The Boston Globe’s filter
and the Washington Post’s Connolly out of kilter.
I would be interested to hear what Tarzana Joe has to say about this. As I see it, the metrical cadence is terrible, the parallel imagry of two newspapers is, at best, symetrical, the word “Connolly” is superfluous….but at least there is a rhyme.
I am reminded of my favorite public poem from Logan, Utah:
Keep trying, Hugh. Two strikes left