Book Review: Book of Mornings, Raúl Niño, and The Perfect Moment by Raúl Niño

    The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you.
    --Rumi (1207-1272 CE)

It isn't often that you find an author who isn't clamoring for publicity, or take himself too seriously. Imagine my surprise and delight in encountering a Chicago area poet who feels that his work — strong, deeply felt and beautifully rendered — should just stand or fall on its own. 

Niño was the winner of the Sister Cities Award in 1992, an award that took him to Mexico City on a reading tour to help foster stronger cultural ties between Chicago and Mexico City. He was the recipient of the Significant Illinois Writers award in 1993, presented by Gwendolyn Brooks, Poet Laureate of Illinois. His poems have appeared in anthologies such as Power Lines, published by Tia Chucha Press, and New Chicano/Chicana Writers, published by the University of Arizona Press.

Niño is currently waiting for his Muse to return from holiday in Barbados (why there? she's got a lovely tan already), at which time they will exchange pleasantries, then get down to the important business of editing through his new manuscript, Rough Sutra, and if the sky remains blue, it may be published by MARCH/Abrazo Press in 2008. Raúl Niño lives in Chicago.


My dawn
is your dusk.
Your eyes close,
mine open.

Moon seduces oceans
to fill your shores.
Meanwhile, the gravity of lovers
strolls freely,
corralling history
into the palms of fidelity.
Soft laughter beneath your sky
makes the long journey toward mine.

My dusk
is your dawn.
My eyes close,
yours open.



    My hands are restless dreamers
    that awaken early,
    seeking your geography,
    two hardy explorers
    hiking over valleys and hills
    of your warm terrain.
    They need no light,
    these faithful adventurers.
    Memory guides them
    through receding shadows
    of familiar textures,
    soft nostalgia
    their only goal.

        Moonless sky begins to change,
        hues blend,
        merge lines of ocher,
        heaven and earth divide.
        These palettes of insomnia,
        are summer’s solstice hesitant shades.

        A restless night of desire is over,
        my lover sleeps in her foreign thoughts,
        loosely tucked between thin sheets,
        with the curve of her spine
        exposed to my memory,
        while the sovereignty of her bed drifts away.

        Landlocked I watch as
        navigating light fills her room,
        familiar patterns and textures return,
        clothes, furniture and floor,
        waiting to be touched again.



    Days take on the character
    of an unmarried uncle,
    hesitant to linger too long.
    At such an early hour, such a late thought,
    as a Moorish moon searches for a prayer,
    Nordic clouds descend for a closer look
    swift and low.
    Overhead a wobbly V formation
    falls across the sky like loose string.
    I listen to the honks and squawks
    of these geese fade away.
    And the wind picks,
    leaving a rain of leaves to bury my world in ocher.

        My son wakes up before me,
        so early that robins
        still dream.
        He crawls over
        his sleeping mother
        whimpering half words and
        scattered phrases.
        He pokes my shut eyes,
        pulls my ear with a strong grip,
        and makes a muffled cry
        pointing into the darkness.

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