Some Notes On Suji Kwock Kim And Notes From The Divided Country With A Close Reading Of "Leaving Chinatown"

Suji Kwock Kim reads well. She mentioned at her reading at the Berkeley Lunch Poems series in her reading April 7th, 2005 that she started in theater before she became a poet. Her presence and her speaking voice resonate with confidence. Also, unfortunately, she is heartbreakingly beautiful. An unfortunate distraction from the poems but an added benefit to the reading. My poor wife, she suffers the dog that I am. And now the world knows too. More details on the Berkeley Lunch Poem series can be found here: Berkeley Lunch Poems

In her reading she selected poems that illustrated tropes and themes off of type. What I mean by that is that Kim seemed amused and concerned that her friends think of her as writing two kinds of poems. Love poems and war poems. In her reading she hand picked pieces that were not so easily lumped into those categories.

Some of the poems from the reading that held my attention or that I felt affection for as she read them include the following poems: "Montage With Neon, Bok Choi, Gasoline, Lovers & Strangers", "Nocturne", "Drunk Metaphysics" and "Monologue For An Onion".

Upon reading her book Notes From The Divided Country I found flaws, flaws visible but not apparent during the reading.

The first flaw for me as a reader was the over-indulgence in historical tragedy, taking advantage of images of boys with faces blown off, corpses eaten by dogs and vultures and so forth.

I see this over-indulgence in many young poets who feel that the responsibility of their historical, social, and cultural context must influence their poems. They tend to overstate and make melodramatic their politics in their poems.

Even friends I admire like the Persian-American poet Sholeh Wolpe and the American Indian poet Sherman Alexie fall prey to this over-indulgence. The pressures on them to do so must be tremendous.

Fortunately Kim, Wolpe and Alexie are fantastically talented and their better poems outpace this temporal and political agenda leaving them to create poems of enduring value and worth.

As an example from Kim, in "Montage With Neon, Bok Choi, Gasoline, Lovers & Strangers" the poem survives the throttling of the poem by politics with its Hongo-esque litanies of elegant imagery. In fact, the handling of the imagery is in many ways superior to Hongo’s prosy incantations. The poem gets bogged down in prose lines like "the War Memorial in Itaewon counting / MORE THAN 3 MILLION DEAD, OR MISSING-- / still missed by the living, still loved beyond reason."

After the reader suffers through the polemic the poem is rescued by a romantic, illuminating list of bright objects:

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  • 1 - Eric Berlin

    Apr 11, 2005 at 3:24 pm

    No need to cap titles, David. Also, please create hyperlinks for outside links. -- Thanks.

  • 2 - V.B. Zarr

    Feb 18, 2013 at 5:29 am

    This review is condescending and painfully unaware of its own limited perspective. For some reason the reviewer thinks it's a univeral law of poetry that certain domestic (and frankly over-used) images are more meaningful than what he considers the melodramatic imagery of war. I found the poet's imagery stark rather than melodramatic when it referred to Korea's violent history. And, having lived in Korea, I can well understand the haunting imagery and images of hauntedness; the horror of war still floats and fogs the psyche on the peninsula. The reviewer is perhaps lucky to have lived in a bubble where such realities don't intrude, but I think here he is misdirecting himself, perhaps some readers, but I hope not the poet, away from what is powerful, raw and compelling in her work -- and towards what is trite, "tasteful" and "appropriate" to the parlor games of petit bourgeois dilettantes. The amateur psychology, and voyeuristic leers, directed at the poet up front of the review are so embarrassing as to be pathetic, but predictive of the windbaggery that follows. I wouldn't bother to reply, except that such self-inflated pomposity can have a negative effect on young artists finding their way, so someone needs to pop his pointless balloon of predictable pedantry and pontification. In defence of Sue Kwock Kim, but even moreso of poetry that engages the full spectrum of reality. V.B. Zarr.

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