72 Hours Raw In Dublin Part Seven - Page 8

And the two of them, the fella and the lass, they're laughin, happiness and fulfillment solidified and risin up around them.

And in the middle... In the middle the reflection that was supposed to be there in the first place, it slowly forms against the purple, whispers rising from the fellas either side headed towards this notion in-between.

And a fella's own face looking back, and it's Oasis on the stereo, Liam Gallagher fresh off that debut, the veins risen on the neck an cross the forehead, he's sayin;

"I'm older than I wish to be,
This town holds no more for me
"

And unpause.

Sinéad puts her arm around me, and I'm sayin "Thank you."

And I'm sayin "You're special."

And then lowerin the head, and looking at the feet on account of I don't wanna see.

And the blue risin from the black.

And freeze-frame.

And End.

Thanks folks.

Read The Whole Tale Right Here.

The Duke resides at Mondo Irlando

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  • 1 - DJRadiohead

    Oct 26, 2005 at 5:03 pm

    ... as the first strains of "Waltz #2 (XO)" begin to play...

    Aces. Absolute aces. I want a flat in Mondo Irlando and to never attempt to write again so as not to embarrass myself.

    I guess what I am saying is... I enjoyed the fuck out this series of yours, Duke. Really, really did.

  • 2 - Aaron, Duke De Mondo

    Oct 26, 2005 at 5:20 pm

    DJ, thank you, man. i feel like some sorta purgin was goin on, feel kinda exhausted with it all an ain't a hundred percent sure if it's any good, but nonetheless, feels like some sorta Full Stop's been issued, for sure.

  • 3 - DJRadiohead

    Oct 26, 2005 at 5:30 pm

    First let me assure you it was more than good.

    I think I understand what you mean about the sense of... 'relief.' That sense you get when you finally finish the work and put it out there... a feeling only intensified when work is of a personal nature to you. There's an excitement and a terror and a thrill and a panic all happening at the same time and it is fucking exhausting.

    Just wait til the others who have followed this saga check in. You're going to get kudos out the wazz. Of course, if you're anything like me, you'll appreciate the fuck out of the kind words and praise all the while not believing one fucking bit of it.

    Regardless... I loved traveling along with you and Sir Fleming et all.

  • 4 - Bennett

    Oct 26, 2005 at 5:31 pm

    Yeah, I'll second that thought. Thanks Duke, it was a wild ride.

  • 5 - Aaron Fleming (Sir)

    Oct 26, 2005 at 6:42 pm

    Yep, absolutely fantastic. That last section is so wonderfully poignant.

    God, it seems like years ago, or maybe another dimension, or, even, a dream. Geeky glasses, sigh.

    "fella with the daft blue velvet jacket and the Clerks t-shirt" - Hahahaha, monstrous hilarity at that self-deprecation.

  • 6 - SinĂ©ad

    Oct 27, 2005 at 9:56 am

    the jacket was BRILLIANT!!

    the clerks t-shirt was great also

  • 7 - DJRadiohead

    Oct 27, 2005 at 5:30 pm

    "Clerks" is a vital piece of American cinema. I need that t-shirt.

  • 8 - Aaron, Duke De Mondo

    Oct 28, 2005 at 2:54 pm

    ach, sorry folks, i been out the game for a day or two. it honestly means a hell of a lot to know you folks dug it, since i was unsure if i liked this part or not, an still think i'll re-write the end at some point. but it does a man good to know some folks understood what was goin on, an got some sort of enjoyment out of it all. heh, the entertainment provided by a fella's soul-scourging agony.

    and Sinéad, the jacket maybe was fairly brilliant in and of itself, but hung round my awkward frame, well, was like hangin a picasso on the side of a shithouse.

    acutally, that'd be fuckin brilliant.

    alright, was like watching Manhattan on a shitty tv with the picture panned and scanned and the aerial fucked so every now and again you get the news breakin through.

    (break on through etc etc)

    DJ, i'll lend you the shirt. it appears chicks dig it.

  • 9 - Greg Smyth

    Nov 12, 2005 at 10:27 am

    I can't believe I didn't comment on this at the time. Really enjoyed this whole thing and am honestly a little sad it's finished. Keep it up, chief.

  • 10 - Mat Brewster

    Nov 17, 2005 at 8:19 pm

    I'll second that, Greg. 'ceptin' I just now read this final installment on account of needing the time and the mind frame to finnish such a lovely tale.

    Thanks Duke.

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