Book Review: Humpty Dumpty, Jr., Hardboiled Detective #1: The Case of the Fiendish Flapjack Flop by Nate Evans, Paul Hindman, and Vince Evans

When I saw the title of the newest children’s series that I’ve recently come across, I couldn’t believe it. With all the new fantasy series and kids’ books hitting the shelves in increasing numbers every day, I considered myself jaded. I honestly didn’t believe I’d ever find anything new or fresh again.

Then I saw the improbable character featured in Sourcebooks’ latest offering: Humpty Dumpty, Jr.: Hardboiled Detective. Yep, you guessed it. He’s an egg.

But HD, Jr. isn’t just any egg. He’s a trench coat-wearing tough private eye with a knack for solving crimes and tracking down bad guys in New Yolk City.

The creative team (Nate Evans, Paul Hindman, and Vince Evans) have outdone themselves with this series in writing and art. The writing is nice and tight, filled with wordplay and puns that the targeted audience (7 and up) will love. Throughout the book, the art serves to draw reader interest while enhancing the story with comical notes and sight gags.

Just as in any good private eye story, HD, Jr. has a sidekick (Rat, a young street kid he joins up with in The Case of the Fiendish Flapjack Flop) and an antagonistic police detective, Lieutenant Rosebriar (an eyepatch-wearing rhinoceros with an attitude). The short chapters fly by, chockfull of witty dialogue that kids will love.

In his first case, HD, Jr. receives a panicked phonecall for help. Caller ID shows the call came from Pat-A-Cake Bakery. Sprinting into action, HD, Jr. grabs his skateboard and his semi-trusty magic wand (an eggbeater with mystical properties).

Once at the Pat-A-Cake Bakery, HD, Jr. discovers evidence of foul play and clues. It’s obvious that Patty Cake has been abducted. And the chase is on.

As I turned pages, I quickly became ten years old again. I fell in love with HD, Jr.’s scrambled world and his tough guy patter. I loved the way the book proceeds just like a “real” private eye movie would. Our fearless hero follows the trail, discovers possible villains, and gets embroiled between the cops and the bad guys. Not only that, but so much of the fairy tale world every kids becomes acquainted with while growing up get splashed onto every page.

The art is rich and vibrant at times, but drawn so simply that many young readers might find themselves encouraged to pick up a pencil and try their hands at drawing the characters. The illustrations add a depth to the prose story that’s invaluable for beginning readers.

Fans of Dav Pilkey’s Captain Underpants series and Kirk Scroggs’s Wiley and Grampa’s Creature Features will love this series because it feels familiar yet will take them into a new and familiar world. The first two books in the Humpty Dumpty, Jr: Hardboiled Detective just hit the bookshelves on October 1. The third book won’t be out until May ’09, but I’m already looking forward to it!

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Mel Odom is the author of over 100 novels. Winner of the American Library Association's Alex Award for 2002 and runner-up for the Christy in 2005, he's written in several genres, including tie-in novels for Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Angel, and novelizations of Blade, XXX, and Tomb Raider. …

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