This Little Tourist Goes to Market - Page 2

The sea of knockoffs proves too much for the women who accompany my father and me. In what seemed a split second, all six of the women, none older than seventeen, scatter to the winds. Each carries more money than some of our fellow shoppers would see in a month. The better part of our spending money is in the safe at our hotel.

My father and I decide to split up. In that moment every one of my muscles tensed, my nostrils flared, and my brain was half-drowned in a sea of adrenaline. Ours is a very fragile sort of safety. Eventually, we find all of them again. They’re a bit conspicuous.

It’s a long walk back to our hotel.

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Brian Burns is a Professional Writing student at the University of Oklahoma. In the summer, he lives with his family in Fort Worth, Texas.

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  • 1 - Steve Burns

    Oct 19, 2007 at 3:36 pm

    Very well written Brian. I believe you captured the essence of the market perfectly. I could almost see the pirated DVDs.

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