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<title>Blogcritics: Comments on Ken Stringfellow - Soft Commands</title>
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<title>Comment by Temple Stark</title>
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<description>Caryn,

I threw this up on &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.cleveland.com/newslogs/musicreviews/index.ssf?/mtlogs/cleve_musicreviews/archives/2004_12.html&quot;&gt;Advance.net&lt;/A&gt;.

If you are committed to good &quot;first draft&quot; you might want to look over the copy on Advance.net and see the small changes - and sometimes big changes. The big changes are almost always done for space, however. NB: I&#039;m posting this message to all reviews, not singling you out at all. :-)</description>
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