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Book Review: Emotionless Souls by David S. Grant

Written by Clifford Garstang
Published May 11, 2008

A casual reader may find this slim short-fiction collection entertaining. It's filled with apparently young people who drink a lot (sometimes in Ireland, sometimes in Paris, usually in New York), occasionally take ecstasy or mushrooms or heroin, visit strip clubs, play practical jokes on one another, and are generally bored. The book is fast-paced (it is mostly written in present tense, which gives it an air of immediacy) and its twenty pieces average under five pages each, so the reader's investment of time is minimal. It's perfect, in fact, for the kind of shallow people who inhabit its pages.

However, a reader who is interested in the traditional elements of fiction - plot, setting, character - will most likely be disappointed. There is no attempt to build a fictional world or to even describe the real world in which the action (such as it is) supposedly occurs.

The reader won't be able to visualize any of these characters (except in the story where many of the male employees in an office have been disfigured by their kinky female boss) because there are few physical descriptions. And apart from boredom evidenced by constant drinking and drug use, there is little in the way of speech, thought, gesture or deed to indicate any kind of emotional depth, unless you count the practical jokers in several of the stories who at least seem to have some goal in mind. And I hesitate to call these fictions "stories" because for the most part they lack plot. Even where they contain forward momentum (the first and last stories are narratives of trips to Ireland and France respectively, with the days of the trip numbered, a device that drags the reader from beginning to end) they lack conflict and tension, so that there is little or no suspense and nothing to be resolved.

There is also little or no imaginative use of language here. Rather, the action is delivered in short bursts of stage direction (much of the book in fact reads more like a series of screenplay treatments than fiction narrative) without figurative elements that we expect in literature. What you see is what you get, for the most part, and maybe that's the author's point. The title of the collection is, after all, Emotionless Souls, and the individuals the reader encounters here do seem emotionless, not in any metaphorical way but as a reflection of a harsh contemporary reality. Emotionless and, it seems to me, soulless as well.

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Clifford Garstang writes fiction from his home in the Shenandoah Valley.
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Published: May 11, 2008
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#1 — May 11, 2008 @ 14:48PM — Kevin Eagan [URL]

I don't know, I'd have to read it, but your description of the book leaves me thinking it might be an interesting read. Even though you did not like the lack of plot structure, it sounds like this lack of plot is part of the point. Of course, it takes a really good writer to pull off an experiment like that, so maybe Grant's attempts just fall short. I may read this and see for myself...

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