, “Alastair” hit his face back in september, tore it up, realy bad, and I’m talking about American football, two hand touch, his volicity changed at a quick rate. it’s kind of a waste of time now but thanks for reviewing, all of you take his example and please read my story!

    MRfan, no clue on the details, that’s up to you.

  • DES

    HEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY PEOPLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What going on? Iv been soooooooo BOREDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD :( :)

  • MRFan

    If I were to do something to one of teh characters (wink,wink, nudge,nudge) who should it be?
    Max
    Ariana
    Sam
    Fang
    Gazzy
    Angel
    Nudge
    Iggy?

  • Shahz

    thanx what?, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! don’t hurt any of them – maybe a few grazes and the voice could come back and give a brain attack cos its the only way it can get in. maybe the brain attack could somehow cause a blackout with so much power;) ur welcome MRfan! lol jk
    Shahz :)
    is ‘alastair’ better yet what? let’s hope he heals quickly seeing as he’s one of ur good friends (right?)

  • MRFan

    I meant like, kidnapped or something ? (If i get them kidnapped)
    Which character ??

  • Tay Tay

    Hey Im back I was grounded >:P

  • Shahz

    Hey again Tay Tay:) ummmmm, MRfan, I’m not sure who should be kidnapped…..maybe Max? Omega could come back and help get her……then other stuff could happen…..like Max getting a new power?! Please? Just tell me if I annoy u with that new power thing MRfan, ok? (I’ve already mentioned it once)
    Shahz:)

  • Tay Tay

    Hi!

  • Shahz

    Do you reckon nightrider and Voltaire will ever post again?:( Come on guys! where is everyone? Hurry and post soon:)please
    Shahz

  • MrFan

    U dont know if they’ll post again ..
    maybe soon .
    :)
    Okay, i apoligize for not writing anythingg, and i will post atleast one chappie this weekend.
    ill write tonight ! :)

  • MRFan

    Sorry, that ‘U’ was suppose to be an I .

  • nightrider

    im so sorry i havent been here in a while i went on a trip, got grounded, had to go to the hospital,and got grounded again so i have a lot to say

    first off i AM emo so hushit all u emo haterz >:{

    I like screamo duh, disturbed,slipknot,staind in fact im listening to staind rite now in fact i mite write the lyrics later

    wow that went by quick so im gonna do the lyrics
    some language
    Song:Spleen
    Album:dysfunction
    Artist:staind

    Cant breathe!
    Shut up! Shut up!

    I feel i give everything to you

    Cant breathe!
    Shut up! shut up!

    I think theres nothing left to do

    Cant breathe!
    Shut up! Shut up!

    I dont like today
    Take it all away
    Just like what you say
    I dont want you

    kinda like the way
    Everything is gray
    just like what you say
    I dont need you

    I dont look like you
    Do the things you do
    But im fu**ed up too
    I dont need you

    Cant breathe!

    srry ig2g

    Shut up! Shut up!

  • Tay Tay

    Yeah. Im bored and ready for the next MR to come out!!! Im stuck readin this wierd book Lightning theif,its about the Greek Gods and fighting and stuff. Its not near as interesting as MR!!!! The book is shorter than MR and LT took me a week to read when MR2 only took me about 10 hrs! ANyone know the title to the new MR?

    “Maximum Ride 5″: ……. I read somwhere it was called “MAX” but im not sure.

  • Tay Tay

    Oh yeah and BTW that song soundz REALLY stupid! Id just like to meet the kiss/doctor suess wanna be who rote that crap. Listen to something that dont sound like your Evil. Maybe church hymes or country or something that makes since! For pete sake! Get ahold of reality for a change! ANd im not a emo hater i have emo freinds but i just domt see the point oh yeah i Really wanna stab myself! That sounds like loads of fun! Scarring for life amazing! Sounds like a hoot! What ever I know that sounded mean but I was just speaking my mind. I know your entitled to your opinon to but I really dont get the point. Other than when some of the hotter ones have natural long black hair hanging over their eyes making them look……. mysterious! And some dont listen to screamo i have one who like….. stabs themselves like crazy who listen to country.

  • MRFan

    He is entitled to his own opniion. if he likes that music, he can listen to that music.
    sorry if that sounded mean, i didnt mean for it to be ..
    GUESS WHAT !?
    I wrote last night ! YAY !
    I will DEFINTELY POST A CHAPTER SOMETIME THIS WEEKEND !

  • MRFan

    One more thing: Nice to have you back nightrider !

  • Tay Tay

    It didnt sound mean MRfan. I get what your saying. But I wasnt trryin to be mean either i just didnt get the point. But Whatever off that subject PLEAZ

  • MRFan

    Sure !
    Umm, new tpic, new topic..
    How ’bout favourite movies !?

  • Shahz

    Hey evry1.
    1) WELCOME BACK NIGHTRIDER!! Ok, I’m not an emo hater. I have a friend/aquaintance who WAS an emo and actually cut himself on the outside of his forearms. He doesn’t anymore but he still listens to that type of music….like u nightrider – music, I mean. He used to be one of my closest friends but not anymore, he can be such a jerk……or he is. He’s getting better….a bit.
    2) I agree with u about the opinion thing MRfan! BTW, I read I’d chapter and its realy good. I’ve discovered that the songs that I’ve heard from Paramore are really good sooo I like Paramore!
    Its not realy the kind of. music I listen to….but its still good!
    Shahz:)
    Post soon everyone:)

  • Tay Tay

    Favorite movie………. Challenging…… My girl! Its so sweet but it makesme cry when… well if yall aint seen it i better not tell you the sad part. But my other favorite would be……………… Annie or Grease. I cant get enough of Broadway play based movies! And I love Dirty dancing and Titanic!!!!!!!!!!! “Jack Ill never let go!” Oh my gosh I blubbered like a baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and Footloose is an awesome movie. Has anyone seen HOT ROD or NAPOLIEN DYNAMITE!? Funniest movies EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • MRFan

    haha, while were on funny movies, most hilarious movies of all time:
    Monty Python: Holy Grail and Life of Brian
    Blazing Saddles
    Slap Shot
    & more, but those are good ones ! 😛

  • z man

    I love the maximum ride series I’m obsessed with you guys and you are my idols I would do anything for you guys. I have a dance in school and are name is the mini flock for when you guys split up I’m Gazzy, and my other friends are Fang and Iggy. I hope the series never ends.

    sincerely your number 1 fan!

  • Shahz

    Oh, the name of the book ur reading is lightning thief, right Tay Tay…well that happens to be one of my favourite series’ along with MR and Twilight Saga and quite a few others…The series is called Percy Jackson and the Olympians or something along those lines…and they ARE interesting!hmmmm, favourite films….I’m not sure….I like films:)…but I don’t really have a favourite!lol
    Shahz:)

  • nightrider

    so what if i like screamo(heavy metal) but thats not all i like theres a big line in between metal and screamo the song above was screamo slipknot is screamo but disturbed is metal and i also like ac/dc and im glad u guys arent emo haters cuz the football team at my school is and i get beat up almost every day and u dont have to wear all black to be emo i wear just plain dark colors (navy blue,red,black,dark green,etc)my gf is one of the emos who wear all black and she looks real good in it and some of my favorite movies r

    Underworld 1&2
    the riddick movies 1,2&3
    i am legend
    stephen king movies (especially pet cemetary)
    where the red fern grows (it makes me cry which is hard to do)
    and the fast and the furious movies (all of them)

  • Shahz

    Hey people, I hate it when poeple pick on other people…..stupid footballers. I try to stop my friends(I’m not very sociable)from being like that. Even though I’m not sociable I have quite a lot of friends. Some of my friends are like that…so annoying. Well, I try….Anyway, I have my fair share of haters….they don’t scare me. Apparently I’m too nice….I can see why they think that. I’m not popular but I do have friends who are popular. I’m lucky. My new years resolution is/was to be more sociable and I’m really trying. So far, I haven’t been to…..whatever I am when I’m with people I don’t know or when I’m with my friends and they are with people I don’t know.
    Shahz:)….stupid footballers(at nightrider’s school)

  • Tay Tay

    I love I am ledgend and where the red fern grows!It makes me cry too. but ima sap for movies like that! Hey dont be a hater of foot ballers too! Theres nothing wrong with ALL of them. Some of them are stuck up Jerks, hot stuck up jerks, or a funny and sweet and hot dude! And i like football. Does that make ME a stupid foot ball player? Anyway, Blades of Glory is a funny movie too. What do ya think Bloody Valentine is gonna be like? It looks cool!

  • Tay Tay

    Btw, Shaz, Im not sayin i dont like lightning theif, its just not as interesting as MR. I mean it gets good near the middle but thats it.

  • What

    Hay!!! yeah, the internet died (again), you guys talked alot!!!
    Shaz Alastair is better, he still has scars though.
    Tay Tay how can you not like lightning theif!? that was an awsome book, review my story please!!!

  • What

    I forgot some stuff, nightrider, not an emo hater, I’m new by the way, you don’t really know me unless you read every message then I guess you know me, anyway some emo people scare me… but then again spiders, hieghts, dances, cute guys, my mom, my religion teacher, germs(sometimes), drug attitics, homeless people(sometimes as well), my brother, my twin brother, my twin brother’s friend, bad grades, cancer, aszimers, hot oil, black cats(only the ferrel kind), sharp things, clowns and mimes all scare me, so I’m just like that.
    My favorite movie… hummmmmmm… (thinking still)…six way tie between Enchanted (not Ella Enchanted ’cause they ruined the book), twilight, marly and me, the sound of music, Monty python and the quest for the holy grail, and Elf.

    Okay, I am going to post this story about being bullied, this did happen, so Tay-Tay, this might make you cry.

    I popped right out of bed, calculating if it was really worth facing yet another day of my worst nightmare, another day of tolerating the scorns and the jibes.
    No… it wasn’t worth it. I did not want to tolerate another day of 4th grade, no I did not want to be called bad names or be at least ignored. I did not want to spend another day ogling at my crush knowing that I’d never ever go on a date with him. I did not want to spend another day listening to my teacher drone on about stuff I already knew.

    “Alexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx!!!! You’re making everyone late!” my mom said.
    I tied my shoe and went down stairs to have breakfast and brush my teeth and hair. “Mom I think I’m sick.” I said. Trying to get out of school. She smelled my breath looked at my throat and gave me a look that said “You are going to school no matter how much you hate it.”

    I was early that morning. Morgan, my best friend, wasn’t there yet, and Will, my twin brother, was hanging out with his friends.
    “There goes the dork!” said the devil herself. The devil’s name was Patricia H. even though we all knew that the “H” stood for Hice, I thought it stood for the place where bad people go, where she would soon return.
    I smiled weakly at her.
    “Oh, you don’t talk? Do you not know how?” she said.
    “Like your earrings.” I said looking at my feet. I had a lisp and didn’t like to talk.
    “Humf, guess you can talk, just not very well.” she said flicking her long brown hair, whipping me across the face.
    “Did you see what she’s wearing?” one said.
    “Long sleeves in the middle of May? Are you kidding me?” another said.
    “Oh don’t be so mean.” Satan said. “We all know she has scales on her arms. You know like a fish?” she made a fish face.
    Tears started to well up in my eyes.
    “Her shoes are the real problem.” the first one said.
    Okay, I only have one pair of shoes. And well… they’re not the prettiest or in the best shape.
    “Her hair looks awful! Does she even brush it?!”
    I quit brushing my hair weeks ago, they taunted be even if I did so why bother right?
    “Those jeans don’t even fit the fish dork right! That or she’s really fat.”
    Tears started to slip. I didn’t want to go to class crying, it calls to attention to me, the fish dork.
    I toned them out as they talked behind my back.

    I arrived at class with my nose still running, I claimed it was allergies and said that it wasn’t anything really bad.
    Megan was out sick that day, that left me to face the devil and all of her followers.
    That lunch I sat alone at the opposite side of the lunchroom, because of the people calling me fish dork.
    Then I heard foot steps. It was Rose, a once dear friend of mine, until she started hanging out with Satan.
    “I’m really sorry about Patricia .” Sage said. Sage was the only really decent Patricia follower.
    I looked her in the eye. I look that said “Go away I like your apology but we all know Anna’s not sorry.”
    “Alex, I don’t think you’re a fish dork.” Why was she risking her reputation talking to the newly named fish dork? “Anna’s just jealous.” Jealous of what? “Fish arms”? “Don’t let her get under your skin.” Rose said.
    Patricia had everything I had and much, much more. For instance, more that one pair of shoes.
    I cried over my lunchbox. Then I stood up, dumped my lunch and tears and went outside for another round of torture.
    “Fish girl!” I was called.
    “Rat’s nest.” and other nasty names.

    “Alex, you’re having some tough times at school.” My mom said.
    “So?” I said, pain burned in my eyes I could almost feel her knowing it.
    “Alex, honey, we’re moving you to a different school, you’ll shadow tomorrow, so you’ll know the kids. I can’t watch this for another year.”
    I was kind of happy kind of sad, my social skills are that of a stick.

    I woke up early to dress up nice and do my hair.
    My mom walked my two brothers and me up to the school, in through the front door. The adrenaline kicked in. What if there’s another Anna like person here. What if I’m too weird to fit in here too? Was all I could think of.
    The teacher in the 4th grade room said that I was going to sit by a girl named Dianne.
    Sarah looked like Patricia . Except that she had blue eyes. I started to get scared. I said almost nothing.
    At recess a smallish girl named Grace said “I dreamed you were an alien last night, but I can see now that you’re not. I actually think you’re cool. You’re so tall.”
    I nodded smiling. Not making a good impression, at all.

    I don’t know what it was about that school that I liked so much. Weather it was the small dumpiness of it or the kids who went there. Maybe I could fit in here, maybe I could finally not be noticed as fish dork, but rather Alex. Alex, the girl who doesn’t talk a lot, who doesn’t like contact, but who is totally cool. Maybe that would be what people would think of me from now on. Simply knowing not every school was like the one I was at, that not everyone is either Satan or one of her followers was… well. Kind of reassuring to me. Kind of like I was drowning and I was just thrown a life line. I could get used to this not crying myself to sleep every night. I could, maybe, like this experience. My only problem was braking this to my very few friends.

    Okay that all happened to me only I once again changed all the names. Is it good enough to enter into stone soup?

  • MRFan

    Yaaaa, what !
    I LIKE MONTY PYTHON AND THE HOLY GRAIL TOO !
    high five !
    😛

  • What

    Sweet! Cool, I’ve only seen it like twice, but I can watch it so many more times!!

    I have a book report due and a sleepover tonight so, if I don’t “talk” for a while it’s because of that, and I got grounded ’cause my religion teacher hates me, have any of you guys had teachers who hate you?

  • MRFan

    Yeahh , all the time.

  • What?

    Really? This is the only one.
    On a lighter note. They won!!!! They means the 7th/6th grade Basket ball team.
    Sorry about missing the question mark on my name. I just switched computers and I forgot about that.

  • Tay Tay

    All the teachers this year hate me. I cant blame them cause i talk like CRAZY at school. Cool story What.

  • What?

    Thanks, it really did happen to me too!!!
    I don’t even know why this teacher hates me, maybe ’cause she’s short and I’m tall.

    Have any of you guys herd that song “Love Song” by Taylor swift?

    and one more thing I will post some more of my story, the chapter one you know, Gabe, Alastair, Dianne. That one.

    Chapter 9.
    “Mom are haunted houses supposed to be scary?” I said.
    “Ella, what do you think?”
    “Yes?… oh wait no… wait yes?… no… y-”
    “Ella” my mom interrupted “yes they are supposed to be scary.” that brought the cogs in my head to an immediate halt.
    “Okay.” I shrugged.
    Just then the doorbell rang and Dianne and Monica was there. “Bye Mom.” I shouted from the front door “see ya’ tomorrow.” I half sang half yelled.
    I might as well fill you in on the major details as in what the heck I was doing.
    I was going to a haunted house, more like haunted village, which was exactly the name of the place I was going.
    I was practically bouncing up and down with excitement.
    Well there wasn’t a lot that went on between there and after the “Haunted village.” except that Jenny got trapped by a hobo in a corn maze and screamed her poor terrified head off. And that I laughed through the whole thing. And also I’m pretty sure that the “This Is The Place” heritage park has that whole thing copyrighted and I don’t want to get sued. But theirs one detail that is both vital and humiliating to the three boys that went through the village with us.
    “I don’t get it.” I complained. “A devil in the basement of the LDS church. What the bloody heck?”
    One guy turned around. “Actually,” he said in a matter of fact tone that tugged on my memory “the basement represents hell, and hell is where the devil lives.” he said. That also tugged on some far off memory that was really foggy.
    “Alice I’ll buy you a root beer.” I said. Alice and I had become good friends, she went to the same public school as I did.
    Just as I was getting my change back I turned to Alice. “Holy crap!”
    “What is it Ella?” she looked panicked. She was probably scared about my sanity. Most sane people don’t run around screaming “Holy crap!” and in case you haven’t noticed… I am not sane.
    I lowered my voice so that the boys on the other end of the building couldn’t hear me. “I swear that kid is Milo, I mean my mom said he changed but I wasn’t expecting this-”
    Alice cut me off. “It is Milo.”
    I spent the next few minuets looking from the Milo looking kid to Alice. Mentally comparing the old one and the new one. His voice had defiantly deepened, and his hair had gotten longer and he had gotten taller too.
    “Yo Milo.” Alice said.
    I could feel myself blushing by the tingling in my cheeks from the overflow of blood in that area.
    The Milo looking kid turned around and smiled, literally smiled that kind of “I’m in love” smile at me. “What?” he said.
    I hesitated for mere milliseconds that felt like forever pull it together I thought. “By any chance is your name Milo Marston?” I gushed stupidly.
    “Yeah.” he said.
    “Oh my gosh!” I said without any hesitation this time. “It’s me Ella do you remember me? From the 4th grade? Who are you with?” I gushed, not stupidly but instead like a complete idiot.
    “Well.” he said.
    Oh my god he’s actually cute now I thought. and even better, he still likes me… I think.
    “here’s Eliot and here’s Chris.”
    “Wow! You haven’t grown at all!” I said to Eliot, who I just so happened to like all those years ago, but somehow he still managed to stay about 4’9″ all this time. “I’m sorry, so sorry, it’s just…” I trailed off, not knowing how to finish my sentence. “Where do you go to school now?” I asked.
    “West.” Milo said. Looking kind of dreamily into my eyes. My knees felt like Jell-O. “I’m going to go talk with my friends now.” he said. And he looked sad. Actually sad to leave me. Sad! No boy has ever looked that way when I’m involved or the reason he looks sad.
    “You should totally go out with him.” Alice said.
    I’m sorry but I actually almost punched her. I love Alice and all, but she just totally ruined my moment.
    Chapter 10.
    Okay I’ll take the time to explain who this Milo kid is.
    Well we went to public school together, which explains the whole Alice dealieo, the last time I saw him was almost three years ago. Back then he was brilliant. And I mean brilliant. Whenever I think of him I think “e=mc²!” he was the kind of kid the “popular” kids thought was a dork… and I wasn’t much better… in fact is I was worse. This kid got into ELP (extended learning program) and I didn’t (well I know there’s a reason there but I just found that out, and it wasn’t because I was too dumb). I think he has had a crush on me sense somewhere around the 2nd grade. He was able to see through my cleverly designed quiet persona for what I really was, and that irked the heck out of me but Milo was a good kid. He and my twin brother had designed a time machine that never worked, in the second grade mind you. He was in the student council with me and during the yearly “Lip sync” we were put on back stage duty. Which was the most boring job I have ever done, and had Milo not been there I would have killed myself for something to do. He has dark brown eyes and dark brownish blackish hair. Now a days he was tall and handsome for that matter. And now five minuets after I had just found out I had been through a haunted house with the guy who has liked me for just about ever, I feel an over whelming feeling of guilt for never giving him a chance… ever. Instead I liked one of his best friends, and had given the charming short Eliot more thought than the brilliant Milo in the past three years and really I had only given Eliot about five minuets worth of thought.
    And that was enough to give me enough guilt for another four or five possibly even six years.
    Chapter 11.
    Okay I’ll skip straight to the next dance.
    This dance was way out there and I mean like different city. But I still went because my mom claimed it would be “fun” don’t worry this dance is not nearly as depressing as the last one so you don’t have to skip it.
    I got there only to be greeted by a few people. All of which were boys. And you’ll never guess who was there because he never goes to dances (If you’re guessing Gabe, you are so far from wrong it’s not even funny) it was in fact Alastair. It was pretty funny and shocking to see him because about two minuets after I got there a slow song started and he danced with my religion teacher… and it wasn’t even your classic nervously shifting of weight middle school dance, but rather the tango. Go ahead and laugh it was funny.
    I started to loosen up when they played the hokey pokey and the chicken song. Right after that my friend Natalie found me and forced me to dance with some guy I don’t even know, who I later found out was gay, like homosexual. Not that there was anything wrong with that.
    A little bit later, I told my friends that I wanted to dance with someone I actually know. And during a boys choice song guess who asked me (no it wasn’t Gabe, stop guessing him. He has a Girlfriend!) Alastair asked me to dance… well not exactly asked but rather this weird head thing that I used to point out Kendrick to Hannah.
    I rolled my eyes. He flicked his head again.
    “You’re kidding right?” I said in a tone trying to make it sound like it was funny, which it was.
    “Don’t make me do the head thing again.” he said.
    “Okay… I know you’re kidding.” I said.
    “I really am not.” he said looking me in the eye.
    “Okaaaaaaaaaay?” I said elongating the word, giving him time to say “Oh I’m just joking.” but he didn’t.
    “I don’t know how to dance.” he said in a voice that was as close to a whisper as you can get when you have to scream to talk to the person standing a foot away from you.
    I put my hands on his shoulders, and almost started hyperventilating, I did the same thing to the guy who I danced with earlier, but if eight years of dance has taught me anything, it would be how to keep your breathing under control.
    He put his hands on my shoulders. “No.” I breathed. He clearly couldn’t hear me. But got the message any way.
    We swayed. It took all my concentration to keep from blabbing my guilt about his face and to keep my breathing under control.
    “Who told you to dance with me?” I slipped, it was by accident. I of course yelled it. But it was a calm yell, look I live with a 2nd grader. I know how to win a screaming match and still sound calm.
    “Amanda.” he said.
    My eyes narrowed to slits. Then I shrugged, thinking she must of heard me wrong.
    “This… is… getting… really… awkward!” he yelled.
    “Thank God you noticed!” I yelled calmly.
    “Can… I… leave?!” he asked straight out.
    “Please do!” I said.
    So for the rest of the night he couldn’t look me in the eye, at all. He doesn’t need to be embarrassed or anything… unless he enjoyed it. I should be embarrassed. I mean to get to dance with someone my friend had to tell him to. That’s just plain sad. And that was a friend to friend dance and nothing else. Unless he wanted it to be. I mean, dancing with him was like dancing with a brother, it was fun, It’s not like we were boyfriend and girlfriend right? People could tell… can you? I know you’re shaking your head… lets all just pretend that you said yes Okay?
    Well on to my last dance of the night.
    I danced with Jamil. He’s nice. And this was another friend to friend dance, although this was a little less obvious. So Jamil is tall, he’s African American, and has an poofy hair style. He’s pretty cute. At one point, Olivia had to tell him something. I was totally fine with that. And Alyssa said, “Why did you stop?! You were sooooo cute!” I pointed in their general direction. “Oh.” she said.
    That basically concludes that dance excepting one thing. The last slow dance of the night. Of course I didn’t dance but it was the best one of them all.
    Hannah danced with Kendrick, Gabe with his girlfriend, Dianne with A.J., Alyssa with Ash, and the one that made me smile the most was Alastair and the girl who he has liked for almost forever, and to think I taught him how to dance. I may have just helped get him one step closer to the girl of his dreams. And even though it wasn’t me, I was truly happy. I wasn’t quite sure why. Sure this dance ended the same way as the last, sure I probably wasn’t going to get a guy ever, sure I was probably never going to see Milo again, who was in fact the guy of my dreams, maybe you are right! Maybe I am a loser and a dork and a know it all! And sure maybe I should except the fact that I’ll be single all my life, and that I should get on with it!

    Why I brought that song up is about chapter 11, read it while listening to that song. Totally magical.

  • Tay Tay

    What, I LOVE Love Story!!!!! Its like an awesome song but on the Fearless soundtrackt,
    Top 5:
    1 You Belong With Me
    2 Love Story
    3 The Way I loved You
    4 Best Day With You
    5 WHite Horse

  • Tay Tay

    Btw, NICE STORY!

  • What?

    Thank you, did you listen to “Love story” while reading the part where Ella danced whit Alastair? I know I wrote it and all but it gave me the chills, it totally fits in with the mood.

  • Tay Tay

    I didnt but ill reread it

  • What?

    Thanks.

  • What?

    I was bored and I was looking through a conversation thing we were haveing, it was about musice, Tay Tay, I didn’t even know Taylor Swift exisited then so that’s why I didn’t know. I was also looking through some of the stuff I said about that guy. Boy I was obsessed.

    I would like to talk about him though. My friend texted him that she knew who liked him (me) and when he texts her back most likely soon, he’ll know. Eeeep!!! But maybe he does like me. All will be rivieled on the day the world is saved (Sorry if any of you are George Bush fans. My mom is going to have a shoe throughing party, Whoo hoo!!!) The day the world is saved is tommorow by the way, so once again: Eeeeep!

    Anywhoo, here’s a totally random thing. I’m going to say a joke I heard at camp one year if any of you guys get it, explain and “It’s something I can’t explain.” doesn’t count. so here goes. How do you dress an ice cube? (think for a second while I write some random words and their definitions. miasma-rotting smell, okay done) You butter it in ranch!(?) I don’t get it. Maybe it’s because I over think it.

  • Tay Tay

    Im not a Bush fan nor O bomb us. I bet that dude likes you. YOu sound like a creative person and a nice one. BTW I dont get the joke either. I got sumthin random to say too, OO E OO AHAH TING TANG WADW WADA BING BANG! lol! Im really bored.

  • nightrider

    if that happened to you what (post 1113) in fact that makes me want to write about something too kinda like that (it starts at the same time of day) happened to me. little kids dont read and i took some stuff out otherwise you might have nightmares for weeks (names changed), enjoy

    I woke up and groaned loudly from sleeping on the hard cot that is called my bed. I wasnt tired because im one of those people who can sleep for like, 30 minutes and feel like a million bucks. I pulled on my uniform (navy blue shirt and khaki pants) and pocketed my switchblade, i never know when i might need it. I slipped out the door quitely so that my mother wouldnt see me and do something bad because i already smelt the sharp scent of alchohol in the air.

    I walked down to the bus stop and i saw Charlie the football player already there. “Wats up emo freak” he said just as Bob came around the corner and i could tell from the bulky shape of his bag that he had something big in there.

    I got on the school bus about 15 minutes later and of course, the fourth seat was always empty for me and i noted with a tad of anger that someone had scribbled “go cut urself emo freak” and if you havent already guessed, emo freak is what everyone calls me. I sat down and rolled the music on my mp3 player up loud and for that half hour long bus ride, i was in peace. But as soon as i got off the bus i was taunted more and someone even tripped me and i hit my nose on the wall with a loud crack and everyone started laughing. I rushed into the building so nobody could see my tears. I went to my favorite place, a deserted classroom where all the lights were moved to a different room and i sat there and cried. I rocked back and forth and reached down into my pocket and felt the sharp edge of my switchblade. A little voice in the back of my head was telling me to do it but my smart side told me not to and for once, i listened to the smart side. As soon as i walked into first period the teacher started yelling about the blood on my shirt thta had come from my nose. After that the rest of the day went my in a blur.

    I was walking to go to the bus when a hand snatched me and pulled me over to the back of the building. I looked up and saw who it was, matt, the biggest and the worst of the football players.” I really hate emo freaks like you” he said and kicked my shin with his steel toed boot and i grabbed it which was a mistake. He grabbed me in a headlock and let me go only when i was about to pass out. Bob came around the corner and pulled the bulky thing out of his backpack and my eyes widened in fright, it was a crowbar. He gave it to matt and he kicked me in the ribs another time for good measure.

    editited for content

    editited for content

    The bus driver gave me a strange look when i got on but i ignored it. After the bus ride was over i ran all the way home and jumped down into my bedroom basement, pulled out my switchblade and slowly put it to my arm…

    there
    Facts
    .matt was really the worst football player over 6 ft and bulky with a six pack wasnt bad for a 7th grader

    .this DID happen in 7th grade im in ninth now

    .my favorite place was a real place till they locked it up in 8th grade

    .i DO take my switchblade to school even though your not supposed too

  • Shahz

    Hey peeps,
    Tay Tay – I didn’t mean that I hate footballers. I thought about what u said and what I said and I REALLY didn’t mean it like that. I don’t like it when people automaticaly stereotype other people that they don’t really know and that’s what I did. That’s basically my apology….and did you purposely say ‘O Bomb Us’ instead of Obama?!
    What? – I really like your story. Keep writing!
    Hey everyone else!(:
    Shahz:)

  • What?

    Hay Nighrider that was sad (insert frowning face here).
    Two things do any of you know what a Utah accent sounds like? It seems like no one does, and when they hear it, it drives them crazy (to tell you the truth we don’t pronounce our t’s so when we say dentist we sound like total idiots).

    And I got three reviews so, I will post more (insert cheers here). This is chapters 12,13,14,15, they’re kind of sad.

    Chapter 12
    Well you’re missing one major piece to my life and that’s my grandfather. He died. Yeah. It’s sad I know. I can’t help the fact I have a totally depressing life. Whatever… I guess meh would work here to.
    Well he died on Sunday, I watched them take the body away. It was nothing that I remembered him to be. He was always so full of life. It was hard to watch him go.
    The really sad thing, is that not only had I spent almost as much time with him as my own dad, is I only wanted Milo, the kid I thought as weird and “just a friend” who sent me a love note in kindergarten, to put his arm around me and tell me it would be okay. That this happens a lot. That God was taking care of him. That he was in a better place. He wasn’t there, he probably never would be either.
    I don’t want to be sad so I won’t say any more.
    Chapter 13
    You’d think a girl could get a break on Thanksgiving weekend after her Grandpa died right? After she got so depressed she literally broke down in front of her whole class right? A girl who has 4 performances in the coming week, right? A girl whose birthday is in less than two weeks, right? No I did not get a break. Death and sadness lived on.
    My dog died. Yeah. I’m not kidding you. The dog I had known all my life. My best friend ever, died! If you’re laughing, I would swear at you. But I’ll get my mouth washed out with soap. You know what I mean (I’m growling this.)
    Not to forget, my mom had decided that I needed to get these growths on my face taken off… so instead of putting my through surgery, my mom decided to have them zapped with a laser! Lasers not only really hurt. They also make what ever you zap look really big and bloated. So now I have a dead grandpa, a dead dog, a weird, grotesque looking face, and sever jealousy of all my friends because they don’t have any of this, excuse me but, CRAP to deal with. And I have to deal with all of that, and more. You see, my dad moved out so I kind of have to be the second adult and that’s a lot of pressure, I also have no bathroom and have been taking a shower in a closet (don’t ask how that works… it just does) since, like, August, and have a major performance coming up! You think you have it hard?! I have a lot of pressure. I also have to go to this thing called Mathcounts that’s an extra credit math program, my mom expects me to compete for that. That is a lot of pressure. Every moment of every day I feel like I’m disassembling a bomb and everyone in the whole world is watching! It is hard!
    Chapter 14
    That Monday I found out they saved my dog! Yeah! Awesome. The not awesome thing was the five hour rehearsal I had to go to. Jeeze! You think one bowl of ravioli would be enough! No I had two big bowls, a soda, some orange juice, and some milk. And I was still hungry.
    I was tired after, like, Tuesday because I kept screaming “You’re not allowed to leave until this dressing room until it is spotless!!!” you know when you get so exhausted you can’t sleep? That’s what was with me all week. I did that until Friday. Fun, but tiring.
    I can’t tell you about the actual performance because it’s copyrighted and I don’t want to get sued. But I can say this. You have never watched a real show until you watch it from back stage.

    On to Saturday.
    Saturday was both the day of my birthday party and my twin brothers. For his we played laser quest. For mine, we saw the movie Twilight which I might say was just about the best movie ever!
    I’ll start around 1:00 am.
    “Ella. Do you… like Alastair?” Paulina asked. She was cautious for some reason. Almost like she was poking a bear with a stick. No wonder they call it poking and prodding! I get it now!
    “Yes. Well I did. I don’t really do now. I’d go out with him if he asked.” I said lost in thought. “Why do you ask?”
    “He asks about you.” Olivia said.
    That’s when it hit me. Andrew was giving me reasons on why I should have Alastair as my boyfriend verses anyone else. Alastair likes me… I think. I was totally blank at this moment, except for the image of us dancing. I almost passed out. “Whaaaaa?”
    “He defiantly has a thing for you.” Hannah said. Kendrick still hasn’t asked her out.
    I just about smacked myself. Had I told him I like or liked him I would have a cute boyfriend, who has the same views as me, who’s smart and possibly likes me by now. That or a crushed ego. I’d take either, one of them was better than being in the dark all the time. “I just.” I paused to take a breath, I was hyperventilating. “I just don’t know how I missed that.” Okay that was a lie. We all know I’m totally oblivious to romance that includes me. It took me eight years to figure out Milo had a crush on me, and sent me a love note in kindergarten.
    “Ella.” Paulina said with bear poking delicacy. “What do you want me… us, to say if he asks about you?”
    “Tell him to talk to me first. Then if he doesn’t want to tell him I do like him… kind of. Tell him not to give me a hard time about it, if that was his purpose.”
    “Would you say yes if he asked you out?” Olivia blurted.
    “Probably.” I could lose every privilege in the book if I said yes, or lose my lab partner and politic buddy if I said no both are pretty bad.
    Chapter 15.
    I don’t know exactly when I started to like Alastair again, but I did. He was nice and smart, but he does have his quirks. Not to forget, he is very cute. And I mean very cute. He has dark hair, not black, brunet. And he has these eyes, these gorgeous eyes, they’re turquoise with specks and flakes of green, gold, and brown. If you’ve ever read that book about vampires, Twilight is it? He looks kind of like Edward. I said Milo was cute. He was asking me who I liked and I said Milo. Milo doesn’t even compare to Alastair! It’s kind of like whenever he walks in the room my heart goes all fluttery and I blush really deep. I sit in the back though, so no one can see me. But when he smiles at me, my knees turn to jell-o and to think I don’t really have the guts to talk to him because of the fact I messed up his perfect face. Social skills of a stick! That’s me. As my brother said, I will die alone and loveless. The odds of that happening are far higher than me not dieing alone and loveless. So let’s face the facts here. I’m a dork. Never going to get a guy. Maybe. Some, okay most people say I’m pretty. Guess I disagree sometimes… most times.

    Well my friends asked Alastair about three times. To all of which he said no, but that doesn’t mean he doesn’t like me right? He could be denying it, even to himself. I confide in him, and he confides in me, maybe that’s the way it’s supposed to be, right? Best friends is okay with me. As long as he never finds out, or does find out. I know I contradict myself a lot, and I’m crazy, and a dork but help? Support? Please?

  • What?

    Forgot this Happy world is save day!!! (Sorry bush fans.)

  • What?

    Oh, yeah… that guy I’ve been talking about, he knows I like him. Take that your own way.

  • Tay Tay

    I except your appolgie shaz. Yeah i puposely said o bomb us. i can say Borak will (probably) bomb uss if you prefer. That sounded smartelecky didnt it? Sry.

    Those chptrs were sad but good ritin.

    So does he like you back? :)

  • What?

    Tay-Tay, I don’t know. He said he already knew, maybe he decided he likes me better as a friend(that’s the reason I stoped likeing him the first time) or he’ll ask me out at the dance, which is in like three days. And I plan to ask him to dance, that will probably end up sounding like “Would you dance with me, it’s not ’cause I like you, well that’s half of it, but I am desprate!!! Please!” how does that sound. Don’t worry he should say yes, it’s kind of a rule. He might start liking me, well I am kind of a goody good and he doesn’t like that, but not to brag or anything, but I am majorly creative, and I guess smart, and perhaps pretty the last one I’m not too sure about.

    Well in the ever lasting words of Tigger (t-i-dubble gu er) ta ta for now!

  • MRFan

    Hey everybody !
    Just thought I’d let you all know this:

    IM DONE MY SCIENCE EXAM !

    You probably don’t care, but I am really happy its over. I think it will be my hardest exam, and its DONE!
    (Oh, and now that its done I will have more time to write my fanfic! Bet you’re all happy about that !)

  • Tay Tay

    What, dont say that. Just ask him “wanna go to the dance”. i geuss im a hipocrit tellin you to do that when I wont of course the dude i like dont know i like him :) but ive liked him for yrs! Hes found out 2 times but it all blew over in about a week.he hasnt found out yet this yr and i plan on keepin it that way!lol! But seriously, dont say your desprate if he already knows. :)

  • Tay Tay

    In my comment I ment to say ive liked him for 3 yrs.

    MRfan, i hate exams as much as the next person, so i feel your relife (and pain)

  • What?

    MRfan, I’m happy for you. Yes exams/finals do in fact suck!

    Tay Tay, you don’t go with a date to a Catholic school dance, it’s a show up and ask to dance, or be asked to dance by in general cute guys, though there are some creeps.

  • MRFan

    YES THEY DO .
    And I am done, ALL MY EXAMS !
    YAY !
    And I’m going to go write my fanfic, right now.
    :)

  • Tay Tay

    Oh what, well, is that a rule, cause i think some rules are just made to be broken. Not the ones from the Bible, or laws, but like stupid school rules or cluiqe restrictions or whatever. Its really stupid to go with the crowd. Dare to be Different is my moddo. Acctually my moddo is IM BORED but im not afraid to be different! Its what makes me well me.

  • What?

    I went to the dance, I just got back. My chrush didn’t show up though. I still had fun, Tay Tay, you just don’t go with guys, ask anyone who goes to a catholic middle school! you don’t show up with a date.

    Anywhoo to the dance it’s self. I danced with one guy, you know the charecter Jamil, yeah I danced with him. I have one question. So I’ll put you in the situation and you tell me what to do Kay?
    So your friend is standing against the wall, you ask him what’s wrong and he says that he has no one to dance with. Do you offer to dance with him, or do you match him up with someone else take into consideration you’re a dork but alot of guys you don’t know are staring at you and your friends say you look hot. So what do you say?! I did the 2nd one. And after that he asked me to dance, and I said yes(tay tay that’s a rule too) and he knew I like someone else and I knew he liked someone else, and that we could have been a couple, and a great one at that, but we met other people we had our hearts set on and wouldn’t settle for anything else. I felt old!

    One more thing, I will post more of my story if you review.

  • MRFan

    Sounds complicated. I just go with my fiends to dances. And we have a blast.

  • MRFan

    Sorry to interrupt this lovely conversations about dances, but ..
    WWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !
    THEY CASTED IGGY !
    GO TO IMDB.COM & SEARCH MAXIMUM RIDE .
    HE IS UNDER CAST .

  • Shahz

    Yo peeps! lol…..I agree with MRfan..complicated. MRfan, you’ve had ur finals already? so its the summer holidays for u? is it even summer wherever u r? I’m confused….sigh. Skool ends in July or something for me. I’m doing GCSE’s and they end in year 11. I’m in year 10. Anyways. YES, ITS FINALLY THE WEEKEND!!WOOT( I have no idea what that means. lol).
    Shahz
    p.s – I LOVE mangos(a random comment for ya there, lol)

  • MRFan

    Heeeelllooooo !
    THEY CASTED IGGY !

  • What?

    Shaz, you take simester finals in catholic school, and no it’s not summer here, you’ve seen me complain about snow and cold and yes I know global warming screws everything up and all but it in general is hot in the summer and snowy and rainy in the winter, speaking of rain that’s what’s going on right now.
    Just a random question for you Shaz before I freak out about the iggy casting and all, what part of the UK do you live in? England, Wales, Scotland or Norhtern Ireland? and do you have an accent? do you get alot of fog there? we only get so many foggy days in a decade because of the dry air and being a dessert and all.

    OMG the guy they casted for iggy is way cute, his hair is too red!!!Iggy has hair like my little short guy friend’s(notice the word guy. he calls me crazy alot) it’s just like Iggy’s. Not my other guy friend’s who has bright red curly hair.

    Now the random thing those of you who like those sideways smily faces here.
    :{)
    He has a nose and moustache! It’s soooo cute, my friend showed me that in media class.

  • nightrider

    i never go to school dance because i never find anybody i really like

  • MRFan

    AHH !
    I know ! (about the casting for Iggy )
    I dont think hes that cute, but i think hes a pretty good Iggy . Except I didnt picture his hair THAT red.
    :)

  • What?

    Nightrider I’m sorry, usually me neither. Ohwell it’s still fun!
    Okay something random, I figured out how to make a bunny and a chimpanzee on my keeboard, so here
    (\_/)
    (+.+)
    (“)(“)

    0(o_o)0
    (_)

    their soo cute, and I said review and I mean it!!! I don’t mean to sound rude or anything.
    What? out.

  • What?

    Uh, something happened with my bunny and my chimp, well you get it right?

  • Shahz

    Hey ppls,
    What? – I live in England in Kent, not too far from London:) I suppose u would think I have an accent. It hasn’t been foggy for quite a while. Your chapter/s were really good, keep it up!
    I’m gonna go and check out who they’ve cast for Iggy now!
    Shahz
    p.s. I thought Iggy was supposed to have strawberry blond hair..O.o…oh well:)

  • What?

    Why’d you post that so many times?
    You live in England, cool. I want to go to college there soooo bad, but Utah in genreal is pretty well, how do I put it lightly, not very bright, not the sharpest tool in the shed.
    And I love British accents! There’s a kid in the eigth grade/ year eight, in Maximum ride, Iggy’s age, who’s from England. Even though he’s a total dork, and a dweep (he plays dungeons and dragons and that kind of stuff, ugh! Sorry D&D fans on this site.) all the girls in that class, some in my class and some in the sixth grade like him, eeeeeeeeeeew!!!

    Nightrider, you sound like a nice guy, and you don’t have to like the people at the dances, you just go and have fun(I know I sound all sunshiny and smily, I’m not like this all the time, just most of the time, when I’m not like this I don’t do well, I won’t talk about it.) you’re a kid, you deserve to have some fun now and then.

    It snowed for two days straight! Yeah!
    Well, I have a science project calling my name and it can’t be ignored, you all should know how that is.
    Bye!

  • Tay Tay

    What, To start, HI IM BACK! Second, I just go with my friends and we dance around the boys and all the girls dance together! When we do the Macharaina all the guys sit on the lunch tables behind us and they follow our hips (; if ya know what im sayin………no not that bad..they just look.

    SHaz, I wouldnt suggest giving that much personal info on the internet, so many creeeps are out there! YOu dont have to listen it was just a suggestion.

    What, I thought your bunny and munky was cute. i only know th simplefone faces. :), (;, >:(, :P, ect.

  • What?

    Well that’s okay tay-tay, you just have to play with it. Yeah there are creeps out there. I thought one of my best friends form school was one of them.

    One more thing, I served my first detention today, yeah yeah, What?/Ella (that charecter is based off of me) at a detention?! (gasp) wasn’t that bad.
    Bye!

  • Tay Tay

    Im soooooo excided! THe boy I use to talk bout, the emo, we had a really really close encounter! At this party at a skatin rink, i stood up. the dude was like “ha ha im still taller than you even on skates!” I folded my arms and stood straight up, he stepped closer to me and i said, “see im taller” hesteped close enough to where our toes touched and chests, he leans in, but my friend puts her hands in our faces, pushes us apart and sain “scuse me” I was so emberresed that i didnt talk to the dude until i tripped and he accidentally (I hope) put his hand under my CHEST to catch me. I havent talked to hin=m all week cause i start blushin and bein all flirty thats sooooooo not my rep at school

  • Tay Tay

    BTW what, detention aint that bad. I mean once you get past the reallyreally really boring part, it aint so bad, at my school anyway, we get our homework done and catch up on reading. The only bad part is you cant talk! THe only music or sound we can hear is the 7th grade band practicing! FYI the most annoying sound youve EVER EVER EVER heard!

  • Shahz

    Hey ppls! I agree with u on the Internet safety thing, Tay Tay:) I don’t think I gave away much, so I’m good…..I hope. Anyway, sounds like quite a week(?) for ya…..(wiggled eyebrows)lol…hope that didn’t sound pervish. Where’s MRfan? and Nightrider? and Voltaire? :(…..eh….
    Shahz
    p.s. post soon….EVERYONE.:)

  • What?

    Shaz you still have us!(Yeah, we’re boreing and I miss all of them too, but it is the weekend so they’re bound to come out of their hiding places, so just watch)
    Tay tay, it’s nice that happened, although if I were you I would still be hyperventlating, so you’re doing awsome! And yeah I am having boy problems. I like the guy I have been liking then this other guy who I kind of like too, heard about my liking the first guy(thanks to my friend, after this guy and I got into an argument about which place had better deffinition of the word frenquency, stupid I know, not to forget I had the whole group behind me so he should have just shut-up but he didn’t, and she started talking to me as soon as he left) and then the other guy looked shocked that I liked someone, I’ve only had like 5 or 6 crushes that lasted more than 2 hours. just to say this is the guy I danced with a week ago. Agh! being a teenager sucks!
    I’ll try to hang on to the little sanity I have left.

  • nightrider

    ok let me put this lightly….

    i got hyper on chocolate which makes me act like im on crack and tried to do a cartwheel down my ex gf’s stairs and yeah split my bone in 3 peices and twisted my foot almost 180 degrees so yeah im stuk in a hospital bed

    and when did this become http://www.needcrushadvice,comehere!.com im gettin a little tired of hearin o hes so cute and stuff like that so no offence can u possibly find a better topic

  • What?

    Yes I certanly can nightrider (sorry you’re in the hospital, maybe you should just not eat choclate). So in honor of you here’s this question: Have you ever broken a/some bone(s), sprained something or cracked something. If your answer is no to all of these, what is the worst fall you’ve had? Or what bone do you think would be the coolest to have broken(if you say leg I will be mad!)

    Okay, I have broken my toe(I was five) jumping on an inflatable chair like the little idiot I can, and sometimes will be with my brother. When I broke it my mom didn’t believe me and waited for 2 weeks to go to the doctor’s. I then broke my leg icecating in the summer(don’t ask) when I was seven. It was a sprail fracture, had I put any weight on it(like my dad and aunt insested, they thought I was faking too.) I would have had to have surgery, I was in a wheel chair for 3 months and this is where I lost my best friend, she thought my pain killers were illeagl drugs.

    Well that’s it, are you happy now nightrider?

  • MRFan

    Okayy .
    How y’all been !? (no, i am not from tennesse)
    Tay Tay, your encounter with that guy was SO CUTE ! And to be honest, i thought that stuff only happened in the movies .. or very rarely in the real world. ANYWAY: SO CUTE ! :)
    Yes, i have broken a bone. My collar bone when i was one.
    And one other thing before i go..
    I posted another Chapter for my story, and I need you guys to review ! I have FOUR chapters ready to go, but im not posting them until you REVIEW ! :p
    Also: Sorry to hear about your incident Nightrider. Being in a hospital sucks . I have always hated it. Even visiting someone. They are probably like, the cleanest places, and yet I feel so dirty in them. Like, i hate sitting in the waiting chairs , ’cause i feel like im gonna catch something. Reading MR hasnt helped with that either xD. Sorry, that was my little rant and wht im really trying to say is ‘hope you feel better!’
    Bye ! 😉

  • DES

    YAY my computer works again. so whats new blog people. Whats up everyone i kno i haven’t been on in a lllllllllloooooooonnnnnnnnnnggggggggggg time so HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)(:

  • Tay Tay

    No i aint broke no bones, but i did sprain my ankle runnin from 3rd to home in the championship softball game it sucked because i got 3 people home before i fell so they cut me slack and counted it as a triple and the last person stricked out so we lost the game and i didnt even make it Home!

    But seriously who here plays softball baseball basketball football or any sport!

    And plus i only thought it happened in movies too but it was too good to last i geuss, why did she come betwen us! I was so close to him but………. ah GOSH! Im mad! But just for the sake of nightrider (sorry bout the hostpitle thing, I couldnt say no to chocolate, and i have a sugar hangover from my super bowl party, girls can like football too, Stealers WON!) I wont ag on that subject!

    I started on twilight 2 days ago and im almost done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    WA HOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • What?

    Okay, scienc fair in three days!!! I’m seriously biting my nails, I have to pick something to wear out and Valentines is comming up! I’m not going to bring that up though.

    Just a quick thing, I like Maximum Ride way better than Twilight, so you probably will be disappointed in the rest of the seires (It’s way popular here in Utah because she’s the author is LDS and went to BYU, which I can’t stand by the way they suck at everything! but if I say that here I sometimes get mauled by teenage girls) and some people think I and my best friend looks like Bella, I’m ashamed now. She threw her life away for a guy! And it wasn’t even a real guy it was a vampire! That’s off my chest and I found my copy of the first Maximum Ride! Good omen!

    Bye! I have Ballet now! (yes I dance)

  • Tay Tay

    I dance too. Hip hop, baton, tap and jazz!I know alot of classes!And my science fair is goood and DONE! i lost as usual but its over and im happy! It sucks because im in this pagent thing, (im not a girly girl but i love the stage and i find as many excuses as i can to be on stage) and this year we have to have a sit down with the judes for an interview, and when i get nervous i say Like, aint and ah alot!

  • Tay Tay

    The good thing about the pagent is i get to feel like im liked. People all over the state are watchimg me on stage and i like it. DOnt take this the wrong way but being in pagents make me fell like. well. a girl. I get to go dress shoping, get my hair done, get manipetties, and i get a lot of attention at school! I love it!

  • MRFan

    That sounds really cool ! (about the pageant)
    What? I like MR better than Twilight too . The twilight series got worse and worse with every book :(

  • nightrider

    i never read twilight but if u wanna know the only thing i havent broken or fractured is my spine and my neck and well the rest has been broken at least twice

  • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AHtYQE nightrider

    o yeah some songs comein up

    disturbed enough i mite of messed up

  • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VhbCkcU nightrider

    told u ill try again

  • nightrider

    k i messed up again

  • What?

    Okay, I love being on stage too. But I do musicals and stuff. I love it!

    You broke your spine!? I have enough stuff to worry about and now I’m going to worry about you to! And a broken neck?! You could have died. Let me stress that word DIED!!!!

    Well, I have writing to get done. speaking of that review my story! I lke three reviews because there’s two people who always do it but I need one more. So review! (messager 1129) Thanks!

  • Tay Tay

    TWILIGHTis Not the worst series! I admit its not half as good as MR but its still good!

    Im sooo happy! Well kinda happy! I got checked out of school early then i got out of school for bein sick and today we were out of school for snow! I <3 snow! Plus i was out of school for 2 and 1/2 days!!!!!

    PS i do the plays too. i can bearly sing but im in a few musicals

  • What

    Cool, we don’t get snow days here, even if there’s three feet of snow and it’s still a blizard we don’t get snow days.

    This is might be my last message for a little while (or ever depending on what happens) so, bye.

  • MRFan

    Why would it be your last message!?

  • Shahz

    Hey ppls! Wow, I missed out a lot! Monday was a snowday!! It’s now Friday!! No more school!! I have broken my ankle, that’s all, so I’m quite lucky! Unfortunatly, I am clumsy, not as bad as Bella in Twilight but I am….anyway:
    What? nightrider meant he has broken every bone APART from his spine or neck, so don’t worry….too much. I wasn’t really shy up to year 9, I wouldn’t mind that much about going onstage but know I’m……not a huge fan of meeting new people all the time or going in front of people. I’m gonna stop talking about me now.
    Feel better nightrider:)
    Shahz:)

  • What?

    Thought I got grounded, but I didn’t. So I’m fine.

    Okay, Shaz that makes my life a lot easer.

    I’m going to post some more of my story, but if you don’t review, I will be mad Okay?

    Chapter 15.
    I don’t know exactly when I started to like Alastair again, but I did. He was nice and smart, but he does have his quirks. Not to forget, he is very cute. And I mean very cute. He has dark hair, not black, brunet. And he has these eyes, these gorgeous eyes, they’re turquoise with specks and flakes of green, gold, and brown. If you’ve ever read that book about vampires, Twilight is it? He looks kind of like Edward. I said Milo was cute. He was asking me who I liked and I said Milo. Milo doesn’t even compare to Alastair! It’s kind of like whenever he walks in the room my heart goes all fluttery and I blush really deep. I sit in the back though, so no one can see me. But when he smiles at me, my knees turn to jell-o and to think I don’t really have the guts to talk to him because of the fact I messed up his perfect face. Social skills of a stick! That’s me. As my brother said, I will die alone and loveless. The odds of that happening are far higher than me not dieing alone and loveless. So let’s face the facts here. I’m a dork. Never going to get a guy. Maybe. Some, okay most people say I’m pretty. Guess I disagree sometimes… most times.

    Well my friends asked Alastair about three times. To all of which he said no, but that doesn’t mean he doesn’t like me right? He could be denying it, even to himself. I confide in him, and he confides in me, maybe that’s the way it’s supposed to be, right? Best friends is okay with me. As long as he never finds out, or does find out. I know I contradict myself a lot, and I’m crazy, and a dork but help? Support? Please? Chapter 16.
    “Wow the first snow storm of the year. Pretty isn’t it?” I said, I was directing my words to Alastair, but Elizabeth picked them up.
    “Yeah. And all on your birthday too.” she said. No offence to her but… she’s kind of an airhead.
    “Shut up! I hate my birthday! I hate the extra attention!” I said.
    “Happy birthday! Why do you hate it?” Alastair said. My heart did the fluttery thing again.
    “I hate attention. You know me well enough to know that.” I said.
    “Now that I think about it I don’t know you at all. I’ve known you for a whole five months, and I don’t know a thing about you.” His smile disappearing.
    “You know me well enough.”
    “I know you’re a democrat, that you’re smart, you’re Lutheran, and that you don’t look people in the eye when you talk. That’s about it.”
    “That’s all yo