Blogcritics Comments on Towards a New Revelation (Or, Why I Am Not a Traditionalist)

Comment by amba

Mon, 6 Mar 2006 20:28:36 EST

Thanks Christopher . . . I usually have to go through my prose a second time with thinning scissors. It is just an excerpt (two) taken out of a longer intro that has more of a structure and logic, so that's why it seems not to have a beginning and end.

Comment by Christopher Rose

Mon, 6 Mar 2006 20:05:36 EST

More simply, with an intro, main story and nice closing summary would be nice... Interesting ideas though.

Comment by amba

Mon, 6 Mar 2006 16:52:44 EST

That may well be, Bliffle -- it's a good criticism -- but where are YOU coming from? Is it that you disapprove of what I say and therefore dislike the way I say it, or are you receptive to what I'm saying but think I should say it more simply? Or don't you care to say?

Comment by Bliffle

Mon, 6 Mar 2006 16:40:34 EST

Or, maybe you're just drunk on words.