Exhibit Review: Artist as Critic of Own Work - The 2006 Everson Biennial

Leaving the 2006 Biennial, which ends on August 20, at the Everson Museum of Art in Syracuse, New York, no one painting or photograph lingers in the mind. Not Amy Ciesielski's wonderful photograph (Untitled #5) of a woman's well-manicured hand subtly reaching toward a man's rough one. Not Alyssa Foos' giant, gnarled ball with sticks (Knitted World Object). Not the Miranda July quirkiness of Rebecca Murtaugh's To Mark a Significant Space in the Bedroom #1, which rendered Murtaugh's bedroom completely covered with neon pink, orange and yellow post-its. 

Instead of thinking about the images, I was distracted by the placards.

Next to each work of art hangs a placard with, in addition to the usual information -- title, artist -- commentary on the piece by the artist. The pretension displayed in most of these commentaries outweighs the potential power of the images themselves. And this year's theme, "Beauty Is in the Eye of the Artist," lends itself to unlimited possibilities for pretension or triteness.

For example, LaFevre's Adirondack Dawn is a beautiful photograph of a twisted tree against a vibrant orange sunset. And then there's the placard, where LaFevre credits his photographing nature to his desire to glorify and spread the word of God. The photograph suddenly transforms from a piece of art to a picture you would find in a church calendar. If an image causes one to believe in God, then that's fine, but being told that you are supposed to get out of an image that God exists is evangelism.

Peter Forbes' self-portrait, Beauty Is in the Mind of This Beholder (original, yes?), is a photograph of the artist with his face squished against a transparent surface. The placard reads, "My artwork is a vehicle for my creative expression and I find this beautiful!" All three sentences in Forbes' statement, by the way, end in exclamation points, the last one being "That is beautiful!" The placard makes the mildly amusing image insufferable in the exaggerated earnestness of the placard. It's easy to squish your face and claim this is creative expression and claim that this is beauty as a way of either mocking the term beauty or expanding its definition.

Ryan Syrell attempts to do this, too, with his painting Arrows, a collage of kitsch artifacts such as smiley faces and Daisy Ducks. In his description, Syrell basically describes his piece as a critique of the grotesque with which society has become obsessed. But what's with the pair of breasts then in the picture? What is Syrell telling us by putting boobs and a woman's arched torso in his collage? Is he likening the female form to the crassness of materialism? Placing the female form in conjunction with Trapper Keepers and cartoon characters, in a painting described by the artist as "grotesque," is highly insulting and misogynist.

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Raquel is a graduate student studying arts journalism at the Newhouse School at Syracuse University. She has written about fashion for Women's Wear Daily and Pittsburgh City Paper, film for Metro Times Detroit and literature for PopMatters. …

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  • 1 - Manny jakel

    Aug 25, 2006 at 1:35 pm

    COULD SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME WHO IS DANIEL JOHNSON.

  • 2 - Ryan Syrell

    Oct 03, 2006 at 2:37 pm

    Ms. Laneri,

    I hope to keep this exchange short and direct. If the word "grotesque" was used in conjunction with the content of my work, it was most definately not by my doing. With that being said, I would very much appreciate it if you would remove the misapplied term 'misogynist' from your article, as I find it unbearably offensive and off target.

  • 3 - Raquel

    Oct 03, 2006 at 3:13 pm

    Mr. Syrell,

    A review is an opinion, or someone's interpretation of a work. Every viewer interprets a work of art in a different way, whether it is the "right" or "wrong" way. I sent an e-mail to my editors to see if they would strike that last sentence that offended you. I'm sorry: I did not mean to misrepresent your work, merely to offer my humble opinion.

  • 4 - Bonnie

    Oct 03, 2006 at 3:30 pm

    Raquel, don't back down so easily. If you thought the work expressed a hatred towards women, you have every right to say that (and I would imagine you didn't throw around such a vehement word lightly, right?). I'd be curious to know more about why you reacted so strongly to the imagery of the painting.

    That said, without having seen the painting, I can imagine how this might have been intended as a comment on the commodification of women's bodies, rather than as a further perpertuation of such action. And I can imagine the other way around, too. This exchange has certainly piqued my interest in Arrows.

  • 5 - Chris Beaumont

    Oct 03, 2006 at 3:45 pm

    If that was your reaction, your honest reaction, I would leave it. to remove it would be a strike against your integrity as a writer. We are here as critics and writers, not to conform to whatever the artist did or did not intend. We cannot interpret intentions, just with what we are presented with. If the artists takes issue, perhaps he/she should make his intentions more clear in his/her work.

  • 6 - Raquel

    Oct 03, 2006 at 3:55 pm

    "I can imagine how this might have been intended as a comment on the commodification of women's bodies"

    Yes, I can see that too, and I thought about that when trying to grapple with the work. Yet, if the image stands for the commodification of women's body, why don't the other images function in that same way? Are the Daisy Ducks and smiley faces commenting on the commodification of Daisy Ducks and smiley faces? Why wasn't there a counterpoint? A cartoonishly large penis, for example. Today, the male form is lampooned just as frequently as the female form.

    As a woman, the painting perturbed me, and I had a very strong reaction to it. This doesn't necessarilly mean that the artist meant to have this effect on me, but merely that this was the reaction I had to these images presented in his painting. And this was my interpretation. Perhaps someone else saw it and saw something different, but as a female, I felt under attack.

  • 7 - Ryan Syrell

    Oct 03, 2006 at 4:26 pm

    I very much appreciate your response Ms. Laneri. I want you to know that I take no issue whatsoever with any criticism of artwork, I simply felt as though the phrasing based around the term in question came across as a personal attack, and not as art criticism. I am very much on the side of non-censorship, but I would also like to keep information from becoming confused. I am not at all worried about misrepresentation of work, since that is unavoidable. I respect your medium, I hope to not stifle your opinion, and I aim only to get you to separate the art from the artist.

    In response to other comments, I am in no way attempting to "defend" a painting. In order to function properly, writers and artists can not cater to one another (To make things clear, I am both a painter and a writer of art criticism, and I understand the integrity for which both mediums strive). I believe that I have simply taken issue with the means by which the term "misogynist" was arrived at. I want only to draw attention to the fact that a work of art criticism had begun to draw dangerously close to an innaccurate critique of the character of the artist himself.

    I have absolutely no right to change Ms. Laneri's opinion of the work, nor do I seek to change her opinion. My apologies for the meandering quality of this response. I hope that this makes my intentions clear. Thank you.

  • 8 - Ryan Syrell

    Oct 03, 2006 at 4:32 pm

    Sorry, I just read your most recent comment, and can offer some insight. The painting that made you feel under attack, was part of a much larger series of works, which contained many references, to both male and female anatomy, both discreet and overt. At this point, the curator of the Biennial removed "Arrows" from its context within the series of paintings, and set it up as a kind of blatant and bizarre comment of femininity, which it was never intended to be. Thus are the pitfalls of shows of this sort.

  • 9 - Raquel

    Oct 03, 2006 at 4:33 pm

    Mr. Syrell,

    I am happy that you responded. Art is all about discussion and oftentimes the discussion is more rewarding than looking at the painting and keeping your feelings to yourself, or articulating your feelings but then having no one to react to them. And that's why websites like Blogcritics offer a forum where people can react to a critic's interpretation of an artwork and offer his or her own take on it. I'm thankful for this discussion; it made me revisit your work again, and it made me think about the role of the critic: it has been most fruitful.

  • 10 - Rebecca Gardino

    Nov 13, 2006 at 4:55 pm

    Raquel,
    Did you know that the artists did not make the comments about their own art because they wanted to? It was a requirement to enter the show. London Ladd was smart to not give a comment. Most artists I know don't even like to talk about their art. Because it is very personal. I agree that the comments distract from the art itself. When I looked around the show, I read a few, and got turned off immediately. I also got turned off by my own comment! So I stopped reading and decided intead to enjoy the art, eat, drink and be merry! I really wish we never had to write them.
    Sincerely,
    Rebecca

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