OPINION

Want To Write? Toughen Up!

Written by Alisha Karabinus
Published December 13, 2005
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Further, the discerning writer must try to take a step back and look at things from an objective perspective. No, I don't mean for the line editing — for the text itself. This is the most difficult part. Of course you understand why Janice would choose Trevor over Chuck — you know her, inside and out! Or from a nonfiction perspective, of course you know that the film Sin City was adapted from graphic novels by Frank Miller.

But do your readers know and understand these things? Knowing how much context to explain and include is what separates the proverbial wheat from the chaff when it comes to any sort of writing at all, be it a review, a short story, or an op/ed piece on the latest political scandal. If your readers can't follow what you're saying, they're going to read something else. It's that simple.

Finally, don't shy away from criticism — welcome it! Embrace it! Of course, we all run into the occasional mean-spirited critic. In my time in various critique circles around town and on the Internet, I've run into some real gems ("this is a complete waste of time, why even write it?"), but by and large, criticism has taught me more than any other writing class or generic advice. Why? Because it gives me a window on how others view my work.

So many writers roll their eyes at criticism and mumble, "they just didn't get it." We forget that our job, our first and only priority, is to make sure we put it out there so that they "get it." If the readers don't get it, the fault usually lies with us — not them.

If you're the type who scribbles in a journal and never plans to show anything to anyone anyhow, then forget it — do as you will, and sketch rainbows in the margins. But if you ever plan to write for an audience of any sort, then get tough with yourself and realize that you're not perfect. No one is. But that's okay, because it means you're off the hook. You don't have to be perfect. You just have to be disciplined and you have to persevere. Writing isn't easy. But it's worth it to make someone else feel what you felt, or think what you thought, if only for a moment.

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#1 — December 13, 2005 @ 01:35AM — Joanie [URL]

Excellent stuff, Alisha! I was fortunate enough to have a fantastic professor once upon a time, roughly sometime before the Dark Ages. Because he was also a published author and editor, he helped me fine tune my writing and find my voice. That made all the difference in the world.

Of course, there's always room for improvement. I like to think of everything I write as a work in progress. Even that which has already been published is subject to rewrites and revisions.

The litmus test is in how one responds to the criticism from those who know. If you wither and moan about the comments, you get nowhere. If you absorb and digest the information, you have endless potential.

Bravo, Alisha! Thank you for putting my very thoughts on writing and editing, as well as critiques, into words.

#2 — December 13, 2005 @ 01:51AM — Ken Edwards [URL]

^^^ what she said.

#3 — December 13, 2005 @ 01:56AM — alpha [URL]

Too true. All of it, Alisha. Writing is bad, photography worse. Everyone pulls it apart, adds their 2 pesos worth or, on the internet, can be as mean as they care to be.

I, too, happily had one of those professors (a night class at a lousy, Southern university in which I wasted two years) who made one really great impression: you cannot write unless you can allow your audience into your thoughts and feelings.

You tell a great story about how to write and why one writes and how important it is to slough off the barbs that come along while waiting for the occasional perceptive comment or beam of understanding.

I only wish I had learned the lessons you teach a great deal earlier.

#4 — December 13, 2005 @ 06:41AM — Victor Lana [URL]

Nicely said. Might I add the life of the writer is a solitary one. You mention "liquor," and the reason many writers drink is the solitary nature of the life (not that I'm condoning that as I sip my breakfast Heineken). Hemingway said that a bottle of wine was good company (especially when other writers aren't around).

Writing is a tough job. Pete Hamill said something like besides manual labor, writing is the hardest job there is.

So chin up after rejections. They just make us stronger.

#5 — December 14, 2005 @ 00:27AM — GoHah

well expressed, and you're absolutely right about the value of setting a project aside for that refreshing and imperative what-a-difference-a-day-makes perspective. And yet I often have to force myself to do that--I have too much of that befuddled, bleary-eyed "out of sight, out of mind" mentality, but in the end I'm always grateful that I took the time and didn't give in to that temptation to send something off right away. No matter how much I've deluded myself that I've achieved parity with perfection, there always turn out to be problems, from stupid litte oversights to more big-picture transgressions.

#6 — December 14, 2005 @ 01:16AM — Alisha Karabinus [URL]

Wow, guys! Thanks for the positive comments. I'm jealous of those of you who had great writing professors. Closest I've come so far is the teacher I had way back in the way back, senior year of high school, who was one of the first to explain to me that my writing really was vague. She was great. I keep thinking I might send her some clips.

I'm starting back to college next month in English/Creative Writing, so I hope I can have some of these profs myself.

#7 — December 14, 2005 @ 01:47AM — GoHah

This is just my opinion, and I'm odd man out here, but I think the value of writing courses may be overrated: I never took a writing class (not that I wouldn't benefit from it)--but I am glad I got a degree in English, so I think you'll at least find Literature studies a considerable help.

#8 — December 14, 2005 @ 02:26AM — Ruvy in Jerusalem

I got real lucky years ago and ran into a children's book author and former journalist who ran a writers' group. She had a basic rule - keep the comments positive. No "this stuff is so bad, you should tear it up," kind of remarks.

I learned a lot about having other people read your work to the group. It was very helpful.

And I noticed, being a very light drinker and a non-smoker, how important alcohol and cigarettes seemed to be...

#9 — December 14, 2005 @ 02:27AM — Ruvy in Jerusalem

And Alisha - you did a very nice job. Great article!

#10 — December 14, 2005 @ 13:21PM — Christopher Rose [URL]

GoHah: "stupid litte oversights" - ironic, huh?

#11 — December 14, 2005 @ 15:10PM — GoHah

Christopher: yeah, I could use a bit of that stiff-upper-lip reserve and all--some ambiguity and lack of clarity, too, would really confuse the issue and help not get the point across.

#12 — December 14, 2005 @ 16:04PM — SFC SKI

One of the hardest things is just to write at all, rather than put it aside, put off, or put away as not worht writing about. I find that writing is like priming the pump; it starts slowly but flows after a bit of effort.

#13 — December 14, 2005 @ 16:56PM — DJRadiohead [URL]

I want you to know I wrote my response to this like three days ago and when I came back I completely disagreed with myself which led to an awful headache after all the shouting and...

Good advice, Alisha.

#14 — December 14, 2005 @ 16:58PM — DJRadiohead [URL]

The discipline I am trying to learn (and am not very good at) is to write first and re-write second. I am so obsessed with getting everything just the way I want it the first time. I rarely give myself enough time to edit (as those poor BC souls who have seen my first-draft copy can attest) so I try to write and edit all at once. I have tried to convince myself to write it first and edit it later. I am getting better at that. It is both a time-management skill as well as a writing discipline.

#15 — December 14, 2005 @ 17:07PM — Mark Saleski [URL]

my first edit happens this way: i write everything with a pencil. as i'm writing, my 'inner editor' tells me that a phrase my not be so hot. i encase the phrase (ok, sometimes whole paragraphs) in brackets.

when it comes time to type the stuff in, i then deal with the bracketed material.

and hopefully, the time between the pencil scratchin' and the typin' isn't more than 12 hours, because my handwriting is just plain awful.

#16 — December 14, 2005 @ 17:14PM — DJRadiohead [URL]

I wish I did more writing with the old pen/pencil instead of always on the screen. I have gotten into the habit of mostly writing on the computer. I miss the idea of pen/pencil and paper.

#17 — December 14, 2005 @ 20:48PM — GoHah

apropos of nothing really, but I'm reminded of that scene in the movie "Love and Death" where Woody Allen, deciding to become a writer, is shown in full steretypical serious-writer regalia to the hilt: velvet burgundy smoking jacket, ascot, cigarette in long cigarette holder, standing by the fireplace mantle, roaring fire blazing. Allen, feather quill pen in hand, is in deep thought when the muse suddenly strikes; He gives spoken word--as he writes--to his sudden inspirational, epiphanic burst of a literary Eureka, which turns out to be a line--decades before it is acutally written by T.S. Eliot in "Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock": "I should have ...been a pair...of rag-ged claws ...scut-tling across the floors ...of silent seas." Allen looks at what he has written, pondering, but then with tempermental-artist disdain, rejects his effort--not recognizing greatness when he sees it and writes it--and crumbling up his paper and tossing it in the fire as he berates himself for what his poor effort.

#18 — December 14, 2005 @ 20:55PM — GoHah

(me#17: goofs--should've waited a day to look at it again and make corrections)

#19 — December 16, 2005 @ 13:40PM — Georganna Hancock [URL]

This book has been out more than three years. I've seen it referred to many times and never a negative comment. I wonder if that reflects who the author is more than the contents? Make no mistake, I devour King's books like a ravenous vampire wolf. I even have a copy of his masterful reprise of horror lit and enjoyed every line.

#20 — December 16, 2005 @ 20:20PM — Christopher Rose [URL]

Comment #3, by alpha, was chosen as Comment of the Day for Tuesday 13th December.

#21 — December 17, 2005 @ 17:08PM — lilg

is this book true

#22 — December 17, 2005 @ 17:16PM — Chris Evans [URL]

Great article

#23 — February 16, 2006 @ 23:46PM — Scott Butki

Great advice. I wrote as a newspaper reporter for more than 10 years and I'm still learning how to write better and tighter.
My challenge now is to unlearn some of what I learned in journalism.

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